DaddyLongLegs

Love the unique dubstep track man!! So grimey it feels like worms are crawling in my head! Haha only thing I'd suggest is taking the reverb off the snare after the intro..., it'd kind of monotonous and intruding after a while... my feeling. Maybe add rides and change up the beat more? But the bass with piano accents is wicked. Keep working on it!

Very cool first attempt at this track! The noises all sound really high quality and not clashing. Good progression.. maybe the intro is a bit long and I agree that the drums sound too rockish- maybe good for a intro but after a drop or something change them up to add more punch and change up the hi-hat/closed/open/ride/panning.

Like the progression the most.

Pretty sick, and heavy sounding electronic! I love the noises and sounds, all good quality. Only think lacking really is a melody or a memorable hook type thing.. Keep working on it!

Awesome beats, sounds, everything! Maybe a more prominent melody going through more of the song than just the piano would make it more interesting and memorable.

Definitely reminds me of rush hour and this crazy complex world we live in though. GJ!

O.M.G. a GIRRLLL making DUBSTEPP?!?!?!?!??!?!?!!? IMPOSSIBLE Hahaha jk this is sick and better than some of the crap guys like me make! I love the remix in the beginning and how the bass abruptly enters, but still seamlessly transitioning into grime! Impressive! The bells keep the christmas feel and the bass brings in the xmas feel haha (the party side of christmas :P) Sick percussion quality too! I'm thinking some subtle ride or hihat coming in towards the middle would definitely enhance this beat too along with widening the bass and maybe at some point the bassline could change up it's melody, but that's all the constructive criticism I can come up with. Overall sweet tune. Merry Christmas!

Awesome awesome awesome! Definitely a bullfighting or cowboy riding through an open desert at dusk song. You did a great job arranging the percussion loops and beautiful guitar and bass playing. The harmonica adds to it perfectly and overall a moving piece.

Really good arrangement and progression! Like the combo of piano brass and guitar. Only suggestion I can think of is master the drums and make them pop a little more! Love it!

Not bad but the bassline that comes is out of key and pretty simple, maybe jazz it up a little to match the sick beat you made?

Awesome song! I really love the high pitched bending melody, very unique and happy! The beat is solid and groovy, but I would listen to StreetsofNeon and work a little but more on it! The intro could use some more work, maybe add a buildup then dropoff and then come in with the melody. Also the bass drum is kind of lacking lower frequencies and the slight natural reverb that makes trance songs so entrancing. Great song as it is, and with a little more polishing I think could really be a hit. Oh and thanks for reviewing my track!

I really like this track a lot! Beautiful progression and arrangement. Only things I could think of to improve it is making the bassline more bassy and prominent. Also maybe a bit of reverb effects on the vocals. Other than that love love love faving for sure.

Hey I would definitely agree that it fits more of a cinematic type background feel. I could definitely see hearing this in the opening scenes of a Scifi or murder mystery or something like that. The drum dropoff towards the end is a little too abrupt followed by even more abrupt shwooshing noises that don't really flow with it, so keep working on it! Maybe extend it, add more of a buildup in the beginning to add depth like Parker said and maybe a little breakdown in the middle? Just my thoughts, but this is quality ambiance! Good job!

EDIT - I like the wooshing noises too, just the placement of the ending ones was out of time I believe.

Dude this is awesome! And yes, the vibe given from the track definitely fits the description, but also adds more of a paranoid fleeing vibe towards the end. But after reading the description I expected more of a ambientness to the beginning and more of an abrupt transition into chaos, maybe you could add some delay or more reverb effects to the synth in the beginning and a subtle bassline? The intro is kind of lacking... But other than that I really like it, good beat and progression and pimpin vocal samples.

I hate hip hop but I could actually see this being used by Eminem or Dre or something. Pretty sick.

Now this ain't bad at all! Actually pretty damn groovy in the middle; could use a more defined outro, higherquality/punchier percussion instruments, and some mastering, but overall I'm loving it!

Not diggin' it. The melody/bassline sounds too trancy to be accompanied by a Hiphop drum beat and an excessive amount of "Hey's," and overall it's a bit repetitive.

Sorry man.

Reply:

Hey sorry for lag in replying, but I do everything! Not saying I'm great at all of them but I've been a musician, mainly drummer, since 10 yrs old. Right now just makin beats on FL Studio, would love to have you stop by my tracks and tell me what you think.

Ryan

P.S. Did you update this song? It sounds better than when I left the first review.

Haha I played it really loud with a sub, sounds amazing. A deaf person could jam out to this!

Totally reminds me of bathtime... xD

Not too shabby! Good progression and sound quality. A catchier melody, and more versatility of notes/instruments might improve it but for your first song, great job!