Pnnywze

Are these your own vocals? If so, you should definitely do more songs like this, you really shine on this one. You must've fixed the vocal mixing, because it sounds good to me. Well done!

Sounds old school and new school at the same time. But that's partly because of Yola's vocals, thats his whole vibe. You've given the vocals a pretty solid foundation, tho. In fact, the beat keeps making me think of songs on the first couple of T.I. and Ludacris albums. So Id say it has a late 90's - early 2000's vibe. High Praise, brother.

And I wasnt grouchy, I just dont like being woke up by my phone blowing up at that azz crack of dawn when ive only had like 2 hours of sleep lol. (yeah, it was Jared)

Yeah, I already know Im going to like whatever you upload because your vocals make me smile. Im sure they make everyone smile, if Im being honest. You're a kindred spirit as you are simply a fan of music, like I am. Youre in your element whenever you're singing and that is plain as day for anyone that hears it. I can clearly see the faeries as well as you can, so you've done your job. As always, well done, Kay.

Good shite, brother! I gotta agree with my brother, I wouldnt mind hearing some more songs in Croatian. Its just a cool sounding language. This may have started as a joke, but I can tell you put some care and effort into this one. I hope it paid off for you, man. Well done, my friend.

IDK how I missed this one. I take my inspiration from alot of different places, many of which seem unlikely. But that's why I love music so much, and why I've been making music all my life. A 100% true story - my first words were "I wanna Rock" because I would hear that Twisted Sister song all the time. I swear, and people dont believe it, but its true. Destiny, man. Anyway, this song is inspiring, the structure and the thought process that put it together especially. My producer mind sees that stuff right away, while my musician mind appreciates the melodic elements. So well made it's shiny. Well done sir.

btw i sent you an email to the new address you gave me

Bro u keep uploading at the same time as me, We're cannibalizing each other lol. Nah but really tho this song was so fun to do, and to watch as it came together. Im proud of all of you.

There is some potential here to go a bit further with it, as it's a pretty visual-heavy piece. Storytelling is important, and this has an underlying theme that, as others have said, has an Arabic or middle-eastern vibe. I'd add a few small flourishes using elements with the same kind of vibe just to enhance it a bit. The drum bus needs to be tweaked a bit, but that happens from time to time. Anyway, I'll be sending you an email shortly, so be on the lookout for it. Nice work here, overall. - Pnnywze

ps - Kayos2 is a she, just for the purposes of future comment replies :)

Man we just love u Rita, your voice gives me cold chills nearly every time I hear it.. I brag about u every chance I get, and i had a chance earlier today. I was showing off our collabs to a new vocaist that the group has collabed with (That song will be up pretty soon) and I was like if you dont love Rita we can no longer be friends. But of course he loved the songs :) I will be sending you some new material soon, as well.

I forgot to add that I agree with u on the last man standing sentiment (I am, along with my brother) as well as the dogs. I have a dog and a cat, and if anyone meant them harm, theyd find the wrath of every deity in every pantheon coming for them, same as I would any friend or family member. Thank u for your insight, man.

Hey Cosmo, its easier if I just send u an email with links, so that I did. Especially since 1 of the 4 songs is no longer on the site :(

I hope u like them as much as we do.

U can find those song on The Monzder Squadd's track list here on Looperman

Hello Cosmo, Firstly, Im sorry for your loss, man. I understand, and it must be said that the message hits close to home for me. Ill leave it at that as this is a tribute and my tribute now as well. I liked it from start to finish.
Also, Im glad Rita liked it as well, I thought at some point during the song that it reminds me of some of her songs. She is one of my favorite people and collaborators, (and an honorary member of The Monzder Squadd) and if u want to hear some of my best work, see The Monzder Squadd's track list for 4 different songs featuring Ms.Rita. Theyre very much worth hearing. As for this one, I have someone close to me I want to share it with, so I will return to it very shortly. Thank you brother.

wow this one kinda blew up lol. Im here to confirm The Squadd is incoming....and upon arrival, this song is 1st to be recorded. We only hope we can live up to those lofty expectations :)

Hey Richard, my little brother was right tho, he just forgot to add that humility is what truly makes a man. You are a counter balance for us and we appreciate that. But u also remind us of our greater duty in our lives, and you also reinforce us with your comments and support. Of course we all have those silent battles, Im no different there. But our music gives us a voice, and an outlet, and that alone can be rejoiced over, my friend. Ill always look forward to your music my friend.

Anthony what a great message and song to go with it. Ive followed you for some time now, and I can 100% say that you are a great person with a good heart and lovely music interwoven with positivity. Im grateful for peers like you and Richard being around to balance out the insanity of Pnnywze and the Monzder Squadd lol. Its true though, we are 2 sides of the same coin. Well done and worthy of being heard by many, this one will continue to be with me for awhile. thank you.

Magic is exactly what it is my friend. Working with other creative minds is the only time that i see magic on this kind of scale, and it leaves me more fulfilled and much happier with the art that comes out of me. I hope you had a Similar experience bro, the track certainly shines like you did. Ive only recently become acquainted with music like this, but this is up there with the best ive heard thus far. Great work

Ah, youve got Britt dancin (my wife) a little bit and that's something i havent seen in awhile. It gets a fav for that lol. But also bcuz its quite catchy, and is probably easy to get stuck in your head. And once again i like your sound selection

Nice choice of vocals. I like your sound selection here too. Kinda got an idea or two from this, actually. Im going to be working on some EDM stuff here and there over the next few months, like some Future Bass/garage with The FrenZ, and Latin style hip hop with some producers from reddit. Anyway I like the track overall

Yup. Good stuff man.

Well i will say that its easy to lose track of the artists who does the acapellas etc because of how poorly they are labeled when u download em....luckily we have some MVPs around like Atronical who remember that stuff for us lol. Nah really tho, that was clutch! Lol.
Anyways on a serious note, i remember hearing most of your early songs, and i feel like I can hear whatever your biggest influences were then in this one. Im gonna have to go back and listen to all of your work that i missed, for sure tho. I try to do that for all those that I vibe with the most. Even tho its still a pretty huge list lol. But supporting each other like that is important for the growth of the community and individually. Hearing all the dope stuff everyone does as they evolve over the years is especially rewarding for me, its where i get alot of my inspiration musically, and personally too. Anyway, sorry for the essay i dropped outta nowhere lol. The vocals do fit really well, i agree. As Cyberflares would say, this is a cracking track, bro.

Here you are, Improving upon the sound youve chosen for yourself. I knew you would. Great work man.

Dude Im really glad u shared this. Music can go so many different ways when multiple creative minds are involved. I have felt that way since I was playing guitar as a teenager in a garage, and I feel that way now, all these years later. Its one of the reasons music is magic. Well done man, dont doubt that.

Now this is creativity at its finest. Dont doubt your work, it has promise. It just needs some feature vocalists and some slight polish, thats it. I know people who would like it alot.

This platform is meant for feedback from other musicians and producers, building up to collaborations and therefore access to each other's built in fanbase and network. Creating relationships that help you get to the level youre trying to achieve. Music is difficult, yet it has been my life since I was six years old. I do alot of work with others using my profile here, then my brother posts the work I do with our group on The Monzder Squadd's page. The advice and feedback we have been given in the several years we've been around has helped us grow our sound into what we wanted it to be, and the relationships weve developed has helped us branch out into other platforms. It can be that way or better for you if you approach it that way. You cant get the plays here that you can on Spotify etc, but that takes either a stroke of near impossible luck or alot of money without a network of other producers and musicians.

I like this song alot by the way.