A sweet dreamy groove. More of a head-bopper for me than a dance track, but I prefer animation-style dancing - which needs more variation and nuances in the beat. And the piece just sort of ends, not really a full fade-out or climax-driven hard stop of some sort. I wanted a bit more of a conclusion. I enjoyed it and listened to the end! But with a couple notes, for what they're worth, because we all have our personal taste and individual preferences.
I love this - I guess you could call it R&B (the genres just seem increasingly meaningless to me though) but the sounds are unusual and the vocal so wobbly and dreamy, it seems to escape all the cliches of R&B and forge its own path. Yeah it needs verses - and more variation, which the verses should take care of - so I'll be interested to see what you come up with to complete the track. Great start. I hate cliches and I love music that surprises me, as this piece does.
Yeah this is a sweet piece of work all around, gettin the love it deserves from the community. I could imagine heading north on the 5 through California farmland flippin through the radio, landing on this like unexpected magic on some Bakersfield station and cranking that mother up passing semis at 85 head-dancing in my car like a maniac. Love it.
There's a lot of goodness going on in this piece. I like how it moves, keeps evolving, doesn't get stuck and doesn't get boring. I like the early break and the use of silence (I like doing that, too). And then I like how the new section is very different from the first, yet somehow consistent with it. I love the voice. But I do think - since you described this as epic - that it could have been more epic with perhaps a bigger build, a layering of vocals, maybe rising in pitch, toward a climax. The comment right above this one I'm writing mentions that the resolution could be stronger and I agree. As I said, there's a lot of goodness in this, but I want to be knocked off my feet a little harder by the end.
Thanks for your words. And, yes... you're right about the end of the song. I'll tell you the same I said to the comment below: I was going to add an explosion sound at the end, but I'd already added it in the middle of the song. Sorry if the end is boring and weak. I'll keep your advice in mind and I'll try to improve. Thanks for the criticism and for listening!
(Sorry, my english is not perfect. I speak spanish).
Thanks!
Listened to two other tracks first and just couldn't get into them, then I landed on this solid track and slipped into the groove with a dip of the hip. Groovy groovy groovy. And the lady seems happy.
Thanks man,I appreciate the honesty and I'm glad you enjoyed this one,I have wondered about porn stars and if they enjoy it...I'm thinking the answer is hell yes! lol..cheers Dave :)
Got a great swing to it. Crystal clear mix - if I open my eyes the singer's gonna be right in front of me, I just know it - except I'd rather just keep them closed in my bopping head...
Man, I love this. So much unusualness going on - in sounds, in the beat, in your musical choices. Keeps it fresh and surprising, never boring, always sparkling. You are a talent.
Tight. Great groove. I was wanting a little more evolution in it but then the break came at 3:17ish and that bit of variation was the fresh breeze I needed to carry me through. Right on.
Great Response, I wanted to keep this really minimal to the bone, and test the patience factor , ha ha. working on an idea from this 'let the beat drop' to bring in a couple of well known old skool genre's but with a fresh editing twist ? I always talk good ideas but this time I am giving it the dogs bolox. thank you so much for the listen and critique Sir, I appreciate your time and will swing by you soon. Peace & Light :)
I like this a lot. For me, the volume on the vocals is fine - they cut through, and I like that they're a little under the music but I can still hear every word just fine.
Oh man this is f'in hot. Strange sounds orchestrated in a juicy river of groove. You really know how to mess with sounds. Picture me bowing to the ground.
Nice to meet you too, CitizenMofo :)
Thx a lot for your nice words .
In fact, I built the song around these percussions . 'Love the "Massive Attack" feel in them .
Happy you liked it,
Cheers .
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(Sorry, my english is not perfect. I speak spanish).
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plus every sound in this track has been uploaded here
you can mess with them too!
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Thx a lot for your nice words .
In fact, I built the song around these percussions . 'Love the "Massive Attack" feel in them .
Happy you liked it,
Cheers .
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