this is solid work.
great piano, strings and pad work, all nicely arranged. nice production value as well. good variation in your drum patterns. dug the organy-synth bell sound you incorporated, as well..made for a nice transition from the main melody.
well done!
..i see..so you can download the free track offered by a generous looperfam...but you cant leave a review?
shady.
you took a pretty chill vox and went all dark with it, and i really liked the juxtoposition. your wobbles are prgressing quite nicely. drum work is on point as well. nice arrangement and overall production value.
good job!
;)
what a lovely ambient dubstep youve created here. i really got lost in the lull of the flutes...perfectly juxtoposed with a surprisingly unobtrusive wobble. production value was spot on. really nice work here.
great job!
ugh, i abhor seeing a frequently downloaded track with no reviews. its bordering on disrespectful! lol
this track has such creativity. your wobbles are intense in all teh right ways. love how much you had fun with their melody variations. great sounding simple drums to accompany the synths...as well as well placed sfx thru out. suburb cutting of the fud vox. overall, a really well constructed piece.
nice work!
your synth work is naughty on this track. i also enjoyed your cutting work..quite creative and makes the piece so much fun to listen to. youve also got some great variations on your wobbles, which i dig.
..showed great production skill..well done!
hey i'm glad u like it! I think i'm gonna go back and change out that hi-pass wobble that jumps in in the very first verse for something that uhh... idunno sounds a bit better... anyway, I think u commented on my original version oh so long ago, what do you think of the new part at the end?
*grin*
i likey.
if this was one of your first attempts at MCing, i would love to hear what you can do mow...cause this was solid.
and i agree that the beat is naughty.
..i adore your voice.
;)
:: the "when" is so often irrelevant...just THAT you found your talent is the important thing. ::
**lol everyone calls me "man" and "brah" and "dude" on here..i hardly notice it anymore**
Thanks man, yeah, MCing is the one thing in music I don't have to bang my head against a brick wall to get good at. It's just a shame I didn't realise that until I tried it last year.
: )
Ah, OK. I just realised you're female! I was thinking "this guys friendly!" Didn't mean to be calling you man and such. Thanks for taking the time to review and reply. Much appreciated. If you think I'm an alright MC check out my tracks up here called Blacklisted and Floating Castle got a couple of the best NY underground rappers featured on them that put me to shame. Thanks again.
i secretly envy those who say a really well put together piece is their first attempt at a genre.
youre keys are divine, as previously stated by almost everyone. the drums are solid..the bass is on point..the wobble is nicely used.
great first attempt..well done!
thanks so much oasis. its not my first dubstep,one of my first(think this is my 3rd one total) but the other two were garbage, and i didnt really spend time on them either. this one i took time to lay everything out. appreciate the review, thanks for listening :)
pieces taht come from us in transitions of consciousness - coming out of a sleep or going into one - always seem to have that lil something special that cannot be duplicated in a complete awakened state.
i agree that some low end bass would really add a nice sense of weight to the piece..but i love your drums and sfx elements. really neat piece.
nice work!
..taht was one helluva a dream you had, yeah?
this piece is so very progressive..so similar to how dreams can be.
i love everything about it. synth, bass, drums, fx..all skillfully placed and utilized.
really nice work!
youre comin with the naughty. and i dig the naughty.
i shall reserve any specific critique for a later date, after i have been able to listen to more of your work.
*inquisitive grin*
...ive got my eye, nay, my ear on you...
...gotta love a massive drop...
i like how you took your time with the buildup.
whether or not there is enough wobble is arbitrary; what is more important to me is the individual elements of the piece, and how well theyre mastered and placed. your synth work is great..drums are great..piano is great...wobble ends up almost becoming a vox elemet of sorts, which is cool to me...great mini breaks and drops thruout. my only criticism is i think it could use a bit of..weight?..in the form of a meatier bass, one that perhaps simply accpmpanies the core synth melody for a bit after your drops.
this piece was a pleasure to enjoy either way...
great work!
Thanks for the review, great to see someone really think about it as well. I see what you mean about the weight and I will definitely go back and see about adding some bass to go with the synth after the drops.
this piece screams industrail cinematic to me..adn i ADORE that pairing. you have certainly painted quite a vivid picture of artificial chaos and elation. you have such beautiful control over your synths and fx accents...all perfectally placed adn rendered. production value is spot on.
can we expect this piece to be a trilogy of sorts?
im dying to hear what the 3rd day sounds like...
;)
nice work!
..well, thats delightfully odd, as i just evoked the great wonka in my last review..
your work is always so very seamless. it, too, has a whimsy similar to wonkas; biting wit that leaves you confused and excitied. amazing cutting on this one...and your synth work is divine, as usual.
..can everyone else see the oompas marching along right around the 230 mark?
cause i can.
'spose it could be the mescaline...
no matter..i end as i began. delightfully odd.
well done!
lol yeah, i forgot about the oompa loompa's, I do love them, if only i could get an acapella of them! wouldnt that be amazing. Anyway, it is nice an odd, a style i havent really used before, im glad you picked up on it. Thanks for the review! :)
..bit of a tourist bus ride goin thru the inner workings of your grey matter, innit? just like the Wonka ride, this one takes a lil detour..gets us temperarily lost in the resesses on your main frame..and just when the panic begins to mount, a light in the distance lets us know we have come full circle...and all is well. what a ride!
i likey.
well done..
first attempt?
..ppssshhtt..
outstanding.
youve got an intriguing wobble that showed skill and control..and when dropped, so very seductively slithers itself around my waist and beckons me to slink with it. great transitions, use of vox, simple yet effective beat...and solid overall production value. i hope you will be doing more pieces in the dubstep genre..cant wait to hear that wobble evolve...
kudos!
that drop is sick. but i dont think the gun shot is necessary. thats just an insignificant personal preference, tho...
loved your cutting and use of the film samples.
and im actually gonna agree with dv8 [ONLY in relation to this specific track, tho]; that the wobble is a tad much on this one. dont get me wrong...i love it...i just think it overpowers the piece. think of a dish with just a tad too much salt: salt's good...brings out the flavors in a dish, but just a pinch too much and the dish becomes really hard to digest.
but the drums on this are killer. and i really like the arrangement of the piece. solid production value, as well.
nice job!
hey thanks for the review, yes i do know what you mean i might try and use the other less empowering wobble more an try an keep it a little more structured, thanks again for the reply appreciate it.
i cant write anything better than what dv8 so eloquently wrote.
i wholeheartedly concur [sans his view on wobbles. we all know oD loves a naughty wobble].
;)
i think this might be my favorite of your pieces. i love hearing you progress as an artist. things are gettin interesting...and i love being able to experience that...
gerat work!
wow i jus can't find da words to express wat u wrote made me feel.. i really apreciate wat u said, it motivates me to go ahead thanks fo real take care woman.. jah bless
interesting use of the vox sample. that deep DEEP wobble is scary..in a goodo way. im listening to it on some good headphones right now, but id lvoe to really feel in my speakers at home. this is a good start to a track teeming with potential. keep it up!
really dig this.
great synth work. it is very mood enducing, so i agree it would be right at home in the cinematic category, as well. its ripe for a vocalist as well, tho...solid piece.
nice work!
really nice juxtoposition of hard and soft elements on this track. love the keys melody with the pads. very relaxing. and youre right...the strings rising out of the ether was an unexcpected treat. i would only suggest having them come in just a tad sooner to uphold the cohesiveness of the track. heck you could even bring the keys back fo rthe last 4 bars to bring the whote track round full circle. either way..its a delightful piece.
great work!
ive noticed that some people on looperman can be a bit [what i hope is unintentionally] CeeUNextTuesdayYeah: especially hard on those just starting out in what they consider their genre of expertise, for lack of a better term. there are many different types/variations of dubstep; it is a quickly expanding genre. i heard the first version of this track, and i think you are progressing leaps and bounds. not all dubstep synth has to be groundbreaking. if thie levels are tight and the arrangement is solid, i dont see whats wong with a more simple synth. but again, ALL comments received are opinions based on personal preference.
keep it up. youve got the skills...
Wicked, thanks for those words of encouragement, it's nice to hear impartial advice and views as well as criticism. But i'm happy with either as it means people are taking the time to listen to my stuff :^) Safe, Abel
on 4 Real by FACTOR
great piano, strings and pad work, all nicely arranged. nice production value as well. good variation in your drum patterns. dug the organy-synth bell sound you incorporated, as well..made for a nice transition from the main melody.
well done!
on Cocoa Distortion by InfamousMonstro
shady.
you took a pretty chill vox and went all dark with it, and i really liked the juxtoposition. your wobbles are prgressing quite nicely. drum work is on point as well. nice arrangement and overall production value.
good job!
;)
on Fruity Flute by goretechz
great job!
on misshin wabbit - my remix by DJNightstorm
this track has such creativity. your wobbles are intense in all teh right ways. love how much you had fun with their melody variations. great sounding simple drums to accompany the synths...as well as well placed sfx thru out. suburb cutting of the fud vox. overall, a really well constructed piece.
nice work!
on Key Lime Pie - Revisited by NtaT
..showed great production skill..well done!
on oUT1-2Me by RonG251
nice work!
on Agent Of Influenza Repost by phantomhim
i likey.
if this was one of your first attempts at MCing, i would love to hear what you can do mow...cause this was solid.
and i agree that the beat is naughty.
..i adore your voice.
;)
:: the "when" is so often irrelevant...just THAT you found your talent is the important thing. ::
**lol everyone calls me "man" and "brah" and "dude" on here..i hardly notice it anymore**
: )
Ah, OK. I just realised you're female! I was thinking "this guys friendly!" Didn't mean to be calling you man and such. Thanks for taking the time to review and reply. Much appreciated. If you think I'm an alright MC check out my tracks up here called Blacklisted and Floating Castle got a couple of the best NY underground rappers featured on them that put me to shame. Thanks again.
on Melodic Filth by BluntsAndBeats
youre keys are divine, as previously stated by almost everyone. the drums are solid..the bass is on point..the wobble is nicely used.
great first attempt..well done!
on Caliber - Magma by Chud37
massive.
your synths are in total seek and destroy mode...laying waste to everything in their path.
none will be saved.
i can dig it.
on Closed In by Zooloo75
i agree that some low end bass would really add a nice sense of weight to the piece..but i love your drums and sfx elements. really neat piece.
nice work!
I find that to be completely true, I tend to make music way better at night when I'm tired for some reason.
Thanks for the review.
on Marihuana by InfamousMonstro
on Memory Loop by HateNation
this piece is so very progressive..so similar to how dreams can be.
i love everything about it. synth, bass, drums, fx..all skillfully placed and utilized.
really nice work!
on Aplus - Didgeridub by Aplus
i shall reserve any specific critique for a later date, after i have been able to listen to more of your work.
*inquisitive grin*
...ive got my eye, nay, my ear on you...
Peace.
on Spirit by KomlinK
i like how you took your time with the buildup.
whether or not there is enough wobble is arbitrary; what is more important to me is the individual elements of the piece, and how well theyre mastered and placed. your synth work is great..drums are great..piano is great...wobble ends up almost becoming a vox elemet of sorts, which is cool to me...great mini breaks and drops thruout. my only criticism is i think it could use a bit of..weight?..in the form of a meatier bass, one that perhaps simply accpmpanies the core synth melody for a bit after your drops.
this piece was a pleasure to enjoy either way...
great work!
on Robot Day (Day 1-The Plan) by SonicKDT
can we expect this piece to be a trilogy of sorts?
im dying to hear what the 3rd day sounds like...
;)
nice work!
on Gobstopper by Chud37
your work is always so very seamless. it, too, has a whimsy similar to wonkas; biting wit that leaves you confused and excitied. amazing cutting on this one...and your synth work is divine, as usual.
..can everyone else see the oompas marching along right around the 230 mark?
cause i can.
'spose it could be the mescaline...
no matter..i end as i began. delightfully odd.
well done!
on BMDub by DFury
i likey.
well done..
on The Batmobile by MenzieBeatz
..ppssshhtt..
outstanding.
youve got an intriguing wobble that showed skill and control..and when dropped, so very seductively slithers itself around my waist and beckons me to slink with it. great transitions, use of vox, simple yet effective beat...and solid overall production value. i hope you will be doing more pieces in the dubstep genre..cant wait to hear that wobble evolve...
kudos!
on Fight Club by toxxicity
loved your cutting and use of the film samples.
and im actually gonna agree with dv8 [ONLY in relation to this specific track, tho]; that the wobble is a tad much on this one. dont get me wrong...i love it...i just think it overpowers the piece. think of a dish with just a tad too much salt: salt's good...brings out the flavors in a dish, but just a pinch too much and the dish becomes really hard to digest.
but the drums on this are killer. and i really like the arrangement of the piece. solid production value, as well.
nice job!
on Rainin Days by InfamousMonstro
i wholeheartedly concur [sans his view on wobbles. we all know oD loves a naughty wobble].
;)
i think this might be my favorite of your pieces. i love hearing you progress as an artist. things are gettin interesting...and i love being able to experience that...
gerat work!
on Ralts by JerremyGLO
on Its Going Great by conor8
great synth work. it is very mood enducing, so i agree it would be right at home in the cinematic category, as well. its ripe for a vocalist as well, tho...solid piece.
nice work!
on From Both Sides by conor8
great work!
on 2nd version Is This Dubstep by Djabel
keep it up. youve got the skills...
on 0a03gbpt- Untitled by JoeKool
the synth work. the changeup. the melody. the subtle sfx peppered thruout. the simple, yet oh so perfect beat.
lovely.
kudos!