Very catchy rhythm... but the general volume is too low, there are too much breaks and in the center part especially (but generally) sounds are not balanced.
Anyway, good tune as first ever, there are some improvement you have to do, but this is quite interesting!
This is def Jamid! Even shuffleing among the (not yet listened) songs here, even layed on the bed with closed eyes, this is def Jamid and this is def art!
When i red description i do expect some shitty and confused instrumentals, but now i'm totally surprised, fantastic vocals, kinda lo-fi dance music, not proprerly EDM but a wonderful mix of 80's feels and modern music... i like I Like I LIke I LIKe I LIKE IT SO MUCH!!!
Wow I'm glad my friend. Genres are not my strength to begin with but if it was working for u I did my job. What would be more characteristic of EDM I wonder. Thanks
Good idea, but the general sound is too weak, evanescent. A tad ripetitive too. In a 3:50 long track, the raising mode in the beginning is too long and the kick part last too little. I guess you worked on vocals too... maybe here needs some cue-throttling frames. Make all the sounds more fatty, and, imho, try to change the 0:00-1:40 part to get into kicks earlier.
When i red "Trance" i did expect something like Gouryella style. But this is... SOOO MUCH BETTER! Dunno why, for me its synth pop, not trance. Really like the atmosphere you create here, sounds kinda my style! Sure, keep on working on this, "you won't laugh, you will not cry" 'till you finish your job!
Hi, Nicolo! Thanks for commenting on this track. I've tried for years to make a good trance track. I don't know why it seems to be so hard for me.
I supposed this could be synth pop. I think most of my tracks are probably in the pop genre. I don't feel embarrassed by that. Making a good pop track is not easy. Making a good EDM track is definitely not easy either.
From other comments it looks like I need to do more work on the bass parts and the kick drum track. I have about 3 or 4 kick drum tracks on the project, so there is more refinement required. MPOProduction has suggested, I think, that the kick needs to be tuned properly. I know that's supposed to be really important, at least for some EDM genres. I know how to do that, at least in theory. I guess it's time to practice.
Prima di rendermi conto che la traccia era del signor Domenico Wolf, avevo già pensato che era "molto italiana" come costruzione e che ci avrei messo sopra un bel cantato nella nostra bella lingua, fottesega se qua non la capiscono (c'è l'hip hop in russo, perciò...)
Per essere il lavoro fatto in appena un ora è eccellente, a prescindere dai consigli che ti ha dato Wayne. Probabilmente tornerai a lavorarci su, per variare qualcosa: se così sarà, aggiungi qualche variazione nella musica, uno special ad esempio. Al tuo posto, avrei aggiunto una sezione in cui avrei sostituito lo snare con un bel sidestick (come quello brillantissimo che puoi ascoltare nel brano "Consequence" dei The Notwist).
Per qualche strana ragione, ci vedrei sopra una improvvisazione di synth piano, precisamente l'E.Piano (FM synth della Yamaha Dx7), con un campo stereo ampio, in modo tale che non vada ad addensarsi al centro dove comandano le chitarre e le batterie...
Non rimproverarmi se scrivo in italiano, per far contenti gli altri ho scritto in inglese e francese, cavolo con un italiano vorrei poter usare la nostra lingua!
Hi Mr Henry Pascal!
Credo sia la prima volta che scrivo in italiano su questo sito... ma non credo sia un problema ;-)
Grazie del commento. Non so se rimettero' mano a questa canzone, ma se lo dovessi fare sicuramente terro' conto dei tui suggerimenti: stide stick (non ho idea di chi siano i Notwist, devo andare a controllare) ... sull'improvvisazione di Epiano non ho idee. Magari hai un'idea tu e possiamo far partire una collaborazione.
E ovviamente, dovessi aver bisogno di una parte di basso, basta che mi mandi un messagio privato!
Ciao, Domenico
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Anyway, good tune as first ever, there are some improvement you have to do, but this is quite interesting!
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When i red description i do expect some shitty and confused instrumentals, but now i'm totally surprised, fantastic vocals, kinda lo-fi dance music, not proprerly EDM but a wonderful mix of 80's feels and modern music... i like I Like I LIke I LIKe I LIKE IT SO MUCH!!!
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I supposed this could be synth pop. I think most of my tracks are probably in the pop genre. I don't feel embarrassed by that. Making a good pop track is not easy. Making a good EDM track is definitely not easy either.
From other comments it looks like I need to do more work on the bass parts and the kick drum track. I have about 3 or 4 kick drum tracks on the project, so there is more refinement required. MPOProduction has suggested, I think, that the kick needs to be tuned properly. I know that's supposed to be really important, at least for some EDM genres. I know how to do that, at least in theory. I guess it's time to practice.
Thanks again for the feedback.
Eric
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Per essere il lavoro fatto in appena un ora è eccellente, a prescindere dai consigli che ti ha dato Wayne. Probabilmente tornerai a lavorarci su, per variare qualcosa: se così sarà, aggiungi qualche variazione nella musica, uno special ad esempio. Al tuo posto, avrei aggiunto una sezione in cui avrei sostituito lo snare con un bel sidestick (come quello brillantissimo che puoi ascoltare nel brano "Consequence" dei The Notwist).
Per qualche strana ragione, ci vedrei sopra una improvvisazione di synth piano, precisamente l'E.Piano (FM synth della Yamaha Dx7), con un campo stereo ampio, in modo tale che non vada ad addensarsi al centro dove comandano le chitarre e le batterie...
Non rimproverarmi se scrivo in italiano, per far contenti gli altri ho scritto in inglese e francese, cavolo con un italiano vorrei poter usare la nostra lingua!
Credo sia la prima volta che scrivo in italiano su questo sito... ma non credo sia un problema ;-)
Grazie del commento. Non so se rimettero' mano a questa canzone, ma se lo dovessi fare sicuramente terro' conto dei tui suggerimenti: stide stick (non ho idea di chi siano i Notwist, devo andare a controllare) ... sull'improvvisazione di Epiano non ho idee. Magari hai un'idea tu e possiamo far partire una collaborazione.
E ovviamente, dovessi aver bisogno di una parte di basso, basta che mi mandi un messagio privato!
Ciao, Domenico