Sounds like some beyonce or alicia keys ishh loll,.
Really feeling it though, theres some beautiful melodies in there..
Really clean and professional sounding-good work..
Really really feelin the piano and strings and drums...the only thing i can criticize is the guitar..i feel its just a little of the beat or melody of the track, it feels to fast and/or repetitive.. but other than that its nice.,btw-feeling the fx in the beginning, really sets the tone nicely..
Not really my genre, but still really well put together,.even though i think i uptempo hat would do this beat justice..and its distorted in my headphones..but good production skills here
Yo,.great track forril..great way to take a already great sample and take it to a even higher level..
And even though this showed yu can definatly produce-ima do better wit that "never see me down" pella loll,.aint cuttin or nothin tho
thanks for showin love u funny as hell bout dat Neva See Me Down that track was a spur of the moment track but hey if u think u can do betta let me know when u get done
It peakked after the second transition for me, when all the high synths flowed in,.I liked it, the lead seemed timed a tadd off. &&i think the genre should be dance loll
Nice track though i like it, quality stuff
Reallly diggin the synth melody here,. reminds me of a song ive heard before, but i cant think of what it is haha-but the drums may be a bit to loud in my opinion, but i dont really produce rnb so idk haha.,
Nice track tho forril
ALrightt, i like it..
Trying to find some contructive critism butt i really cant haha,.
I think an electric guitar would sound really good on this if yu use the right kind.
But its realy well put together, nice stuff here.
&&If yu ever wanna collab on a beat, juss hit me up haha
Thanks! Yeah, def incomplete...by far. I have ideas on what to do with it...I just need to figure out how to do it all. Still very unfamiliar with the program and everything it can do. Thanks for the feedback!
But i really like this track,
some great melodies in there.
Loll i can recognize all the fl vocals yu used tho, but they are mixed greatt.
Great work on mixing a lot of different elements into one cohesive package.
Yuu got a lot more plays that me haha! im jeallouss!! ;D
lol thanks dude.
And as you said, yes, I used some of the FL's basic loops. But tried to mix 'em good.
Normally I make my own loops, but this time I wanted to try out what FL had to offer lmao.
Its pretty good.
The synth dont seem to have a certain meloady, soo its kinda random sounding.
The drums are hot, aint gonn lie; but they arent that in sync with the synth
Ndd the strings come in a little harsh.
Butt overall, its a really laid back, relaxing beat.
I like it, just look at the things i pointed outt
eTe
iight, certaintly a lot better on the verses. I actually likes those verses. Buuttt,,i see why yu dont sing often hahah, no offense. But yea good imprvement.
and btw. yu just made my week by saying i inspired you to do it again. I mean, over money, success, women-everything. The one thing i hope my lyics and music do is inspire, thats why i consider KiD CuDi as one of my biggest influences. I mean, people underrate cudder all the time, but the man just like, has this certain thing about him(nooo homoooo!!!) I can just relate to him.
But thank you, that meant a lot haha
haha any time mine. haha yea singin and me dont mix, but if i plug away at it.. it will come to. but tis truth man. thanks for the honest out looks man much respect. and thanks again bro haha
Yoo. You are a very talented person at strings and piano, wayy better than mee. I really like what your doing and the style you are bringing(this applies to all our tracks).
This one in particular, i would improve the drums, something about them is unappealing. Maybe add a hat or snare to fit the whole "funeral" theme.
Btw, this is a beautiful idea for a song, and sorry for your loss
Thanks for the review. I think the drums kind of sound off beacuse there is an odd wooden percussive beat underneath the congas. It made sense at the time haha, thanks!
that piano is gorgeous haha, its a very well produced song. Like the drops a lot, that background chorus fits perfectly. Drums are pretty basic rnb stuff but still are nice. Good trackk haha,.
Try to find someone for vocals on this one
lol u do the beat and how bout a sound that I can put a melody around. I want it to be 50 /50 so u tell me what u want how bout that. Im negotiable for whatever u want to do. Any genre too.
Thx. I think you do good. I was just sayin melodies r the key . Really thats all. I would be more than happy to do something with you. U do the beat and Ill do the melody
Thats cool thx for taking you time to listen. The song Chemistry my sister is doing the hook I made 10 bars hooks and 12 bar verses so thats why its like it is for that reason. and you can tell when the hook is bout to come in cause I used wind chimes and took the guitar and strings away and used a complete different pad sound
iightt, i agree with J1K, it does have really nice melodies. It does need a little something to make it great though, dont get me wrong it all works very well together, and it a really good beat. Much better than anything ive made sofarr(wait a month;D,,im always improvinng)..Another thing is it doesnt seem to have clear verse and chorus sections, just a looping sound--but i guess the vocals would eliminate that...
All in all, beautiful track, just needs subtle improvements...good stuff keep iit upp haha
good trackk, some really nice melodies in there. What i might do to improve it is at 0:45 there is a small little drop off where the loops stop. Bring in stronger drums and maybe a new sound. It could do wonderrrs. Listen to Wale's The Problem for an example of what im saying..
But i really do like the track, just trying to help you improve itt
As I just wrote to John, ive put vox on it and it changed the feel of the track significantly (for the better). So lets hope i get permission to post that :p
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Really feeling it though, theres some beautiful melodies in there..
Really clean and professional sounding-good work..
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And even though this showed yu can definatly produce-ima do better wit that "never see me down" pella loll,.aint cuttin or nothin tho
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Nice track though i like it, quality stuff
ndd i forgott-maybe a clap in there?
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Nice track tho forril
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Trying to find some contructive critism butt i really cant haha,.
I think an electric guitar would sound really good on this if yu use the right kind.
But its realy well put together, nice stuff here.
&&If yu ever wanna collab on a beat, juss hit me up haha
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maybe a synth, piano, e-guitar wud really improve this !
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But i actually really like the elctro elements.
Yuu a really talented producer
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But i really like this track,
some great melodies in there.
Loll i can recognize all the fl vocals yu used tho, but they are mixed greatt.
Great work on mixing a lot of different elements into one cohesive package.
Yuu got a lot more plays that me haha! im jeallouss!! ;D
And as you said, yes, I used some of the FL's basic loops. But tried to mix 'em good.
Normally I make my own loops, but this time I wanted to try out what FL had to offer lmao.
Cheers
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The synth dont seem to have a certain meloady, soo its kinda random sounding.
The drums are hot, aint gonn lie; but they arent that in sync with the synth
Ndd the strings come in a little harsh.
Butt overall, its a really laid back, relaxing beat.
I like it, just look at the things i pointed outt
eTe
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and btw. yu just made my week by saying i inspired you to do it again. I mean, over money, success, women-everything. The one thing i hope my lyics and music do is inspire, thats why i consider KiD CuDi as one of my biggest influences. I mean, people underrate cudder all the time, but the man just like, has this certain thing about him(nooo homoooo!!!) I can just relate to him.
But thank you, that meant a lot haha
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This one in particular, i would improve the drums, something about them is unappealing. Maybe add a hat or snare to fit the whole "funeral" theme.
Btw, this is a beautiful idea for a song, and sorry for your loss
-Angelus
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Try to find someone for vocals on this one
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All in all, beautiful track, just needs subtle improvements...good stuff keep iit upp haha
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But i really do like the track, just trying to help you improve itt
your improve suggestions are always wellcome!
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its a good start with fl tho