If you think it fizzles out after the 2 mins then you have taken it too long. The piece isn't bad, but it could use some variations. add this post 2 mins and I think you'll be happy :-)
The first minute is awesome. The second minute has some nice additions. the third minute is fitting to the second, but it ends before 3 mins has elapsed. Wait, it returneth from the dead, lol.
Dude, not hip hop, ethnic is the genre for this sweet piece. This sounds like a good backing track, there's a lot of repetition in the piece, which suggests to me a lead, possibly a vocal is in the future.
As a backing track this is a sweet piece, as a stand alone too much of the same thing.
Nicely put together piece. Love it. Dude you have some awesome talent. Check out a track of mine called Funkenrock, I think I use a couple of the same samples LOl.
sorry it took so long to reply..yeah i think eveyone uses rei stuff it just plan good work.. thanks for the listen..im digging on your work to.. happyness! :)
The song is very, very good. A good producer could prob make a hit of this. Some of the instrumentation is a bit too behaind your vocals. Not a surprise, your band wants to emphasize your vocals.
This is a sweet changeup from the other two tracks. I loved the other two and I love this one. You have a great voice, it has an unique quality that I find very pleasing.
I love the sound on your tracks. This piece is yet another gem of the four or five I've listened to today. Consistent great work with an a unique sound. You (you guys) appear to be on to something.
thanx a lot for all the listens, wow, I havnt been on here for nearley a year, we have got tons of new stuff, better produced with better skillz and eqipment, I cant wait to share here, ill start posting when I get a minute or 20 spare ;)
Beautiful tribute to your friend. I'm sorry for your loss. I lost my youngest brother only months ago, before that two uncles, an aunt and a cousin who used to be my best friend. I know your pain.
haha nice one bro!!!! , thats wot I thought about this track, ive grown to absoluteley love it, and thats saying a lot seeing as I mustve heard segments from the track over a billion zillion times lol....yeah its a classic in my track library!....thanks again dude, I swear ill finf the time to have a listen to ur tracks soon mate ;)
This piece is about transformation, from my perspective. Truth is, it brings to mind images of the woman I loved and was married to for many years, becoming an evil entity I did not even recognize as being the same person when we were going through our divorce. The screaming would be me wanting to know what the f--k was going on. Some vocals, not singing, but speech expressing such a transition, or some other such transition, might be very effective.
Really excellent reply. I was hoping someone would go into that type of depth about what they felt. I agree, that the piece is very much about transformation, and over-coming the odds, that may seem impossible, in front you.
I could have listened to an extended version of this quite easily, it's a very pretty piece of music. An option you might want to explore is to have this be the intro to something related, but more grandiose.
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Well done to the extreme
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Nice track
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As a backing track this is a sweet piece, as a stand alone too much of the same thing.
John
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Great piece
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Nice job
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I'm looking forward to your cd.
John
on Well I Tried Too by aliyarose
This is the second song of yours I've faved.
Great work
John
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You've got talent, my dear,
Great talent
John
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If you have the chance, let me know what you think of some of my tracks like Scrap Metal and Metal Frame. You might even like Insolent Ungodliness,
I gotta see what else you have
John
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Nice job
John
on Broken Piano by DuBzReCoRdInGsTuDiO
This is a very good track, very good. Shows you have a broad range of talent.
Cheers
John
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tell the guys they rock
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Stay true to the dream
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Take care brother, beautiful piece
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##### awesome ;-)
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on I Ran Through the Ocean of Fire by Willbraham
As it stands this is a great piece
John
I very greatly appreciate the response.
~willbraham
on Opening 2 by ShadowArts
As is, I love it (just want more :-))
John
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