first: that's a very very beautiful track!!!
nothing to criticize about the vocals ....
but the bassline: it consists of A-C#-G, but for my ears it should be A-C-G, correct me if I'm wrong ...
I think this would be much better, and with that change I would like to try to add some guitars if you don't mind .... just hit me up if that would be ok ...
about the synths everything has been said before: perfect!!!
it's really a great song!!!
thx a lot for doing this ..... I'm totally happy with it!!!!
awesome beat and great sounds ....
over all a real good song!!
one word to the bass: it seems to be a few cents too low .... but this is a small thing ...
love the power of the beat, very very tight ...
great work!!
peace, rei
oh, it would be great if you could send me the lyrics ....
hey. Sorry bro, but I havent been on here in a while. Here's the lyrics:
Chorus
Now bring me back to the place where we first me
Now bring me back to the place where its only You
My protection, my armor, my faith, my Truth
Now bring me back to the place where we first me
Now bring me back to the place where its only You
Verse 1
Now bring me back to the place where we first me
I didnt have a welcome sign on my door step
I had my back to the wall, had my head to the ground
Had a clinched fist in my forecep
Yea, I tried to be that nice guy
But people all around me never seemed to like me
So I, put a fence up, didnt let nobody get a peek-inside the catastrophe formally know as my life
But I realized
From prayer and seein' signs
There existed a hope just like a Life line
And I didnt need to fight just to stay alive
And He's workin as I'm watchin from the sidelines
So i took the fence down let His light shine
Cleaned up my life, opened up the blinds
Now I shine in the dark like a litebright
And a night light tell cats of the Light
Repeat Chorus
My intuition and vision used to be on a mission
The competition used to hit it with precision listen
But Christ changed my lane, my name, my aim, my frame covered my stain and broke the chain
See I'm sorta like broken mirror
Reflectin His image, but in small pieces
Till He called me back, and I'm glad He did it
Livin in the New Era like a brand fitted
So i'm screamin "where my soilders at?"
Recogiize that they forgiven and they on tha track
Got the Spirit and the Bible packed
So when enemy attacks we know how to react and fight back
So when you hit that rock bottom
Free from the submission, I aint talkin Dwane Johnson
If Christ still livin, and Grace still givin
I'ma read what is written and recite it to tha wicked
hey, this is beautiful!!!!
seems to be recorded live ... and that's very hard to do ...
so I can say this is good work!!
the trombone is the highlight, sounds sooo sad ...
I really like this track!!!
ok, as I said on your myspace:
I really like the arrangement and the soundscape of this song ...
it's very special, very creative and catchy ...
love it!!!
yeah!!!
that's awesome ... very smooth, very groovy and funky!!
and perfect laid back singing ...
must be awesome to play it live!!!!!
again great work ...
ooh, that's a very good track ....
I agree with oetloek, the percussion is awesome ...
there's something hypnotic in this track!
great work, real great work ...
wow, this is very very interesting ...
brilliant beat ... uncommon style ...
only one little thing: you should bring out the (perfect) vocals a little more, they should dominate the song ....
oh, and there's a little change in the volume level in the middle of the tune (starting at 2.52 min) ....
vocals are very tight and exact, are there any fx on the vocals?? a slight flanger or something?
over all it's a brilliant song, I dig every second ...
great work!!!!
Thanks very much for the critique :-) I know the vocals should be louder... this was a remaster, my first one clipped a LOT. I guess I was so paranoid about clipping I ended up making the vox too quiet lol. There is a flanger on the vocals... I use Adobe Audition to do my vocals mainly because it's the program I'm used to for that.. then I adjust volumes in Acid Pro. Thanks for listening, glad you liked it :-)
delicious, funkalicious ....
excellent impro on the sax!!!!
if I ever come to the uk we'll have to share the stage, cause everytime I hear one of your tracks I immediately have to grab the guitar ...
love your work slap ....
fantastic style!!!!!!!!!
this is unusual and progressive ... something you really should work out (I mean the style ...)
very interesting direction ...
top notch!!!
again awesome songwriting, clear structure and of course very very powerful!!!!
your timing is perfect ... one of the things I pay the most attention to ..... cause it's the basic element ....
deep respect man!!! rei
oh wow!!!
fantastic work on the strings and top sound ...
most of all I love your songwriting, very creative!! your using of noise is very effective for the track ...
great job!!!
awesome drumsound and groove ....
deep respect for the guitar!!!
everything is great here .....
you definately show us what family means!!!
and of course what's music all about - FUN!!
on Part of Me by Resist_Agony
nothing to criticize about the vocals ....
but the bassline: it consists of A-C#-G, but for my ears it should be A-C-G, correct me if I'm wrong ...
I think this would be much better, and with that change I would like to try to add some guitars if you don't mind .... just hit me up if that would be ok ...
about the synths everything has been said before: perfect!!!
it's really a great song!!!
peace, rei
(and thx for the kind rev ...)
on Awake (song) by versetile
thx a lot for doing this ..... I'm totally happy with it!!!!
awesome beat and great sounds ....
over all a real good song!!
one word to the bass: it seems to be a few cents too low .... but this is a small thing ...
love the power of the beat, very very tight ...
great work!!
peace, rei
oh, it would be great if you could send me the lyrics ....
Chorus
Now bring me back to the place where we first me
Now bring me back to the place where its only You
My protection, my armor, my faith, my Truth
Now bring me back to the place where we first me
Now bring me back to the place where its only You
Verse 1
Now bring me back to the place where we first me
I didnt have a welcome sign on my door step
I had my back to the wall, had my head to the ground
Had a clinched fist in my forecep
Yea, I tried to be that nice guy
But people all around me never seemed to like me
So I, put a fence up, didnt let nobody get a peek-inside the catastrophe formally know as my life
But I realized
From prayer and seein' signs
There existed a hope just like a Life line
And I didnt need to fight just to stay alive
And He's workin as I'm watchin from the sidelines
So i took the fence down let His light shine
Cleaned up my life, opened up the blinds
Now I shine in the dark like a litebright
And a night light tell cats of the Light
Repeat Chorus
My intuition and vision used to be on a mission
The competition used to hit it with precision listen
But Christ changed my lane, my name, my aim, my frame covered my stain and broke the chain
See I'm sorta like broken mirror
Reflectin His image, but in small pieces
Till He called me back, and I'm glad He did it
Livin in the New Era like a brand fitted
So i'm screamin "where my soilders at?"
Recogiize that they forgiven and they on tha track
Got the Spirit and the Bible packed
So when enemy attacks we know how to react and fight back
So when you hit that rock bottom
Free from the submission, I aint talkin Dwane Johnson
If Christ still livin, and Grace still givin
I'ma read what is written and recite it to tha wicked
Repeat Chorus 2x
Glad you liked it.
Peace
on The Rainbow People by Planetjazzbass
jazz ambience at it's best ...
to me it's about life: you can relax, but the fear remains ...
perfect job!!!
cheers, rei
on In the presence of Cam by Planetjazzbass
thx for recording and sharing such moments ....
respect, rei
on Celtic dream;Slap Johnson by SLAPJOHNSON
rei
on The Train Song by spacemanjones
seems to be recorded live ... and that's very hard to do ...
so I can say this is good work!!
the trombone is the highlight, sounds sooo sad ...
I really like this track!!!
peace, rei
on Dancing Dwarfs by freelinger
I really like the arrangement and the soundscape of this song ...
it's very special, very creative and catchy ...
love it!!!
peace, rei
on Something For Nothing by freelinger
that's awesome ... very smooth, very groovy and funky!!
and perfect laid back singing ...
must be awesome to play it live!!!!!
again great work ...
peace, rei
on moonbeams by freelinger
a great song, a great voice and a lovely and soulful arrangement ...
brilliant!!!
I really enjoyed listening ....
peace, rei
oh, and welcome on looperman!!!
on Alcohol by Kubita
I agree with oetloek, the percussion is awesome ...
there's something hypnotic in this track!
great work, real great work ...
peace, rei
on Thats My Nightmare by Planetjazzbass
sounds almost psychedelic!!
interesting track ....
peace, rei
on Drink'n N' Smokin' by DjSicAzAids
respect for your skills ....
peace, rei
on Chemical by ACIDPLANE
the guitar lick reminds me a little of The Grateful Dead, but anyway ...
hypnotic track!!
cool work ... love it!!
peace, rei
on transmutational (shapeshifter mix) by fiend
you definately reached the next level!!!!
brilliant work professor fiend ...
peace, rei
on Goodbye by fiery
brilliant beat ... uncommon style ...
only one little thing: you should bring out the (perfect) vocals a little more, they should dominate the song ....
oh, and there's a little change in the volume level in the middle of the tune (starting at 2.52 min) ....
vocals are very tight and exact, are there any fx on the vocals?? a slight flanger or something?
over all it's a brilliant song, I dig every second ...
great work!!!!
peace, rei
on Riffington by arachnidzone
that's a very very interesting track, so creative ...
what loops did you use??? I suppose you chopped them and rearranged them ...
great work!!
peace, rei
on What Key;Saxobones by SLAPJOHNSON
excellent impro on the sax!!!!
if I ever come to the uk we'll have to share the stage, cause everytime I hear one of your tracks I immediately have to grab the guitar ...
love your work slap ....
peace, rei
on Hard Die Rock by heq
thx for using some of my loops .... really like what you did with them ....
interesting track with a lot of power ...
peace, rei
on Hungry by Jeromy_Graves
this is unusual and progressive ... something you really should work out (I mean the style ...)
very interesting direction ...
cheers, rei
on 333 by Jeromy_Graves
again awesome songwriting, clear structure and of course very very powerful!!!!
your timing is perfect ... one of the things I pay the most attention to ..... cause it's the basic element ....
deep respect man!!! rei
on Kill The.... Machines by Jeromy_Graves
fantastic work on the strings and top sound ...
most of all I love your songwriting, very creative!! your using of noise is very effective for the track ...
great job!!!
peace, rei
on Pumpkin Pie by DanBearcat
deep respect for the guitar!!!
everything is great here .....
you definately show us what family means!!!
and of course what's music all about - FUN!!
I enjoyed every second ....
cheers, rei
on Astral Perfection by fiend
where the hell do I get a pj now??
peace, rei
on Buddrumming Spooky Funk by Buddrumming
very laid back playing, awesome ....
low tempo playing is a lot harder than playing fast, this track is done perfect!!!
respect ....
peace, rei
on Merick Funk by DanBearcat
that's awesome work ........
peace, rei