Loved the chilled vibe and the rich deep sounds of the keys.
It's great as an instrumental but I could definitely imagine someone laying some vocals down too.
A nice and mellow listen for me on a sunny day in the UK.
Ha this is an amazing track...the lyrics are actually being recited by califken...but I wrote the poem/lyrics.
I will let Ken know you used his version of my poem...you rocked it dude so I'm sure he will like it..sorry it's taken me so long to find it.
Thanx for youre feedback...! Very nice...
If you or Ken have other vocals I can use... please let me know... always looking for nice vocals to boost up my tracks... :-)
If you are interested you can listen to some of my other productions @ www.soundcloud.com/LummaryField
This is probably one of the best collabs I have heard on this site...no disrespect intended to previous collaborators, but for me absolutely everything has fallen into place...I'm a little bit stunned, but in a good way of course. Congratulations to you four amazing talents.
Hi Elaine...I've been wanting to produce a full on composition with these guys for quite awhile..so I knew it would fall into place eventually..we've all collaborated before but never all at once,the focus really clicked so to speak...thank you for the great review..Dave,Detlef,Steve and Bill(sounds like that wacky 60's Band!) :)
Ah taking a deep breath right now as I listen. I don't think there is anything wrong in having a lot of synths especially if you use ones that have a kind of ethereal or dreamy quality about them...Maybe you should do some spoken word for this...but anyway...I like it. :)
I really like the energy that you had in the intro...and I'm glad you brought that back in again...I think I would describe this more as rock than metal, but only because of the years of listening to the kind of music my husband likes.
Very nice!
Did I hear this track when you made it? I just searched my tracks and couldn't find it in the collection, although I see you don't have it for download. I would really like a copy if possible.
This is such a well constructed piece, not a thing out of place.
Thanks for using my vocals :)
I would have liked to heard a slower intro because the track seemed to start really quickly and took me by surprise a little.
Still a nice and fresh sounding piece :)
The idea of you making music with a gun to your head is an interesting visual lol. Thankfully it didn't put you off your stride.
I like the subby sounding bass...I'm definitely picking up a dub vibe more so than the reggae you referred to...still it's all good.
:)
I'm glad you are still here Elaine. Looperman would not be the same without you. As soon as the track is finished I will gladly send you a copy. My music creation goes a bit slower since I moved and now I have to be a lot more quiet.
Hey just saw you at the bottom of the screen. I hope everything is ok with you. Kind of strange I was only talking about you the other day and the fact you hadn't been on site for a while.
Good to see you back :)
I like this....it definitely has a dark and slightly sinister vibe about it. Just needs a rapper I reckon.
heheh i em glad that i em backk......hehehe that is nice hearing from you.....and about me what did you talked..
you know life is hard working working,traveling ect..
but now i em back..soon new track hip hop.rnb,dnb
from me
RP
Pretty cool. You've got it going on here...I mean maybe a little crowded in places for my personal taste, but it all seems to flow well. I really appreciate the energetic vibe.
Thank you, I agree with it having overcrowding issues in places as my methods were not the most brilliant for the creation of this. After getting the beat built I live mixed every sound layer on top of one another.Appreciate the input tremendously!
Wow that is sooo spooky I am just re-working some of my vocal loops and was so taken aback to hear my "I want you" loop at the beginning of this song...lol.
Thanks for using it.
Plenty of energy in this song...haven't checked your video yet...I hope to shortly though :)
Hi Elaine, so you are the girl with the beautiful voice. I had the girls in the video mime the " I want you" I will put a new link for the video shortly. The video was on youtube and somebody complained but I got about 5,000 hits in 5 months. Hope to hear some more of your work, do you sing?
Thanks again for your loop. I have actually used a few of your other loops with some dance music.
this is the link of our new video http://youtu.be/stlAiOnAxW0
Robert
Last week I had to turn off a TV programme about Armageddon...I mean life is depressing enough at times right?
I'm thinking that maybe your levels might need adjusting slightly because I had to turn down the volume and even then the bass was kicking the hell out of my speakers...It's kind of a different take on DnB for me, but there is definitely potential here.
:)
I take my hat off to you for dropping some dubstep on this site before it became the "in" thing. Not a bad track at all.
I guess there is some truth in the comments about it being slightly loud, but in the right setting that wouldn't be a problem.
I like it :)
I agree that this is a laid back and relaxing song to listen to. I think the strumming probably encourages that feel.
I just realised that your vocals remind me a little bit of Cyndi Lauper...I hope you find that comparison complimentary? Sometimes saying "oh you remind me of" has brought bad results including some guy deleting the review I left him lol.
Anyway, very nice really enjoyed listening.
Elaine
on Looking Back by BrokenScythe
It's great as an instrumental but I could definitely imagine someone laying some vocals down too.
A nice and mellow listen for me on a sunny day in the UK.
Elaine
on Pher ft Eshar - Hide The Sad Songs by Pher
I will let Ken know you used his version of my poem...you rocked it dude so I'm sure he will like it..sorry it's taken me so long to find it.
Elaine/eshar
Hi,
I've got loads of acapellas uploaded
https://www.looperman.com/users/detail/583767
not sure about Ken. I will stop by your page on Soundcloud later.
Thanx for youre feedback...! Very nice...
If you or Ken have other vocals I can use... please let me know... always looking for nice vocals to boost up my tracks... :-)
If you are interested you can listen to some of my other productions @ www.soundcloud.com/LummaryField
Grtz Lummary Field
(formerly known as Pher)
on THE DISTANCE by Planetjazzbass
Elaine
on Peace Of Mind by Music4Life
Elaine
on dont tempt me by conohamaru
on Dj Voide feat ElaineSharp - Sunrise by DjVoide
on Found by JWilson
Very nice!
Elaine
on Collaboration with crypt by KATETHEGREAT
Elaine
on Seba - Painted Sky(ETsuave REMIX) by ETsuave
I'm not sure about all the various transitions, I mean in themselves there is nothing wrong with them, but they don't really seem to flow smoothly.
That's not a criticism per se, just how my ears perceive it.
Anyway all the best in the competition.
on DJ-WaPer - Ballad Of Dying Sunset by WaPer
on Amber Sun Ray by tinphish
This is such a well constructed piece, not a thing out of place.
Thanks for using my vocals :)
Elaine
on Heaven and Hell by xDJxAspire
Still a nice and fresh sounding piece :)
on Jacks back by Zelab
I like the subby sounding bass...I'm definitely picking up a dub vibe more so than the reggae you referred to...still it's all good.
:)
on Hurt (Featuring Eshar) by anchor
Some great arrangement on your part...I really like your progressions.
Elaine
on Come On Lets Just Go by Music4Life
on Ganja Man by marina41
Good rhythm, just maybe needs some variation in places.
on Going up and down by RoCkYPRODUCTION
Good to see you back :)
I like this....it definitely has a dark and slightly sinister vibe about it. Just needs a rapper I reckon.
Elaine
you know life is hard working working,traveling ect..
but now i em back..soon new track hip hop.rnb,dnb
from me
RP
on Let it Go by JerichoDani
on Just the Beginning by Jawshoeah
Welcome to the site :)
on Style not Swagger Remix SeeSharp mix by SeeSharp
I've been known as E# though :)
Hey this is cool...I'm glad I pressed play.
If I can offer some advice...make sure you check out other member's tracks and leave reviews...you will definitely get shown some love back.
Anyway welcome to the site.
on im gonna eat your by walram1
Thanks for using it.
Plenty of energy in this song...haven't checked your video yet...I hope to shortly though :)
Elaine
Thanks again for your loop. I have actually used a few of your other loops with some dance music.
this is the link of our new video
http://youtu.be/stlAiOnAxW0
Robert
on They Eyes by JayT0wn
on You dead yet by FanaeBostan
I'm thinking that maybe your levels might need adjusting slightly because I had to turn down the volume and even then the bass was kicking the hell out of my speakers...It's kind of a different take on DnB for me, but there is definitely potential here.
:)
The bass was supposed to be obnoxiously loud, although the saw I used will be replaced, when I can put together a decent sound.
Thanks for taking the time to review the track!
on Enter the Void by GRAVEFLOWERS
I guess there is some truth in the comments about it being slightly loud, but in the right setting that wouldn't be a problem.
I like it :)
Elaine
on Somehow by EVRiM
I just realised that your vocals remind me a little bit of Cyndi Lauper...I hope you find that comparison complimentary? Sometimes saying "oh you remind me of" has brought bad results including some guy deleting the review I left him lol.
Anyway, very nice really enjoyed listening.
Elaine
Thanx E!