br0kenMach1ne

That description was so great I had to listen to this, still searching for that elusive 5 myself.
Loved the track, I'm a newcomer to glitch. Gonna check out your other stuff.

It's experience dude, that's all you need. I've had a listen through your tracks and it seems you're hovering around the electronic style and just haven't found your direction yet. Keep creating music and you will get better all the time.
There's usually plenty of forum discussion about production tips and tricks that are helpful too.

Dude this starts off bloody great, that beat and the guitar loop is damn cool. I'm not so keen on the synth sound, for me it's too light and airy sounding to fit in with what's going on.
I just picture the track going in different places. If you'd like to collaborate let me know, I think we could make something great out of this.

Cool mechanical sound going on here. I would say that more variation, different riffs etc. would make it a more interesting piece. Keep 'em coming dude.

Cool track. Hope you upload more music soon.

Ah I love scrolling through the industrial tracks and coming across a rare gem like this. Excellent track dude.

Cool idea dude. I agree with the other comment; more breaks and variation could make this a really great track.
Hope you upload more music soon.

Cool track dude, love the Zombie-like vocals. I think a harder drum sound and beefier guitars would be an improvement.

Interesting sound, dude. Keep at it.

Funky industrial, I love it. Production is very pro.

Just going through your tracks now. I like the double-tracked vocals, sounds really pro.

Very cool industrial sound. Your vocals sound a lot like Manson. Great track.

Cool. Very dark and creepy.

Ah, I heard these back to front. Yeah, I'd say you're definitely going in the right direction with the newer version, it's much better. But I would say the sound of that lone snare, the one that does most of the fills (in both versions) sounds very generic. Changing that to a more unique sound would increase the coolness factor.
Good work though dude, hope you do more industrial stuff soon.

Dude this is great. Doesn't need vox, interesting enough without them. Harsh enough to be harsh yet mellow enough to chill to, a cool mix. I really enjoyed this.

Cool track dude. Dig the Numan-ish effect on the vocals and the Scum samples. More drum fills and/or a guitar solo would liven the end up I reckon.

Very cool track, man. Only thing I think is missing is a heavier bass sound. The whole thing sounds very top heavy and could sound badass if you punched up the lower frequecies.

Sweet track. I can definitely hear the Fragile influence. Keep 'em coming dude.

Very cool. You definitely got the cyborg feeling nailed. This is a theme that interests me greatly. Well done.

Very cool. You got the eastern flavour of the Fremen perfectly. This would be great in a soundtrack to a Dune film.

Man, this is great! I could see this with images of space, the moon, how the Earth looks from the moon, etc. You really nailed the imagery for this. I just wish there was a prog genre on this site, this track would be perfect fot that.

I like it! I can see what you mean about it being used in a survival horror game - esp. that feedback loop at the start; very Silent Hill!

I love it! It has a very rich, full, professional sound. The progression is awesome. My only criticism is that it should have a grander ending - a big crash and power chord on top of that bell - but hey, that's just what I would've done.

I'm looking forward to hearing more tracks from you soon!