Great job on this one ;) Sadly though I am not really good with guitars and vocals are not really my thing. I hope you find someone to do this and I think this would go best with female vocals. Good luck finding someone
I owe you an apology behnam, what it mean't though was that I was talking nonsense and that's how most of the younger generations would feel about it when they view a comment like this, but I shouldn't have put that there. Wish there was an edit button right now.
never mind man ! We're friends and such things happens between all friends.and mistake , belongs to alive people Johny...& We are alive .......I'm a collection of greatest mistakes U can't even guess....take care buddy .___Behnam
Sounds emotionally, Could picture a number of things with it. It's like the track expresses that deaf people see many different things which influence them and the shortness expresses that they miss a great part in life too not being able to hear. At least that's how I view it but I am probably talking out of my ass
Johny good underestaninding of yours abouT deaf people , and the same moments while commenting on this trial and thinking to deaf abilities is so greaT & what I meant from this track . personalY it was more a sympathic sensation for me and didn't want to make them glad by justifications like adoring their other abilities...
Johny every year many of deaf humans are dying just because not hearing sound of a car in street by carless drivers..and althought I had no god and religion , buT I think if there was any hypothetical god , then he should be ashamed of deaf & blind people ..well , Mr Johny ! did U see U were talking to me and not your ass when you are commenting below my track ....this last sentence of your comment annoys me !! my friend,JohnY !U're so young, I know ,buT as I had seen U underestand very better than your generation ..and I didn't expecT U write like that way about writing comment for me ..!!U know I usualy write most respectfull and even longest replies my friend !i didn't expect my good friend Johny write that way about commenting for me...!___Behnam
fat wobbles, like them a lot (probably made in massive) I would say this is pretty decent but I miss the some melodic sounds which would do good for the song, and it might be nice to have some more aggressive drums in it to finish it
then it would sound awesome as hell ;)
jep you're right :D made in massive.
well, i wanted to do something like "darkstep" :P
just go to my youtube-channel.
all tracks I ever made are uploaded there.
"TheSchattenblut"
Sounds good, trance worthy track but I agree with some others it can be a bit repetitive sometimes so I think if you manage to blend in vocals it would be more pleasurable to listen to for the full 8 minutes of the track ;d Further it has great sounds and mixing give you credit for that ;) Hope you can reproduce something like this with vocals mixed into it
Love the piano in this, sounds very emotional. Nice lyrics and voice, but maybe end the song with a chord that echoes so it doesn't end like it was cut off ;d just saying
Nicely made but I was expecting some kind of dark sound to contrast the angel like sounds so the war between good and evil has some more contrast, doesn't really matter because then it wouldn't turned out to a hiphop beat but a cinematic or something like that.
I think it sounds great now, reading StaticNomad's comment you improved the intro I guess because it sounded very nice now ;) I am waiting for a rough electric like guitar that kicks into it but you already stated that you were going to add a guitar part extra from your friend. Don't know if others agree but maybe shorten the intro just a little bit found the suspense before getting to the main part kinda long but that's also of course personal taste
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Johny every year many of deaf humans are dying just because not hearing sound of a car in street by carless drivers..and althought I had no god and religion , buT I think if there was any hypothetical god , then he should be ashamed of deaf & blind people ..well , Mr Johny ! did U see U were talking to me and not your ass when you are commenting below my track ....this last sentence of your comment annoys me !! my friend,JohnY !U're so young, I know ,buT as I had seen U underestand very better than your generation ..and I didn't expecT U write like that way about writing comment for me ..!!U know I usualy write most respectfull and even longest replies my friend !i didn't expect my good friend Johny write that way about commenting for me...!___Behnam
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then it would sound awesome as hell ;)
well, i wanted to do something like "darkstep" :P
just go to my youtube-channel.
all tracks I ever made are uploaded there.
"TheSchattenblut"
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but lets just say C02 is running low lol
Thank you for taking time to leave your kind comments.!
peace man!
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I just do what i can when i can, coz sometimes i can lol
Big thanks for your ongoing kind comments!
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Good job on this one and hopefully we will see more
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