the vocals were made for another beat that transformed into the beat you're listened to here. It's a dumloop that's not intended for rap, that's why lol
I actually don't mind the track, the only real problem I find is that the instruments seem to be very quiet which makes the vocals seem to stand out a bit too much. Other than that it's pretty enjoyable.
It seems you definitely have the idea there, I think really just filling in the open space would really bring it together. I'd probably recommend having a sub bass under your drums and then side chaining it to your kick. Always a necessity for house music. overall, really cool track!
"sound a bit all over the place"
So true. This was created back when I was just dabbling with FLS, not taking composition & mixing serious, nor applying mastering to most of my pre-2017 tracks.
I have a non-profit demo coming out May 4 (here & Youtube) with 3 new tracks. Its called TARGET PRACTICE. It's purpose is to be judged "musically" and "technically" by my peers so I can excel.
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So true. This was created back when I was just dabbling with FLS, not taking composition & mixing serious, nor applying mastering to most of my pre-2017 tracks.
I have a non-profit demo coming out May 4 (here & Youtube) with 3 new tracks. Its called TARGET PRACTICE. It's purpose is to be judged "musically" and "technically" by my peers so I can excel.
Your input will be welcomed if interested.
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