GramoChopin

Very variant and cinematic rooted piece thyroid. only thing i heard that was a problem was by in the 1:48 the choir ended too soon and the track took a alternate turn. i like this. i also hear a familiar sound in hear from a certain refill in reason that i've used as well. but i could be mistaken. anyways, overall the track is solid. i just think some of the lingering of the strings from that first breakdown was a little long and you could of maybe expanded on those nice keys. and i like the fx too, from here right? i've heard it before. good work. peace

Neobane

Wheres the rest of it stephen? this a nice idea, i like it. expand some more to it and make it full length, this has alotta potential. nice one. peace

Neobane

That falling dunning donen thing was a sound i used in one of my tracks i called cross. heh ironic. you must have used reason to make this, this is nice though man, a couple of things could be expanded, maybe some variants in the strings and one extra sound. something suttle. and i spit on that beat that i liked from you, that wiz type beat. i dunno if you got my message but i left a whole 3rd verse open for you, and i already gotta hook. if you still wanna lay a verse down, hit me up.

Alright i might send it by tommorow, just been busy with school, until then, you can expect it.

Neobane

Smooth indeed man, i like the feel to this. big ups man. if i do something with this, ill let you know.

Will do man, once i get off break from college i might do at their pro studio. ima try to get in there.

Neobane

Very unique ambient-ness gabe. one thing that bothered me through these nice studio headphones of mine, is that lead pad is a slight bit loud. it could be turned down a tad. or a trick i just recently learned. duplicate the pad and pan one all the way hard right and the other hard left. and turn the volume down a little. it'll give a smooth wide effect, it sounds really nice. other than that, alotta suspense in this building to something sinister i would believe. nice job man!

Neobane

Complete Tron soundtrack FWD!!! this a great track man! nothing more to say but to fav and download! keep em coming brudda!

Neobane

Very soothing yet aggressive track all in one cohesive mix. the lead synth sounds as if it is screaming in pain but yet sounds like triumph to one's soul. the guitar represents life in all it's quick occurrence at the speed of a thought. the drum forever beats and lingers only to one day stop beating and die out. this is a perfect representation of life itself jazz, especially with the minor sound fx in the background towards the end. excellent job. peace

Neobane

This is a good track J, but i think the drums have a little bit too much compression from what i'm hearing. try a ratio of 4:1 and boost the highs a little with maybe almost a frequency of 8 kHz and a narrow q(if they have a q knob in what you compose on). and sometimes (if you use reason at all) i'll choose 3 different snares in the redrum and have them hit at the same time to give a sort of layer to them and flesh out the snare volume overall. other than that, the drum line was my only problem. love the synths and all the other representations of winter on here. peace.

Neobane

LMFAO. this kills any fronting female in tha club asap lol the only thing i'd work on is the mixing of the vocals, it could be clearer. try some parametic eq, and raise some highs with a thin layer of reverb to liven them up. good job though.

Neobane

i hate when people download and dont say nothing. this is a great track man. i like the description and title too. really gives off a god feeling for some reason too and then some cartoonish feelings from that xylophone. ha great track man. downloaded.

Neobane

I dont know what the guy below is hearing harmonically, but i don't think there should be much harmonic content in this track. it spews a never ending ambience to it, so in result, lingers and doesnt flow but yet speaks a strange language from within you. so i think it sounds good enough with it lingering besides harmonically/symphonically carrying itself throughout. this also reminds me of a bit of shadow hearts soundtrack. it's a great dark rpg that i think you should check out. anyways, i like this so much, i'm going to download it. great job man.

p.s. i re edited that battle on the grid track. see how you like it now.

NeoBane

Nicely mastered indeed my brudda. really good quality. good work.

NeoBane

Beautiful man, truly beautiful marius. nice track man

NeoBane

This is nice, but i've heard similar cinematic tracks with a slight touch of a hip hop snare or vinyl scratch like you have. it kind of mixes up the cinematic feel of it, and for a moment i thought someone was going to rap. especially with the initial hi hat. nonetheless this is a nice piece, and i like the ambient vox of the imprisoned man or maybe woman. i think you could add more to this, maybe a piano variation and a suttle lingering string. just a suggestion though. nice track.

NeoBane

Very deep piece man. i sense alotta imagery in this. it also has a sort of sad depressive feel to it and a "patience is a virtue" theme to it. and the mix sounds about right, this is a classical piece, and their mostly made to be suttle and peaceful. although just a tad touch of eq could flesh the piano out more and a side of reverb could liven it up. just a tad though. not too much. regardless you when my vote for best classical piece i've heard.

NeoBane

I havent notice your mixing is pretty good stephen. im glad to be back to listen to great music. this is really nice man! keep creating the universal connection to all.

NeoBane

This is a nice track ALX. my only problem is which i also forget to mention on your other track is the mix seems a little loud. the intro part to this has a wide amount of bass frequencies i think should be turned down just a tad. however it could be maybe you didnt pan enough to give breath to the other underlying pad so its kind of struggling to be clear and indistinct. nonetheless this is ethereal sanctuary and a pure ambient listen for sure. nice one

Bane

Nice one man, i dont know if i ever wrote you any imagery on your old tracks on my old account, but anyways here goes, typing while listening. i sense a clashing cascade of emotions that begin suttle but then infuse themself with dramatic feelings and tensions rise slightly again only to be soothed by the calming voice of what seems to be almost an angel singing a choir. But yet the one listening to this angels voice begins wonder who it's listening to, and singing such a heavenly rhythm. the person then realizes where their hearing this soothing rhythm coming from within, and the person opens their mouth and suddenly sings that soothing rhythm....

Bane

One more review from me brudda along with some imagery.(typing while listening here) i capture a suttle atmosphere in the beginning and then transforms into a battle of hardships and then calms down to heal wounded tensions and emotions and then the people who endured the pains of the battle begin to reminis on past peaceful times and then a horrible interruption ensews those people who just finish their battle to be confronted with yet another hardship....

Bane

Your music desperately needs more reviews and favs, this is amazing. i cannot ignore its quality and precense. very nice brudda.

Bane

Incredible man what do you use to master? or is that the default quality of the loops you used? because their live and full. i can hear this in alot of rpgs. this magix maker program sounds pretty good. i personally use reason and do my mix their as well, but from there the mastering process is a forever mystery to me, luckily im in school for this. once again a grand show of cinematic richness and dominance. lol good imagery here.

Bane

This is awesome brudda. has a tron feel it to it for some reason. i just watched that movie and i made a track dedicated to it, i just gotta load it up. but yes, very nice ambience, and the transitions are excellent. good work

Bane

This has more potential to be expanded upon, but the snap kind of kills the genre, and gives it more dark hip hop feel. maybe expand the choir, add some variation, and change up the piano it'll sound more cinematic. but regardless, this has potential, you should just build upon it.

Bane

Very imagery heavy track brudda. this is a nice composition, what did you use to compose this? and if you did any mastering it sounds on point, i can hear this in a rpg or something. very nice.

Bane

People are underrating the cinematic genre vastly, it can potentially be any type genre it wants while keeping its own indistinct sound. very nice track, and the mixing is on point, everything sounds panned out and carefully placed in its own spot. once again, very nice.

Bane