Hi Brillbilly and thanks for your comment. Wow you comparing me with Earl wire Lindo (plays organ in The wailers) I'm honored indeed.
Yes Patricias vocals are something special and really fun to work with.
First off its fine and sounds good so don't worry!
All I would do is make another drop around the 2.36 mark so it goes amient,then kicks up to last part,then use the same ambient drop to end by slowly fading out.
This is just what I would do,and in no way am I saying I know better mate!
Thank you Brillbilly and sorry I didn't reply earlier , glad to get some constructive advice and was thinking almost on the same lines . Very Grateful Peace .
Cheers mate. darkreine and I did it together. Recorded all the instruments in live so that is why it has a live feel to it. Re-Mastered it as it is a bit bad.
For the short time you've been making music,this is beautiful,so very well done as it has that great deep house feel.!
I think the tips that rogueAi offered are spot on,as it would just bring it out more,maybe you could add some house piano to the last part to really make this an awesome deep house track.!
This is all i would do,and in no way am i saying this is sub standard....This is great.....I see it as a rough diamond that just needs a slight cleanup!
Thanks for the comments on my track Traveling to long island.
Tomorow I will set a new track on looperman.com.
You can also follow me at www.soundcloud.com/oneman-39
for more tracks to listen.
thanks again for your support.
by the way,, whats the best time that menbers are usually on?
i remember one time i uploaded a track latenight and got the most listens.
Thanks man, yeah I'm liking the reggae vibe just now :)
The Les Paul is mint too, love the tone of that guitar. It goes to show just how lower budget my Epiphone Les Paul sounds. You get what you pay for I suppose :(
Vos voix sont au-delà des mots pour la beauté.! ... J'adore ce piano, de superbes beats et effets, paroles profondes, des notes de Kate Bush dans vos parties chantées calmes.
Im juste vous faire savoir que votre jamais seul, ou si vous êtes ce ne sera que pour une courte période.
amour engendre l'amour, les sentiments génèrent sentiment ... Maintenant, nous devons prendre pour le dancefloor comme il en est ainsi intéressant de danser avec vous aussi, mais pardonnez-moi si je secoue mon butin lol
Sshh Chris ... Don't tell people I've bribed this jury with French chocolate !
Aw, 12 points only ?!! haha
I love it when you speak French with this glorious and smiling accent of yours . That's so nice of you to take pains to use my language ;))
Hum ... your compliments are a too precious gift I can't accept even though I know you're always sincere and do an awesome job as a karma angel, my sweet friend :)
Yes, the wheel of fortune is forever turning, even if slowly . In this I deeply trust .
I'm a really lucky girl who came across such magnificent people like you here . You're incarnated sunshine to me, Chris . Pardon me the clichés ...
Yeah, you're right . It's time for a dance now !
What d'you think a "Kool and the Gang" single ? Put on your glittering mask and be careful to your old school feet, deary .
"Booty" would be "popotin" in French . Such a spoony word, and more than that when pronounced with an English accent, lol . Please do, I love it so much when you shake it in this unimitable style of yours !!
Merci de tout mon coeur, mon très cher Chris ...
Hug in return,
Take good care, deary, promise ?
For me a person doesn't hear sound only through the ears,
They hear sound through every pore of their body.
It permeates the entire being,
and according to its particular influence either slows
or quickens the rhythm of the blood circulation,
it either wakens or soothes the nervous system.
It arouses a person to greater passions
or it calms them by bringing them peace.
According to the sound and its influence
a certain effect is produced.
Sound becomes visible in the form of radiance.
This shows that the same energy which goes into the form of sound
before being visible is absorbed by the physical body.
In that way the physical body recuperates
and becomes charged with new magnetism.
Hey Brillbilly,
Thanks for the nice words man - You been so very supportive right from the start - much appricated. Keep up the good work - Ill dash off to you tracks section.
Respect
/Peter
on Rewind G and T Mixed Remaster - Feat RaRCharm by AggroCultureMusic
Im callin it Bump n Grind lol
great vocals,real nice feel good beat.!
good track man,got my booty shaking!
on Far far away feat Melanie Jane by kittytrillah
just right to chillout to and just breath nice n deep!
very very nice blissful work,lush vocals n bass,great easy tempo,sweet dreamy effects!
i love it!!
thank you for sharing!
I wanted to convey a sense of flying in a dream
on Asylum La mere by kittytrillah
You got some lovely nature sounds blending with great effects,yet it has a feel of some sorrow or loss.!
Nice chilled trip.!
life love n unity to ya!
I wanted to make track sad a little
Peace
on Ode to Joe by Darkreine
Even i class my self lucky to have used one of his many awesome loops!
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/127589
So thank you kenny for keeping joe on his toes lol
Great track mate,this is so frigging full on!
Another great floor filler!....love it bro!
Now what was that about a group toke?!?
on Ole fashioned love feat Patricia Edwards by Baggadub
love that hammond ,hints of no woman no cry to my ears...lush man!
Beautiful vocals!
Im with others..10/10 on this beauty!
Yes Patricias vocals are something special and really fun to work with.
on Free Ourselves by Killumineye
First off its fine and sounds good so don't worry!
All I would do is make another drop around the 2.36 mark so it goes amient,then kicks up to last part,then use the same ambient drop to end by slowly fading out.
This is just what I would do,and in no way am I saying I know better mate!
on The Love You Left behind by 12string-darkreine by ElectronBlue
It has a great feel that reminds me of the verve!...lush!
Love the way this feels like a live session,something that I would love to pull a chair up and join in with you guys!.
Its a real nice easy listening feel,that I think sounds great!
Very good work to all involved!
thumbs up and front row seat from me! ;)
Great vocals from Kenny,beautiful guitars
on The Hypnotist feat Janneke - Only You by Indozizz
This is a real nice track with awesome piano,beats,bass n synths!
Real nice work!
on My Pain on Paper (Angel) by Nicooo
The vocals have a hint of billy idol...real nice!
Good track,nice work!
on Turn the Beat Up ft Doudei by Darkreine
Great beat,lush synths,real nice bass and a great feelgood vibe!
Nice feel good track,good work guys!.
Im not home to download,but will as soon as im on my own pc!
cheers!
Kenny.
on Traveling to Long Island by IndoTronic
For the short time you've been making music,this is beautiful,so very well done as it has that great deep house feel.!
I think the tips that rogueAi offered are spot on,as it would just bring it out more,maybe you could add some house piano to the last part to really make this an awesome deep house track.!
This is all i would do,and in no way am i saying this is sub standard....This is great.....I see it as a rough diamond that just needs a slight cleanup!
Good work all the same,so very well done!
Thanks for the comments on my track Traveling to long island.
Tomorow I will set a new track on looperman.com.
You can also follow me at www.soundcloud.com/oneman-39
for more tracks to listen.
Greetz
IndoTronic
on seconds by TameChild5000
love that drop then of to that great kickup!
Real nice feel good track man!
thank you for sharing!
peace all the way!
by the way,, whats the best time that menbers are usually on?
i remember one time i uploaded a track latenight and got the most listens.
on Definition by Diskonnect
This is real nice n chilled
Great beat,love that reggae type vibe,awesome effects too
Please tell your friend can i please have his les paul,as i want it added to a wish list i've just decided to start lol
It sounds awesome!
good track!
Thanks for sharing!
The Les Paul is mint too, love the tone of that guitar. It goes to show just how lower budget my Epiphone Les Paul sounds. You get what you pay for I suppose :(
Have a good day!
on Promised Land by janis71
Here are the results from the English jury....
France 12 points!
C'est une belle piste Janis!
Vos voix sont au-delà des mots pour la beauté.! ... J'adore ce piano, de superbes beats et effets, paroles profondes, des notes de Kate Bush dans vos parties chantées calmes.
Im juste vous faire savoir que votre jamais seul, ou si vous êtes ce ne sera que pour une courte période.
amour engendre l'amour, les sentiments génèrent sentiment ... Maintenant, nous devons prendre pour le dancefloor comme il en est ainsi intéressant de danser avec vous aussi, mais pardonnez-moi si je secoue mon butin lol
C'est une piste doux doux!
très très gentille dame de travail!
étreintes
chris ***
Aw, 12 points only ?!! haha
I love it when you speak French with this glorious and smiling accent of yours . That's so nice of you to take pains to use my language ;))
Hum ... your compliments are a too precious gift I can't accept even though I know you're always sincere and do an awesome job as a karma angel, my sweet friend :)
Yes, the wheel of fortune is forever turning, even if slowly . In this I deeply trust .
I'm a really lucky girl who came across such magnificent people like you here . You're incarnated sunshine to me, Chris . Pardon me the clichés ...
Yeah, you're right . It's time for a dance now !
What d'you think a "Kool and the Gang" single ? Put on your glittering mask and be careful to your old school feet, deary .
"Booty" would be "popotin" in French . Such a spoony word, and more than that when pronounced with an English accent, lol . Please do, I love it so much when you shake it in this unimitable style of yours !!
Merci de tout mon coeur, mon très cher Chris ...
Hug in return,
Take good care, deary, promise ?
Big kiss,
Carole
on Madiba Prayer by Darkreine
Respect to you for feeling for a great man.!
Your thought provoking music and the message behind it,does not go un-noticed by me.!
This is why i love this type of music so much,as its always a journey!
Good work!
Kenny
on Madiba Prayer by Darkreine
Beautiful chillout!
For me a person doesn't hear sound only through the ears,
They hear sound through every pore of their body.
It permeates the entire being,
and according to its particular influence either slows
or quickens the rhythm of the blood circulation,
it either wakens or soothes the nervous system.
It arouses a person to greater passions
or it calms them by bringing them peace.
According to the sound and its influence
a certain effect is produced.
Sound becomes visible in the form of radiance.
This shows that the same energy which goes into the form of sound
before being visible is absorbed by the physical body.
In that way the physical body recuperates
and becomes charged with new magnetism.
For me Where words fail, music speaks! ;)
The man is an example to us all, of tolerence, love and racial unity. May his god take him home safeguarded.
on Smash the plastic by Killumineye
Love that oldschool type bass,good beat,real nice soft synths too.!
Good progression.!
Good work!
on Broken by Keyah
Beautiful vocals,meaningful lyrics!
Great beats n bass n synths!
very very good track...this sounds awesome loud too!
on Drunk Monk-Julia2008 by JULIA2008
This is my kind of trance!
Great beat,awesome synths
Great track,it got me rockin!
thank you for sharing,fave from me too! ;)
on Echo Bay by Darkreine
Dont it make ya feel great listening to beautiful music.!
This is frigging lush!
Love them vocals chants...great title,great Track!
Your so in the zone man!
Thank you for that, I'm not sure what it is, but it just came out.
Glad you liked it.
K;)
on johnny cash hurt cover by kerry
but beautifully sung and played!
You did beautifil on this cover,so very well done!
Life love n unity to you!
on No Sleep Tonight - feat Bonnie Rabson by AggroCultureMusic
Beautiful vocals.!
great electronics too,this moved along real smooth man,and sounds friggin awesome loud!
very very good track..10/10 ;)
Thank you so much for sharing!
Thanks for the nice words man - You been so very supportive right from the start - much appricated. Keep up the good work - Ill dash off to you tracks section.
Respect
/Peter
on The Hypnotist - Cids Theme 2013 by Indozizz
Superb bass n beat kick in!
Lush piano,love that dreamy feel.!
nice old school type synths which i love.!
good work!
on forest of wonders by doudei
Good play on different synths,that take on a sort of lifeform in their arpeggiated styles!
I love anything to do with nature,so thumbs up from me!
on Looperfam prayer by janis71
my tears i shed as im only human and feel loss.!
This was beautiful!
Big kiss