Well! With the addition of voice, you give a special dimension to your composition .... The sound background is very haunting. I would put in the category "Dance" but no matter ultimately I appreciate this piece ....
Set of good quality, although a bit repetitive. You have some provisions, and a good musical logic throughout.
What I hear is very friendly ....
Keep it up, you are on the right path ...
Greetings VickyDan. Dealing with loops only causes the repetitiveness. Can't seem to get a way from it. Still learning believe it or not. I have some ideas and functions on this program I use that I've not tried before. I am a work in progress. I do enjoy this though and will endeavor to persevere. Thank you for the friendly comment. This song had me dancing in my room while making it. LOL
Mr.P
Always impressed by your ease of adapting your voice (at least that's what how I feel) ....
Again, I can only congratulate you on the choice of "artists" who worked, virtually here ....
It's excellent ....
Whatever the genre here .... what I remember mostly, it's the concepte music, and voice .... although it has some pikes, of saturation on certain passages ....
Aside from that, I like this ensemble .... Congratulations to the team that made ??this track ....
Thank you VickyDan. Not really a "team" effort. I guess more of a duo.(unwittingly) When I heard Lonejellifish's song, I was touched. So I just sang a track over it. (Lyrics were made up as I went along.) And that's what it is.
Wow .... What a talent!
I am impressed with what you have done here .... It's really a very personal style, and I can only congratulate you.
It's your voice? If this is the case, "Chapeau Bas" .... Yes, it's a musical lament of modern times ....
FANTASTIC moment.
Everything is light and takes us by the hand for a big trip to dreamland.
A great musical moment, is undoubtedly with great passion .... and soft-spoken that you use here (Holly) is perfectly balanced, and in its place.
You are a "MASTER" of the genre ....
Congratulations ....
Simon, below brings of good ideas, and I suggest you follow his link (if you do not know of course).
I use very often these VSTi for my productions.
Aside from that, it's a pleasant music as a whole here ....
You're right, but it was meant't to be sung by a woman, but I could'nt find anyone. My voice is here as a guide, and i forgot to get the right volume. thanks for you critic.
I join with our friend "Bear", for congratulate you on this work, and this high quality design.
Your choice of support, and those you accompanying are very appropriate ....
Nice voice also ....
Thank you for sharing this musical experience ....
Good design, and beautiful harmonies. For the second part, you find a certain euphoria and that's good.
Yes! this is good work, I like this track, and music, the message that you pass ....
Good design and good mix, with periods of calm well-designed.
The effects are mild and sufficient.
Yes! this is a good work, I appreciate the track ....
Hey Vicki, sorry it took me awhile to to get back here, my firewall sometimes makes it pretty hard to come in on the site,but thank you for taking the time out given this a ear,
Always many thanks for your positive insight!!
The "image" sound you make is of very high quality. I am impressed with this composition perfectly mastered.
The harmonies and rhythm, are excellent ....
Congratulations ....
Vous avez un grand talent de compositeur.
Thank you my friend. The funny thing is, I felt like doing something completely different than what I usually do. And it didn't take more than 4 hours. I'm very creative ;)
And I am very proud of myself sometimes. Will post a video on my youtube account, to prove that It's 99.9% my own doing.
I didn't go any music producer school or so, so I am not really good at mastering my song.
But I have been working in Fruity loops studio for 9 years.
First I make my melodies, then I mash them together as they fit.
Wow .... Surprising musical moment for me this morning .... with your voice quite well suited to this piece.
The effects are light, and subtle, and it's really a success.
This style of voice, often inspires me.
Thank you for sharing this.
Beautiful harmonies here, and a very ambitious project. Yes!
Sounds and intruments Midi that you use are definitely from another era, and have now evolved by and in their sonnorité.
The shades musical are a little too "mechanical" and without effects, which could bring more relief .... This is only my humble opinion, of course.
You could to move this project .... but to have taken this decision after so many years for this painful event, is a tribute to you ....
Thank you so much for your comments! I am sorry I did not reply to your comment sooner - I cannot believe it has been over a month since I have logged in. Yes, I agree. I am trying to figure out the best way to re-do this piece and have it sound less "midi." I have purchased Personal Orchestra 4 and I hope it has better sounds than what I was using...and a way to add more "feeling" to the instruments. I will work on this and upload a new version although I don't know how long it will take.
Thank you, I like to keep it simple yet different from all the rest, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I actually didnt have this accapella track in mind when I made the beat, I was actually writing to it myself, but then I just came across the acapella track and it fit perfectly with the beat. I didnt have to change anything, It was ready to go, tempo and everything!!!
Really great musical moment.
I love the harmonies that you use here .... It is sweet and tender, in the way of dreams.
A good foundation, you need to do evolve .... continue at to do speak your heart .... musically speaking of course ....
on Relaxed and Peaceful In Yokohama by AoiHanasu
This sweet music is pretty close to that of your countryman "HIMECAMI" .... That I listened with respect ....
This is a pleasant moment listening.
Dan
on twilight dreams by lisches
Dan
on Moon Song by mystirP
What I hear is very friendly ....
Keep it up, you are on the right path ...
Dan
Mr.P
on Im Through 2 feat AllenV Ratty Shortbusmusic by MarieDailly
Always impressed by your ease of adapting your voice (at least that's what how I feel) ....
Again, I can only congratulate you on the choice of "artists" who worked, virtually here ....
It's excellent ....
Dan
Just the mastering is a bit different!
:D
on Rock Reef - Feat Lonejellifish by Amadeus127
Aside from that, I like this ensemble .... Congratulations to the team that made ??this track ....
Dan
on Do it right by luisarz
Wow .... What a talent!
I am impressed with what you have done here .... It's really a very personal style, and I can only congratulate you.
It's your voice? If this is the case, "Chapeau Bas" .... Yes, it's a musical lament of modern times ....
Dan
on Memories by Anubis
FANTASTIC moment.
Everything is light and takes us by the hand for a big trip to dreamland.
A great musical moment, is undoubtedly with great passion .... and soft-spoken that you use here (Holly) is perfectly balanced, and in its place.
You are a "MASTER" of the genre ....
Congratulations ....
Dan
Dan
I am very grateful for your words, is an honor to have the opportunity to read your comments on my songs.
I hope you stay well.
Holly has very beautiful voice, a voice very striking.
was a huge contribution to the music ...
I'm glad you enjoyed the music.
thank you so much!
on Lange Wege by soluna
I use very often these VSTi for my productions.
Aside from that, it's a pleasant music as a whole here ....
Dan
on Sleeping Beauty by luisarz
Dan
on The Red Fluid - The Terminator Theme by Hakatzzz
A little short anyway ....
Dan
on Im Through Feat AllenV- Ratty-Shortbusmusic by MarieDailly
I join with our friend "Bear", for congratulate you on this work, and this high quality design.
Your choice of support, and those you accompanying are very appropriate ....
Nice voice also ....
Thank you for sharing this musical experience ....
Dan
I'm so glad you enjoyed it
Marie :D
on Leaves by soluna
Good design, and beautiful harmonies. For the second part, you find a certain euphoria and that's good.
Yes! this is good work, I like this track, and music, the message that you pass ....
Dan
on Before You Give Up by BrianMaiden407
Good design and good mix, with periods of calm well-designed.
The effects are mild and sufficient.
Yes! this is a good work, I appreciate the track ....
Dan
Always many thanks for your positive insight!!
Brian ;)
on Fading Emotion by luisarz
Do not change your style, it is pleasant and perfect.
A good musical moment here, which I appreciate.
Congratulations ....
Dan
on Mystical Forest by Aereas
The "image" sound you make is of very high quality. I am impressed with this composition perfectly mastered.
The harmonies and rhythm, are excellent ....
Congratulations ....
Vous avez un grand talent de compositeur.
Dan
And I am very proud of myself sometimes. Will post a video on my youtube account, to prove that It's 99.9% my own doing.
I didn't go any music producer school or so, so I am not really good at mastering my song.
But I have been working in Fruity loops studio for 9 years.
First I make my melodies, then I mash them together as they fit.
Thanks for support!
on Kaarmeen Lumooja by jussi_huhtala
Dan
on jon - shooting stars and sailing ships by minette
Wow .... Surprising musical moment for me this morning .... with your voice quite well suited to this piece.
The effects are light, and subtle, and it's really a success.
This style of voice, often inspires me.
Thank you for sharing this.
Dan
on Accordia By DJ FRED by Frederick2012
Parfait!
A great moment here, and the theme and design are very surprising.
I really appreciate your work ....
Dan
on Wonder by Dakotamoon666
I repeat here what I have written elsewhere:
- A really good musical moment .... and excellent work.
I like the theme!
Dan
on A New Beginning by ekhudson
Beautiful harmonies here, and a very ambitious project. Yes!
Sounds and intruments Midi that you use are definitely from another era, and have now evolved by and in their sonnorité.
The shades musical are a little too "mechanical" and without effects, which could bring more relief .... This is only my humble opinion, of course.
You could to move this project .... but to have taken this decision after so many years for this painful event, is a tribute to you ....
Dan
Thank you so much for your comments! I am sorry I did not reply to your comment sooner - I cannot believe it has been over a month since I have logged in. Yes, I agree. I am trying to figure out the best way to re-do this piece and have it sound less "midi." I have purchased Personal Orchestra 4 and I hope it has better sounds than what I was using...and a way to add more "feeling" to the instruments. I will work on this and upload a new version although I don't know how long it will take.
Best to you!
-Edward
on Military zone by mroneal14
Congratulations. I like ....
Dan
on All Fall Down feat teamrufeless by radltzx
I love the harmonies that you use here .... It is sweet and tender, in the way of dreams.
A good foundation, you need to do evolve .... continue at to do speak your heart .... musically speaking of course ....
Dan
on Life Is For Living - ft Pete Tebar - Marie Dailly by JoyfulWAVE
Ye! It's excellent ....
Dan
btw...i remastered the track...it sounds even better :)
on Ever Wonder by Dragon1179
Regards ....
Dan
on Hidden Treasures Ft Vitamindz - A Dream Come True by Dragon1179
The melody in the background is superb ....
Dan