this is a very well produced song, regardless if you made your own sounds or not. i just used it to record a pella, so i kinda wanted to show some love loll,,but keep it up, i dig this
the vocals are to quiet, and also need to be compressed, or cleaned up in some way, other than that the rap itself is iight, but its an iight track, oo and the beat melody needs to change somewhere or sometime, its too repitive,
but dont get the wrong idea, its a decent track, just always keep trying to get better and always stay focused
it has potential, and so do you if your still learning. My biggest flaw of the song is that it really doesnt have a theme, its kinda all over the place, another thing is the stops seems slow, like the beat stops, and comes back too late. the only other thing is that the piano/synth seemed a little high and the verse seemed a little empty. And im not trying to bring you down im just showing ways you could imporve, but it has potential
its iight, i like it to an extent. it has this feeling like your waiting for the beat to drop and it just kinda-doesnt. thats just my opinion tho, other than that nice track,
the rhymes are better than a lot of people on here, the beat is nice, good flow seems like its pretty well timed. check my stuff if u wanna, tell me if u wanna collab idk
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the vocals are to quiet, and also need to be compressed, or cleaned up in some way, other than that the rap itself is iight, but its an iight track, oo and the beat melody needs to change somewhere or sometime, its too repitive,
but dont get the wrong idea, its a decent track, just always keep trying to get better and always stay focused
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