If I were you I've made some changes on the drums...actually, what is the problem with that guitar? It fits well I think and it could be the point to the move on...
Hello, in around betwen 13-17? second track background guitar not correct tone harmonize.
Drums maybe can some changes (example make them softer), i try search for more. But these i like too.
But i not have more loops that quitars. And i am balancing on my abilities. That can help me only profesional musician.
brilliant production except the end which is abrupt...let the last note a bit more time to float please...
10/10, Danke
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Huge screams and cool lyrics in this ROCK song...tempo is outstanding and those riffs too...I'm not really a fan of this slushy guitar tone but it's my problem...all in all, was good to hear you in this genre...
very special track...first of all, you did a splendid work to get a humble music under ESoreni's beautiful voice...everything is right on it's place except that loud and (for me) unfunctional harmonica...the whole track is full of creativity...weird to use here but progressive a bit...
Thank you very much, Danke!
I am fully take criticism.
You are right, harmonica is unfunctional, but I wanted to add some unusual sounds just for break line, which is slightly ''even''. I never heard harmonica in bluegrass, but why not sometimes? And, of course, I am not strong in mixing and composing (a teacher at school didn't fond of my musical ear). Music is my hobby and I post it here only with respect to acapella's authors.
well...it's more than remarkable production...I can hardly imagine how the hell could you and others make songs with loops but it sometimes works...for example this one...very creative sound samples within the whole track and that part from 1.48 and later (that guitarish short melody) lift the quality...
the first two chords like an R.E.M. song and that's lead through...towards the end you rowed to the fields of the jam...bass tone is very good again...
Thanks man! Been working on getting the bass sounding better. The git has an inherent grounding issue that causes me to clip some of the high end freqs so I am not totally happy with it, it could be a bit more punchy.
this is very cool...the weapon is the nowadays so popular trap/trip hopish groovy from the drums...the synth mysticism is outstanding...all in all, pro track...
very cool sounds from the weird zone in the good meaning of the word...that classical like female vocalish synth tune is super good and the whole track is flying in the air...but the end is roughly abrupted, from my view...
Thank you for the feedback, To be honest i didn't know what genre to put it as. Also, i just uploaded the raw product as i was too busy to properly edit it, and I did not even add elements like fade away e.t.c.
4 chords, nothing more but my god you gotta special sense to write a hit...you need a singer but to tell you the truth it's a heaven for him/ her...and will hard to find but I hope you got somebody...I'm with you...
tnx men... i downloaded some of your loops. i get some inspiration one of your loops in one of my tracks. your groovy bells is dope... i do hope you upload some more loops. thanks again
that's a unique piece for sure...shuffle rhythm is not a frequent use in songs...that's minimalistic (we can say humble) synth play is more than remarkable...the mood, the feeling of the track is very sensitive or donno...not a proper word but maybe you know what I mean...
"synth play is more than remarkable"
thank you, yeah i wanted the synths to be weird and interesting so hopefully it paid off :D
"feeling of the track is very sensitive"
i think i know what you mean, think the vocals, the dark tone and the somewhat mellow production gives it that vibe.
let's see...this track is brilliant without the drums...donno, maybe I don't get stg but that is totally out of the song...it doesn't fit...the start with that hihat and later that speedy tempo...no place for those in this sad, melancholical, beautiful chill...if I misunderstand stg, explain me please...:-)
great track and special use of that acapella...end is minimum weird :-) but it is surprising for sure...
humble song under the vocs what it could be a bit more powered...personally...:-)
Hey man :)
Yh the weird ending is not really how I wanted it, but I like to experiment with stuff, so I left it in if that makes sense
The loudness of the vocals compared to the music specially in the chorus part was indeed like its pushed away, I noticed it too but let a friend of mine hear it, and he said it was fine, so I tought it wasw just me, but now at least the first two comments I get are about the vocals xD So now I know I am not crazy haha, I'll try to fix it later since it bugges me a lot as well.
tnx for ur honest opinion :) and thanks for the listen and fav :D
My favourite rock/metal band is S.O.A.D. there are 2 singers in the band Serj and the guitarist...they were able to sing everything in every style together...that's the starting point...:-)
I very much like your screaming and howling, that's nearly professional...can't say this from the singing...my personal problem is that you have a nasal tone of your voice and I don't like that...you are clear, your harmonies aren't false maybe with a little reverb on it at the studio, could help...
music is incredibly good...drum is a bit back on my humble opinion (calculate that it's a basement project)
all in all, great track and this will be a winner in stucio if you plan to go ...
Im very familiar with SOAD, some of my fav tracks are from them, as well as some features Serj did for other bands.
I do agree the drums are not as explosive as I would want them. As with the singing its not my favorite either, to be quite honest I never liked the way it was on this song, but it still fits somehow. Im sure some some studio time could fix these issues, but for now, ill accept the love/hate relationship. Glad you think the music itself is very well done, as well as the screams being near professional. -EYEDYE
hell knows I like this number...very oldie synth tune but it's beautiful...I'll download it and 30 years later if I'm here, I'll try to dance slowly with my wife (if she'll be here of course...)
on 7000 miles away by Roddo
thanx for being part of it, handshake, Danke
on Snake charmer by WhitenoiseAttack
that bass groovy is fantastic, gives a fluent pulsation to the song...from 2.00 til 2.35 that loungy middle part is wonderful...
the whole track could be the 4th or 5th part of Indiana Jones's soundtrack...
hats off, 10/10, fav, dl, Danke
Szóval anyanyelvünkön folytatom.
Köszönöm a visszajelzést, igazából fel sem akartam tölteni, mert úgy éreztem, hogy túl egyszerű, végül úgy döntöttem megteszem. Érdemes volt, mert ez most megint megmutatta, hogy nem kell harminc szólam egy zenéhez, hogy hallgatható legyen. Az is lehet, hogy szándékosan ezt a letisztult vonalat célzom majd meg.
on Childdream by Manfromstars
If I were you I've made some changes on the drums...actually, what is the problem with that guitar? It fits well I think and it could be the point to the move on...
All in all, great number, handshake, Danke
Drums maybe can some changes (example make them softer), i try search for more. But these i like too.
But i not have more loops that quitars. And i am balancing on my abilities. That can help me only profesional musician.
Thank you for your comment.
on Two worlds by Plague760
hats off, Danke
on Elysium by Ares1
10/10, Danke
anyway...why don't you comment on another tracks and give yourself a chance to let your outstanding music hear it with more people?
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on Move Your Car muzic by Shortbusmusic by FullCapicityMuzic
Huge screams and cool lyrics in this ROCK song...tempo is outstanding and those riffs too...I'm not really a fan of this slushy guitar tone but it's my problem...all in all, was good to hear you in this genre...
greetings, Danke
on Come Rescue Me feat ESoreni by YEM12
great upload, handshake, Danke
I am fully take criticism.
You are right, harmonica is unfunctional, but I wanted to add some unusual sounds just for break line, which is slightly ''even''. I never heard harmonica in bluegrass, but why not sometimes? And, of course, I am not strong in mixing and composing (a teacher at school didn't fond of my musical ear). Music is my hobby and I post it here only with respect to acapella's authors.
on Say What Again by Jakedollery
all in all, great share, handshake, Danke
on The empty room by najuzaith
10/10
thanx for the upload, Danke
on Under the Waves by theHumps
the first two chords like an R.E.M. song and that's lead through...towards the end you rowed to the fields of the jam...bass tone is very good again...
all in all, good song, handshake, Danke
Take care!
Wayne
on Northstar by alpha2
handshake, Danke
end is bit hmmmm...weird? :-)
on Wild Wild West by JumpNation
handshake, Danke
Never had comments like this!
Very helpful.
on Just Dance - Prod by DAir by airhihed
very cool sounds from the weird zone in the good meaning of the word...that classical like female vocalish synth tune is super good and the whole track is flying in the air...but the end is roughly abrupted, from my view...
handshake, Danke
on The World Can Love Again Version 1 by DivadyAlbum1
handshake, Danke
I will really like to find someone who writes lyrics on my instrumental
on Tampered by peajae
hats off and handshake, Danke
hope you'll find someone...
on Substances by DubSmockers
great production, Danke
thanks for your feedback! glad you enjoyed it :)
Friendly
Bleep
on Nova x Vena - So Much of Me by XyIlent
all in all, outstanding work...
fav, dl, handshake, Danke
"synth play is more than remarkable"
thank you, yeah i wanted the synths to be weird and interesting so hopefully it paid off :D
"feeling of the track is very sensitive"
i think i know what you mean, think the vocals, the dark tone and the somewhat mellow production gives it that vibe.
Thanks for the feedback man :D
on Cloudless by Orlando51
...and I'm speechless...true artwork...agreed with Mr. Silverman: nothing more to be said...just listen to it...
fav, dl, handshake, Danke
and your'fav' is sweet..:)
With maximum appreciation______Orlando
on angel song feat esoreni JP Vignes by jpvignes
though it could show a better quality if you give a bit more power on the mix...on my humble opinion...
thanx for the upload, Danke
on Nagesh by KayFO
handshake, Danke
on Not Your Extra Everything ft Steklo by Eighteen
humble song under the vocs what it could be a bit more powered...personally...:-)
handshake and fav, Danke
Yh the weird ending is not really how I wanted it, but I like to experiment with stuff, so I left it in if that makes sense
The loudness of the vocals compared to the music specially in the chorus part was indeed like its pushed away, I noticed it too but let a friend of mine hear it, and he said it was fine, so I tought it wasw just me, but now at least the first two comments I get are about the vocals xD So now I know I am not crazy haha, I'll try to fix it later since it bugges me a lot as well.
tnx for ur honest opinion :) and thanks for the listen and fav :D
~Eighteen
on Lies Of Advice by MOONLYTE
My favourite rock/metal band is S.O.A.D. there are 2 singers in the band Serj and the guitarist...they were able to sing everything in every style together...that's the starting point...:-)
I very much like your screaming and howling, that's nearly professional...can't say this from the singing...my personal problem is that you have a nasal tone of your voice and I don't like that...you are clear, your harmonies aren't false maybe with a little reverb on it at the studio, could help...
music is incredibly good...drum is a bit back on my humble opinion (calculate that it's a basement project)
all in all, great track and this will be a winner in stucio if you plan to go ...
handshake, Danke
I do agree the drums are not as explosive as I would want them. As with the singing its not my favorite either, to be quite honest I never liked the way it was on this song, but it still fits somehow. Im sure some some studio time could fix these issues, but for now, ill accept the love/hate relationship. Glad you think the music itself is very well done, as well as the screams being near professional. -EYEDYE
on Maybe Tomorow by DivadyAlbum1
thanx for the upload, Danke
on like uhhh and such by dumarecht
good song
handshake, Danke
on You and Me by DivadyAlbum1
piano is superb and how you play with the sound of the snare is, too...
fav, handshake, Danke