I'm getting a Kirby's Dreamland vibe here, and that's just awesome. It'd make for a cool Kirby vs. mash up on youtube against some of his greatest foes and maybe some Super Smash Brothers footage. I enjoyed it, but it ended abruptly. More so a reason I think it would work for a youtube vid.
Is that so? Maybe it just because of the name. =P Kirby is my main in smash, so there is probably some sort of influence in this song. I do have a bunch of Kirby sounds from Melee I'm never going to use, though I might put them into another song that's more Kirby oriented. I'll redo this track and make it better for you guys- eventually haha. Thanks for your input.
Nice track, definitely empowering for women overall; but more so for your peers in the hip hop field. I'd turn up the instrumentation just a little more though. Good s**t though. Stay up.
Lose the vox FX, kick up the music. Your flow is is good. Don't be afraid to put yourself out there. Do what you can with what you got, right? Trust me, I know singing can be embarrassing, I'm in a band. Haha! Keep it up bro, keep it up.
tks man,always appreciate feed back and comments,well I never have fear of holding back but you are right when it comes to singing I am hsitant cause I know I cant sing,but I did this for my daughter as an update but I do want to put my all,you sing huh?hmm..might be useful ima check some of your stuff out.tks again for the love.~T.R.I~
As a guitarist, this riff is stock and repetitive. It doesn't really hit that hard. The only way it might hit harder is to downtune the f**k out of it and vary the ryhythms here and there. And then it might appeal to fans of nu metal acts that can't really play beyond the first five frets of their instruments in a one finger power chord fashion. Keep experimenting and you'll get there. The VST sound doesn't help here, but I feel your pain there cause I can't even record my analog bass/guitar playing. I'm stuck using VST's also. Keep at it bro.
Thanks for your review. Ya it's a little repetitive cause I haven't made into a track. I'm just coming up with riffs basically at this point. Some of the best songs ever made had repetitive riffs it's just what you do with those riffs that matters...but thanks for the review!
This track is fire. Sounds like something I'd wish to do. The boy got flow that make me jealous, and the track sounds beautiful. I'm quite fond of piano pieces, and as a bassist myself I'm digging that. I wish I could play a piano though, but I can only half-a** do stuff on Mixcraft. Either way, this track is good sh*t bro. Keeps me inspired to keep up learning my craft and get better at my own raps and music production.
I'm digging it bro, definitely got some great sounds in it. Makes me wish I had more access to some decent tech and not just some video game sounding VST's and all, but hey, I use what I got. Keep up the work, and I hope someone puts something real to it. Peace be with you bro.
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I've got this one in my fav's. It just speaks to me. Definitely a track I wish I had on a mix for my car, that's for sure. You know, any tips you've got towards making good tracks feel free to send my way. I'm a good listening and know how to learn from my superiors. Keep up the good track making bro, my prayers be with you. Peace.
Well, anytime you need some advice just PM me fam. No problem. Lyrics are a bit simple compared to your style in this one. Even tho it's older I think you might like my track Agents Of Influenza. It's a deep and complex lyrical one.
Definitely a track I'd love to listen to on a regular basis. Stuff like this that reminds me why I got into hip hop in the first place. Very well done bro. Deuces!
Commented on Dreamland by SpyderByte
I'm getting a Kirby's Dreamland vibe here, and that's just awesome. It'd make for a cool Kirby vs. mash up on youtube against some of his greatest foes and maybe some Super Smash Brothers footage. I enjoyed it, but it ended abruptly. More so a reason I think it would work for a youtube vid.
Commented on WALK BY by EStallings
Nice track, definitely empowering for women overall; but more so for your peers in the hip hop field. I'd turn up the instrumentation just a little more though. Good s**t though. Stay up.
Commented on Hollywood World-Gapjux-ft Skitzo ILL it Beats by gapjux
Good s**t bro, great s**t actually. I envy the sound, for sure. I gotta learn more about my craft so I can sound like that. Keep it up bro.
Commented on Babi by MrTriMurda
Lose the vox FX, kick up the music. Your flow is is good. Don't be afraid to put yourself out there. Do what you can with what you got, right? Trust me, I know singing can be embarrassing, I'm in a band. Haha! Keep it up bro, keep it up.
Commented on Metal Riffs 18 by remixme2010
As a guitarist, this riff is stock and repetitive. It doesn't really hit that hard. The only way it might hit harder is to downtune the f**k out of it and vary the ryhythms here and there. And then it might appeal to fans of nu metal acts that can't really play beyond the first five frets of their instruments in a one finger power chord fashion. Keep experimenting and you'll get there. The VST sound doesn't help here, but I feel your pain there cause I can't even record my analog bass/guitar playing. I'm stuck using VST's also. Keep at it bro.
Commented on Exersise Your Mind by TESE
This track is fire. Sounds like something I'd wish to do. The boy got flow that make me jealous, and the track sounds beautiful. I'm quite fond of piano pieces, and as a bassist myself I'm digging that. I wish I could play a piano though, but I can only half-a** do stuff on Mixcraft. Either way, this track is good sh*t bro. Keeps me inspired to keep up learning my craft and get better at my own raps and music production.
Commented on LIFE by RUDEBOY305
I'm digging it bro, definitely got some great sounds in it. Makes me wish I had more access to some decent tech and not just some video game sounding VST's and all, but hey, I use what I got. Keep up the work, and I hope someone puts something real to it. Peace be with you bro.
Commented on PUBLIC ENEMY vocal perfect by phantomhim
I've got this one in my fav's. It just speaks to me. Definitely a track I wish I had on a mix for my car, that's for sure. You know, any tips you've got towards making good tracks feel free to send my way. I'm a good listening and know how to learn from my superiors. Keep up the good track making bro, my prayers be with you. Peace.
Commented on Life Story by Tiltedbeats
Definitely a track I'd love to listen to on a regular basis. Stuff like this that reminds me why I got into hip hop in the first place. Very well done bro. Deuces!
Commented on twisted thoughts by talents
I am lovin' this through and through. It's gotta be fire. That bass is kickin' too, real old school like. I love it bro. Keep this ill stuff comin'.