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CitizenMofo

CitizenMofo

Los Angeles, United States
Joined : 20th Jun 2013 - 12 years ago
CitizenMofo comments on tracks

CitizenMofo has posted 167 comments on other peoples tracks.

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CitizenMofo
CitizenMofo 6th Jul 2013 14:53 - 12 years ago

on Dance With Me by Darkreine
A sweet dreamy groove. More of a head-bopper for me than a dance track, but I prefer animation-style dancing - which needs more variation and nuances in the beat. And the piece just sort of ends, not really a full fade-out or climax-driven hard stop of some sort. I wanted a bit more of a conclusion. I enjoyed it and listened to the end! But with a couple notes, for what they're worth, because we all have our personal taste and individual preferences.
Darkreine
Darkreine replied 6th Jul 2013 - 12 years ago
Er... not sure what the difference is between a dance track and a "head-bopper", but I'm sure you do.

Thanx for listening
CitizenMofo
CitizenMofo 5th Jul 2013 07:21 - 12 years ago

on Room 42 by Enzotic
I love this - I guess you could call it R&B (the genres just seem increasingly meaningless to me though) but the sounds are unusual and the vocal so wobbly and dreamy, it seems to escape all the cliches of R&B and forge its own path. Yeah it needs verses - and more variation, which the verses should take care of - so I'll be interested to see what you come up with to complete the track. Great start. I hate cliches and I love music that surprises me, as this piece does.
Enzotic
Enzotic replied 5th Jul 2013 - 12 years ago
Thank you, your comment was definitely encouraging.
CitizenMofo
Yeah this is a sweet piece of work all around, gettin the love it deserves from the community. I could imagine heading north on the 5 through California farmland flippin through the radio, landing on this like unexpected magic on some Bakersfield station and cranking that mother up passing semis at 85 head-dancing in my car like a maniac. Love it.
FullCapicityMuzic
FullCapicityMuzic replied 5th Jul 2013 - 12 years ago
"Cranking that mother up..." LOL

So glad you enjoyed it!
CitizenMofo
CitizenMofo 5th Jul 2013 07:03 - 12 years ago

on In the Fireline - Soleil Lune by SoraSolitudine
There's a lot of goodness going on in this piece. I like how it moves, keeps evolving, doesn't get stuck and doesn't get boring. I like the early break and the use of silence (I like doing that, too). And then I like how the new section is very different from the first, yet somehow consistent with it. I love the voice. But I do think - since you described this as epic - that it could have been more epic with perhaps a bigger build, a layering of vocals, maybe rising in pitch, toward a climax. The comment right above this one I'm writing mentions that the resolution could be stronger and I agree. As I said, there's a lot of goodness in this, but I want to be knocked off my feet a little harder by the end.
SoraSolitudine
SoraSolitudine replied 6th Jul 2013 - 12 years ago
Thanks for your words. And, yes... you're right about the end of the song. I'll tell you the same I said to the comment below: I was going to add an explosion sound at the end, but I'd already added it in the middle of the song. Sorry if the end is boring and weak. I'll keep your advice in mind and I'll try to improve. Thanks for the criticism and for listening!

(Sorry, my english is not perfect. I speak spanish).
Thanks!
CitizenMofo
CitizenMofo 5th Jul 2013 06:54 - 12 years ago

on JOHN HOLMES by Planetjazzbass
Listened to two other tracks first and just couldn't get into them, then I landed on this solid track and slipped into the groove with a dip of the hip. Groovy groovy groovy. And the lady seems happy.
Planetjazzbass
Planetjazzbass replied 12th Jul 2013 - 12 years ago
Thanks man,I appreciate the honesty and I'm glad you enjoyed this one,I have wondered about porn stars and if they enjoy it...I'm thinking the answer is hell yes! lol..cheers Dave :)
CitizenMofo
CitizenMofo 22nd Jun 2013 03:11 - 12 years ago

on Ole fashioned love feat Patricia Edwards by Baggadub
Got a great swing to it. Crystal clear mix - if I open my eyes the singer's gonna be right in front of me, I just know it - except I'd rather just keep them closed in my bopping head...
Baggadub
Baggadub replied 5th Aug 2013 - 12 years ago
Hi CitizenMofo and thanx for your comment, I'm glad you like the song..
CitizenMofo
CitizenMofo 22nd Jun 2013 03:05 - 12 years ago

on Symphonic Tonic ft Holly by ThirdEye2009
Man, I love this. So much unusualness going on - in sounds, in the beat, in your musical choices. Keeps it fresh and surprising, never boring, always sparkling. You are a talent.
ThirdEye2009
ThirdEye2009 replied 22nd Jun 2013 - 12 years ago
Thank you for your kind words!
CitizenMofo
CitizenMofo 22nd Jun 2013 03:00 - 12 years ago

on We Call This by Cyto
I dig this. Tremendous evolution in the groove, unlike most of the pieces I just listened to... You keep it moving and that keeps me moving.
CitizenMofo
CitizenMofo 22nd Jun 2013 02:49 - 12 years ago

on LET THE BEAT DROP Mastered by Mosestone
Tight. Great groove. I was wanting a little more evolution in it but then the break came at 3:17ish and that bit of variation was the fresh breeze I needed to carry me through. Right on.
Mosestone
Mosestone replied 22nd Jun 2013 - 12 years ago
Great Response, I wanted to keep this really minimal to the bone, and test the patience factor , ha ha. working on an idea from this 'let the beat drop' to bring in a couple of well known old skool genre's but with a fresh editing twist ? I always talk good ideas but this time I am giving it the dogs bolox. thank you so much for the listen and critique Sir, I appreciate your time and will swing by you soon. Peace & Light :)
CitizenMofo
CitizenMofo 22nd Jun 2013 02:34 - 12 years ago

on Love Song by SeaDog
I like this a lot. For me, the volume on the vocals is fine - they cut through, and I like that they're a little under the music but I can still hear every word just fine.
SeaDog
SeaDog replied 23rd Jun 2013 - 12 years ago
Thank you CitizenMofo for listening and for your generous comment!

Peace & Love

Stefano
CitizenMofo
CitizenMofo 20th Jun 2013 23:27 - 12 years ago

on the-dont-run-song by drmistersir
Oh man this is f'in hot. Strange sounds orchestrated in a juicy river of groove. You really know how to mess with sounds. Picture me bowing to the ground.
drmistersir
drmistersir replied 21st Jun 2013 - 12 years ago
no need to bow
i don't sport a pinky ring
but thanks all the same

plus every sound in this track has been uploaded here
you can mess with them too!
CitizenMofo
CitizenMofo 20th Jun 2013 23:21 - 12 years ago

on my memoir by GalanticMusic
I like this a lot, but it feels like it just stops, rather than ends, or completes itself. Great up to that point -
GalanticMusic
GalanticMusic replied 20th Jun 2013 - 12 years ago
preciate it! and yea honestly i was feelin a lil lazy to finish it, i just wanted to see if ppl like it, iguess that was the motive lol
CitizenMofo
CitizenMofo 20th Jun 2013 23:14 - 12 years ago

on SunOfABeach by iSean
Cool track. Unique sound. I like how you have most of the background music muted behind the huge beat. And that little whining guitar note - genius.
iSean
iSean replied 26th Jun 2013 - 12 years ago
Thanks!
CitizenMofo
CitizenMofo 20th Jun 2013 23:11 - 12 years ago

on Ides of March II by JablesTheDon
Killer track.
CitizenMofo
CitizenMofo 20th Jun 2013 22:59 - 12 years ago

on Promised Land by janis71
Lovely voice. Tones from the heart. And I love the odd percussion, how it adds its own strange power which has a build. Beautiful piece of music.
janis71
janis71 replied 21st Jun 2013 - 12 years ago
Nice to meet you too, CitizenMofo :)
Thx a lot for your nice words .
In fact, I built the song around these percussions . 'Love the "Massive Attack" feel in them .
Happy you liked it,
Cheers .
CitizenMofo
CitizenMofo 20th Jun 2013 22:55 - 12 years ago

on In All Your Glory by BunnieRabbit
I love your smooth, smokey, sultry voice.
BunnieRabbit
BunnieRabbit replied 21st Jun 2013 - 12 years ago
Thank you for the kind words!

Peace!
CitizenMofo
CitizenMofo 20th Jun 2013 21:17 - 12 years ago

on Whats It All About by brillbilly
Dude, I love this piece! Delicious, sweet and juicy like summer berries. Total smiley time.
brillbilly
brillbilly replied 22nd Jun 2013 - 12 years ago
cheers man!,thats real kind of ya!
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