I love when I`m the first to review. Let`s start with listing what`s wrong with this track. Okay, nothing, but some people like reviews to be critical. There we go, this track is too damn good. You have to mess with it and screw it up somehow. LOL. Great track, my friend, wouldn`t change a note.
I don`t know whats happening tonight, but I am finding tracks that literally just wow me because, like this one, there is such a great and disparate combinations of sounds.
This is the second track in a row where I have been blown away by the incredible mixture of seemingly disparate and irreconcilable sounds. Damn awesome piece. Wonderfully unique.
A very beautiful piece. The only suggestion I would make would be to fade out the end. Is that you speaking in the beginning? If so, I love your voice and would like to know if you would like to narrate somethning for me in the not too distant future.
I lived in Ontario for a year. On major Mackenzie. Down the road from Wonderworld and pretty much across the road from Wonderland Foods.
Thank you very much for your reviews. Nice to know that were from ON too :) Please let me know how I can help :-)
Yes, It is me who is narrating at the begining. The reason I did not fade out at the end is because I wanted to reflect the abrupt end of a true story. I first wrote the lyrics and posted here==>undaunted-souls.blogspot.com only after that, i composed the music.
Once again, thank you very much for the reviews it means a lot to me :)
This is a great backing track. IT is good enough to stand alone as it is. Still, I would love to hear some vocals or some vox over this. SOme spoken word, like lines froma movie, would be great because the track possesses a highly cinematic quality as well.
I really like your voice. It has a high quality to it, of course, but it is very distinctive. Would have loved to have had you when I was doing the band thing.
The track is great. Personally, I wouldn't change a thing.
thanks John, I went ahead and redid my vox. That's quite a compliment. I did the band thing myself for a while, but alas, creative differences were the end of us, and here I am. :)
There are parts of this track that remind me of the Alan Parsons Project. You did a great job on this track. I have nothing to add that might improve it.
This is great for a number of reasons. Yes, it's well produced and it's a great track to listen to, with great vocals and such. But.... What I liked most was that the lyrics were very nice, especially towards the woman of interest. I think it's the first rap love song I've ever heard.
U got no one to thank more than my buddy Philosofist right here. He writes the craziest and most meaningful lyrics i have ever heard from any rapper. basically all I'm trying to say is that he's pretty amazing with the rap stuff. To tell u the truth i only did this to make sure Philo get some check ups on his page. Anyways, thnx for stopping by John really appreciate the review!
Thank you very much for the review :) Yes, I did that in less than 30 minutes. And pardon my english, I am not a Native speaker. Once again, Thank You for the review!
THe track moves really well and has lots to keep the ear entertained. I think you did a very good job, as usual, with the production of this track. The only advise I can offer you is simply "keep up the quality work".
This would be a good track for a movie like inception where one is invading the dreams of others or perhaps something similiar. I can imagine wandering around inside the mind of someone else. For the most part it would be humming alone just fine, but who knows what lurks behind the next bend. Well a cinematic track should inspire imagery and this track certainly does that well.
Thank you. I need to work on this one a little bit more in certain areas, but I think cinematic does work quite well so thank you for appreciating that aspect of it. :)
In my opinion, the most important element of an ambient track is that it must have atmosphere. Indeed, I think it may well be true that without a great atmosphere the track cannot really be called ambient. This track has enough atmosphere for 3 ambient tracks. It is dark, hypnotic and image provoking.
I chose to listen to this song first because it was a track of yours and then second because it was labeled as glitch and I had no idea what makes a track glitch. If this is representative of glitch, I will have to explore this genre more closely. The track, as usual for your work, is very well produced and interesting to listen to from note one to note last.
thanks John for your review.....the glitch in this one was mostly in the vocals but pure glitch will be more unpredictable in the whole track.....i could have put it as electronic also. Thanks again for listening and commenting
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I couldn't really get the autumn feeling right away, but after a bit it was lik "okay, I get it". I was too busy admiring the guitar work (love that sound you produced and how it does lend to the atmosphere of autumn) to see the cencept in the beginning.
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I lived in Ontario for a year. On major Mackenzie. Down the road from Wonderworld and pretty much across the road from Wonderland Foods.
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John
Yes, It is me who is narrating at the begining. The reason I did not fade out at the end is because I wanted to reflect the abrupt end of a true story. I first wrote the lyrics and posted here==>undaunted-souls.blogspot.com only after that, i composed the music.
Once again, thank you very much for the reviews it means a lot to me :)
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Camy
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