Not bad. The choice of loops is well made.
The track has a catchy "acid" line which sits well in the mix.
If this is your first "ok" track ever, this is definitely a good start.
Keep up the good work.
Domenico
Simply wonderful Behnam my friend!
I still have not found the time but I definitely MUST work on some of your wonderful guitar parts.
Hope to make it soon.
Ciao, Domenico
& I definitely MUST appreciate you for various times when I put you in trouble my friend & really wish some day I can be usefull about your music right in the same manner in which you are for me .it would be honoured to me to work with you & you know it & whish We both can become far from our jobs & missions & can pay more attention to our interests.thanx again & thanx again man.Sincerely.___Behnam
Hi Behnam,
This is a true masterpiece: I have simply to quote what the others have said before me. Wonderful piano, wonderful violin and I also loved the pizzicato part (?) starting around 1:55
Simply beautiful.
Chapeaux!
Domenico
Ciao amico Domenico & thanx alot for your worthy o adoration comment my friend , I should appreciate your kindness & I'm really glad if you've enjoyed it & Cin-cin .and about that strumming part I should say according to I'm minded to strumming technique & balcanic harmonies both in any cases,that part is myself favorite part in this track too,right in the same manner I'm glad if you've liked it .thanx alot again & my Auguri as always .___Behnam.
Hi Behnam,
This is a great song!
I like the arpeggio part, very interesting, but I really love the mid-part, where you play a very nice riff.
And yes, the voice is mixed quite low, but I think it gives a creepy touch to the song.
Good Work!
Domenico
thanx alot my friend for your kind comment .Donmenico I have an archive of my various years & olds in which I can hear & sometimes even laugh to my voice ( some times it's Non tanto bene) from when I was 14years old & I've recorded on those old tapes & untill rightnow. and your worthwhile Comment on such old trial will help me alot for the future .I appreciate your time & your comment ,I miei migliori auguri .____Behnam
You have a very interesting rap style. Also the lyrics are not bad (a little "generic" but interesting though).
Looking forward to hearing more from you.
Take care, Domenico
What a nice track!
I loved the vocal part: very "evocative"
And the guitar solo is well done: good sound, solid playing, interesting melody.
Very professional work.
Take care, Domenico
Wonderful piece of music Janis.
You voice is amazing, as usual.
The arrangement on the song is also "top class": really love the way everything is mixed together, the sound of the guitar, the depth of the bass (simple but powerful).
This is a 10.
Ciao, Domenico
Hi Domenico !
I'm happy you enjoyed it ;)
My friend Paul composed, played and mixed it as he always did . T'was the second song we made together .
Thx a lot for your very appreciated comment, mi amico ;)
Nice track man.
The vocal part from AJ is really convincing.
I love the atmosphere: the bass is simple but effective. The drums are very "shy" but that's exactly what the song needs.
And the acoustic guitars are very catchy (is it a synth-gtr?)
Good work.
Ciao, Domenico
Hi Clemens,
This song is very "catchy": it could be included in any radio program. The vocal part is nice and it is well mixed into the instruments. You made a potential hit!
Gruesse, Domenico
Very nice and gentle touch: I always appreciate mixes where there is "enough room" for everything. It sounds clean and very well balanced.
Good work.
Domenico
PS: if you want to try mixing one of my tracks, I can provide you the project file (I work with Logic).
Hey man, how's it going. Thank you for your ears and feedback. I really appreciate it.
As for mixing one of your tracks I would love to, but Logic is Mac based, I use Windows. So you would have to send me the 'Wav.' files and bpm of the song.
This is why I'm going to invest in a Mac so when projects like these pop up, I will have no problem mixing anyone's tracks. It would make like easier for both you and me.
If you're still interested let me know and we'll work something out. Peace man.
Beautiful bass sound.
The guitar solos are all interesting and well played (the first ones are a bit more "mainstream" and the last one is a bit more "exotic")
The track is very good: no doubt the product of two great musicians.
Thanks.
Domenico
Hi Behnam, sorry but my previous comment was not very clear: I actually really enjoyed the 5 minutes of this track!
I don't find it boring at all! I understand that you would like to add vocals to it, but the track is already veeeeery good. I really like it as it is: you have really good ideas!
I am really looking forward to hear more from you: keep up the good work.
Take care, Domenico
PS: if you are interested in a collab, just let me know ;-)
Domenico I should appologize you if I didn't underestand what you mean in your comment,& thank you about this new comment which helped me underestand wht does one of my professional colleague mean in his last comment.and else I don't know if you have recceived my message to ou or not(about that eastern piece),any way I wrote you anther message right now,just to tell you how much I would be honored about any collaboration possiblity with one of my favorite basists in looperman.thank you again & best wishes to you.___Behnam.
Hi Behnam,
I really enjoyed this track: I had to check on a dictionary what "hymnography" means... but that's my limit :-)
Regarding your music, I find it incredibly fascinating: maybe you could add a vocal part, but believe me, the 5 minutes really flew away.
You have a really fresh approach to music: the way you play with sounds is wonderful.
Thanks again for this nice piece of music.
Ciao, Domenico
I really appreciate your kind words & honesty in your comment my dear Italian Friend , I'm agree with you about duration,5min=300 seconds is too long & makes me tired too , but according to My collab request specially about lyric & vocal about this one , I thought it would be better to give this option to the vocalist who wants to sing it & also giving this right to who wants to write lyric , to select which parts should remain & which part should be deleted in this collab request track of mine.
so uploaded the long version here , to give this right to the vocalist to can select his-or-her choosen parts, set with lyrics & the concept.Best wishes Domenico.sincerely___Behnam
Hi Darkreine,
I really enjoyed the song: I think the label "rock" is the most suitable one, but this I agree with you, this is probably "something else".
I really like the distorted guitar: it has a nice sound.
May I ask you if this is a simulated amp?
Ciao, Domenico
PS: could you post the link to the youtube video as well? I am curious to see it.
Lovely: I really like the way you worked with the chord progression.
The rhythm guitar is very well played and I find all the sounds you used very "soft".
I am looking forward to hear one of our good singers here at looperman adding a vocal track to this.
Ciao, Domenico
This song build a very nice atmosphere: the beginning is a bit "darker" but then it opens up. I like this "changing" mood.
Thanks. And I love the piano with the echo: it builds movement in the slow melody.
Ciao, Domenico
Thank you again Ciao Domenico. This was actually my very first Looperman song composed entirely Of Looperman Loops. I still listen to this when I relax. It does help me relax. LOL
I really like it! The guitar loops are good and you build a lot of tension with the drums. Well done!
I would really love to hear it with some bass notes (something simple, just a "bordone") and a vocal line (maybe something in Ian Curtis' style) ... OK I am just thinking out loud.
Thanks for sharing.
Ciao, Domenico
I actually found these guitar loops here on Looperman. Had fun making it. I'm glad you like it. If you want you can download it and put some bass into it if you can.
Nice track: it's catchy and it is very well mixed.
It could be the soundtrack of an 80's movie (that's at least what comes to my mind).
Thanks for sharing.
Ciao, Domenico
Thank you mrwolf14. I composed this for my wonderful best friend and wife. She loved this piece, not because I composed it for her but for the same reason you described, it sounded retro. Let me know if you'd like this and I'll send you my email if I can. Still don't know how this works but I'm willing to share.
Nice Track. Liked the guitar.
Maybe you could "smooth" a bit the drums using a lighter drumkit (specially hi-hat and bass)... not sure about it.
Anyhow I enjoyed the song.
Thanks!
Ciao, Domenico
on Artificial Intelligence by bassMONZTER
The track has a catchy "acid" line which sits well in the mix.
If this is your first "ok" track ever, this is definitely a good start.
Keep up the good work.
Domenico
on Shallots by DJPsychOH
I am not sure if it made me think to schallots... but maybe I am not getting the point.
Peace, Domenico
on Behind the Scence of a Smiler Silence by deciBel
I still have not found the time but I definitely MUST work on some of your wonderful guitar parts.
Hope to make it soon.
Ciao, Domenico
on Autumnal equinox by deciBel
This is a true masterpiece: I have simply to quote what the others have said before me. Wonderful piano, wonderful violin and I also loved the pizzicato part (?) starting around 1:55
Simply beautiful.
Chapeaux!
Domenico
on CrowlinG 2004 by deciBel
This is a great song!
I like the arpeggio part, very interesting, but I really love the mid-part, where you play a very nice riff.
And yes, the voice is mixed quite low, but I think it gives a creepy touch to the song.
Good Work!
Domenico
on Welcome featuring James Davies by JamesDavies
Looking forward to hearing more from you.
Take care, Domenico
on The Moorlough Shore - The Furknight Remix by sigmamanone
I loved the vocal part: very "evocative"
And the guitar solo is well done: good sound, solid playing, interesting melody.
Very professional work.
Take care, Domenico
on TATANGA MANI by janis71
You voice is amazing, as usual.
The arrangement on the song is also "top class": really love the way everything is mixed together, the sound of the guitar, the depth of the bass (simple but powerful).
This is a 10.
Ciao, Domenico
I'm happy you enjoyed it ;)
My friend Paul composed, played and mixed it as he always did . T'was the second song we made together .
Thx a lot for your very appreciated comment, mi amico ;)
on Charlie Charles SHINE ON feat AnomalyJ by charliecharles1
The vocal part from AJ is really convincing.
I love the atmosphere: the bass is simple but effective. The drums are very "shy" but that's exactly what the song needs.
And the acoustic guitars are very catchy (is it a synth-gtr?)
Good work.
Ciao, Domenico
on goodbye by clemens12
This song is very "catchy": it could be included in any radio program. The vocal part is nice and it is well mixed into the instruments. You made a potential hit!
Gruesse, Domenico
did all instruments by myself only the vocal is a sample which i download on looperman!
greets
on Not A Home - ft RaRCharm - Remix by dachopdocta
Good work.
Domenico
PS: if you want to try mixing one of my tracks, I can provide you the project file (I work with Logic).
As for mixing one of your tracks I would love to, but Logic is Mac based, I use Windows. So you would have to send me the 'Wav.' files and bpm of the song.
This is why I'm going to invest in a Mac so when projects like these pop up, I will have no problem mixing anyone's tracks. It would make like easier for both you and me.
If you're still interested let me know and we'll work something out. Peace man.
Steve aka Choppy.
on The Air We Breathe by Planetjazzbass
Again a wonderful piece of music: thanks!
Domenico
PS: of course I looooove the bass part. Simply wonderful!
on The Best Feeling by Planetjazzbass
The guitar solos are all interesting and well played (the first ones are a bit more "mainstream" and the last one is a bit more "exotic")
The track is very good: no doubt the product of two great musicians.
Thanks.
Domenico
on an Instrumental hymnography by deciBel
I don't find it boring at all! I understand that you would like to add vocals to it, but the track is already veeeeery good. I really like it as it is: you have really good ideas!
I am really looking forward to hear more from you: keep up the good work.
Take care, Domenico
PS: if you are interested in a collab, just let me know ;-)
on an Instrumental hymnography by deciBel
I really enjoyed this track: I had to check on a dictionary what "hymnography" means... but that's my limit :-)
Regarding your music, I find it incredibly fascinating: maybe you could add a vocal part, but believe me, the 5 minutes really flew away.
You have a really fresh approach to music: the way you play with sounds is wonderful.
Thanks again for this nice piece of music.
Ciao, Domenico
so uploaded the long version here , to give this right to the vocalist to can select his-or-her choosen parts, set with lyrics & the concept.Best wishes Domenico.sincerely___Behnam
on Enigma-Boondocks by IAmEnigma
And your rap is interesting: well done!
Ciao, Domenico
on Runner by Darkreine
I really enjoyed the song: I think the label "rock" is the most suitable one, but this I agree with you, this is probably "something else".
I really like the distorted guitar: it has a nice sound.
May I ask you if this is a simulated amp?
Ciao, Domenico
PS: could you post the link to the youtube video as well? I am curious to see it.
Thanks you for taking the time to comment and for your kind words re the track.
Here's the Youtube vid, just watched it again and now need a lie down!!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=spsmtXAAMDQ
Thanks again.
on Trivia by CreateR
The rhythm guitar is very well played and I find all the sounds you used very "soft".
I am looking forward to hear one of our good singers here at looperman adding a vocal track to this.
Ciao, Domenico
on Do not let me fall by Denjan
Thanks. And I love the piano with the echo: it builds movement in the slow melody.
Ciao, Domenico
on Elements Of Time by mystirP
Ciao, Domenico
Mr. P
on Running Free by mystirP
I would really love to hear it with some bass notes (something simple, just a "bordone") and a vocal line (maybe something in Ian Curtis' style) ... OK I am just thinking out loud.
Thanks for sharing.
Ciao, Domenico
Mr. P
on My Forever Love by mystirP
It could be the soundtrack of an 80's movie (that's at least what comes to my mind).
Thanks for sharing.
Ciao, Domenico
Mr. P
on Sand in the Potato Salad by DjDaz
Maybe you could "smooth" a bit the drums using a lighter drumkit (specially hi-hat and bass)... not sure about it.
Anyhow I enjoyed the song.
Thanks!
Ciao, Domenico
on emotions wood by ironhouden
Thanks for sharing.
Ciao, Domenico
on Let Go by BunnieRabbit
This is another pop gem from you!
You have a very interesting voice. Looking forward to hear more.
Ciao, Domenico
Cheers!