3rdNippleMusic

no offense, but this is great music to drift off to sleep with, like when I smoke a fatty, load up winamp playlists & sit in my big chair in the dark with the lights out..

I'd start with like 'garnish' then end with this kind of tune so it continue to sleep when I finally drift off - ie: the music doesn't blare out and scare the crap outta me... had to stop listening to roger waters cuz o'that lol.

nice melodic, chill tune man, thanks for sharing !

neal visher

pretty coool, nice & groovin & laid-back, this track inspires mate - good structure - neal visher

Hey,

So the vocals.. have you tried singing them yourself ?

as for the rhythm section.. diggin the beat, could tighten up the initial basslines for my ears, but we're all different (and some of my shit's whacked lol...) I'd say play the synth/bass slower and see what happens

I suggest trying like 4 different mixes of the song.. see where it branches out too & trying not to make the same song four times.. just a thought, but you just never know if you just let go ; )

nv

well, it's got the beat to keep it going.. the 'bass' line is cool for background track, I suggest adding a more constant bassline so the current wobble accentuates the bassline that I just suggested... it'll carry the song and make it groove 100 times better imho - enjoy - neal visher

nice ambient feel with killer bass man, dig the guitar and live is always good..

really dig the 'critters' around 2:30, this is a flying dream scene in the imagination - LOVE how the bassline holds us up there before coming back in.

great track
nv

kickin track dude

wouldn't mind a flip at a remix on this including any files that you didn't use specifically in this version.. (fx, wavs, loops, flp etc, whatever ya got)

you can check my remixing abilities on my tracks page under NVRemix tracks on page 2:

https://www.looperman.com/users/tracks/609523?page=2

I'm a little bust for the next week or so due to deadlines, but if I don't ask now.. I may forget..

Thanks
Neal

excellent intro man, wicked bassline to let the guitarpeggio float along top of the waterline.

mmm, very dreamy.. this has me intrigued so far.. ahhhh yeaah, lovely guitar ambience, excellent changes.. mmmhmm, this has flavoritten all over it

3 thumbs up !
Neal Visher

This has a pretty good synth/bass line - it carries the song thru the murky parts, I really dig the vocals when they are spacey but then when they go hollowing in the second section it kinda freaks me out lol

good sound over all and the are only a couple parts that aren't as 'keep ya moving forward' as they could be in my mind.. keep up the work, nothing is bad, it's allll good !

neal

you've definitely got some interesting sounds and sections in this one mate, diggin the 3m mark at the mo... keep at this one, love the flange Neal Visher

great, driving track. love the 'voices' in my head. wish i could lay some vocalization/guitar sounds over this one but i'm kinda homeless athe mo'

looking forward to more from you two !¡!

Neal Visher
@3rdNippleMusic

excellent start right off... great track for some wonderful additions... I dig that mellow synth line frequency that comes in for a bit

I can't wait to hear new versions - Neal Visher

Excellent soundscaping man, really impressed with the builds, just overall hi energy and suspenseful.

Thanks,
Neal Visher

hah, you send me the song in email and i comment via txt msg.. and forget to stop by to blow smoke up your ass, lol

pooof!

damn, trippy as heck man.. headphones and alxsix, good combo.. and who knows what else lol..

thanks for sharing bro,
Neal

yeah man, tres cool track - that was a fun one that looptrack challenge, glad you played.
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Very creative and a driving song mate, listenining to it on my mp3player alot lately.. thanks for sharing !

Neal Visher

hah, this song came on in my mp3 player, and I instantly recognized my guitar that sounds like a synth, awesome track btw, and glad you dig the Neal Visher loops and 3rd Nipple Music - more will be uploaded soooon

Awesome !

Hi energy track here man, love the buildups. and it's not depressin like my electronic stuff, hah, mine aint depressing if I don't psuedo-compare it lol..

Thanks for sharing bro !

Neal

my mistake, he was askin for lyrics un-vocals, chaka,, sorry for planting the seed in-fertile ground lol

well,.. the request for vocals as per your pre/de-scription at the moment of the supple load, er upload.. in my mind, contradicks itself.. you request a vocalist, then say you tighetened em up... so 1) many MAY think.. fck i can't calm pair to that.. or 2?) wtf is he in-secure ?

either way, you got a style man - stick to it NOW and write that friggin album... just rememeber, your styles will change and it's easy to start new sht... focus on this bro, give you 6m-1y... do it , do it now !

?(teh nwe'll go do the acoustic album, even tho I think you should do that first.. no biggie)

spread the nv !

awesome, this kicks some major ass Dan, so do you happen to have a copy of Stick it in you(r)ear.. say uh huh !

sorry dblpost, meant to say crank those guitars !

ok, had to check your tracks after the 1st two I heard.. you got damn good stlye mate. love your work.

Neal Visher
3rd Nipple Music

excellent work man, I have no suggestions as it's past my level of expertise but i love the 2 skortix songs I've heard so far, thanks for that !

nv

omg.. yes.. consider me a fan, i like alot of soluna thanks so much for sharing : )

Neal Visher