Tip #1: if you write a song before writing the vocal track, don't use pre-recorded autotuned vocal tracks. The one you used in this track sounds completely not matching with the main melody.
Tip #1,5: verify the vocal track and music tempos matching.
Tip #2: in a 2:07 timed song is not the best way using an intro of 0:48 seconds. It sounds too boring.
Tip #3: Maybe you use FL, i don't know. In that case, using some fx in the mixer, making entire sound no flat.
It sounds really good! Just a tip: repeating the same 4 beats for all song could be boring... maybe you have to diversify, creating a bridge or modify the refrain part.
There's something in this song remembering me the synth in "Self Control" by Raf. (I know the original "Self Control" was by Laura Brannigan, but in Italy was re-maded by Raf) Anyway, good job, although this is not exactly my style! :D
Canzone d'altri tempi. Testo profondo e interpretazione buona, anche se avrei scelto in alcune parti una vocalizzazione diversa. Ti do un consiglio spassionato: evita la lingua italiana. Non appena la sentono, non capendo la maggior parte degli utenti, passa subito oltre. Le parti vocali con il filtro telefonico in alcuni casi si capiscono poco. Inoltre, pompa appena un po il volume dell'intera traccia prima di pubblicarla, altrimenti si sente piuttosto bassa. Nel complesso, un buon lavoro! Bravo!
Per la vocalizzazione studio per migliorarla ma non mi viene facile in quanto non ho esperienza in merito ma devo effettivamente migliorare, sulla lingua italiana lo avevo capito che passano oltre ma non so cantare in inglese, ti ringrazio per i consigli che mi hai dato e spero continuerai a darmeli anche sulle prossime canzoni, mi permetto di darti il link del mio sito (tutto amatoriale)cosi se hai tempo...http://chilloutrock.wix.com/algoritmosound - grazie di nuovo, Tommaso
Hi Dan. I get your message but i don't understand if you want to collab for an instrumental piece or getting vocals... so in the first case i can do something, in the second... sorry.... Anyway, at the time i can't do nothing 'cause my pc is knocked out. I believe i can get back it in a little time, let me know about kind of collab you want. Greets!
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Tip #1,5: verify the vocal track and music tempos matching.
Tip #2: in a 2:07 timed song is not the best way using an intro of 0:48 seconds. It sounds too boring.
Tip #3: Maybe you use FL, i don't know. In that case, using some fx in the mixer, making entire sound no flat.
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