hey...i really like it...you must promise me to finish that one...
i love the long intro...nice sounds...great build up...
keep on doing it :)
cheers...JW...
ok stephen...are you still in for the song ???
man...i like your stuff...you do great things...and you are very jung...and we both wanna show all that you are also great like others...so i cant use your demo like it is...because we must have 120bpm for the track...its very important...i wanna play all parts together at the end...and as you can hear in my demo...it works...i played the dance demo with the hip hop-pop demo together...and man...it sounds great...
so please do something with 120bpm...do 4 bars intro...16 barst verses...16 bars chorus...and 4 bars outro...if you like to have my dance demo...i could send you my seperated dance demo...
work with the demo in the backround and create your demo...do some drums and bassline...then collab with others...but use the bassline notes as you hear in my demo...comon boy...you can do it...i know that :)
cheers...JW...
PS: fine you have the demo...the bassline is important...dont forget 4 bars intro and 4 bars outro :) but make little sounds... and check if both demos plays also well together...
I understand now. I'll start over, and leave this one as a song rather than an entry :)
I have the original dance demo, have you updated since?
Anyhow, like I said, I'll keep this up but change the title :)
Ste :)
not bad...but is it possible to make the track with 120bpm...or double it to 240bpm...then you do 32 bars verses and 32 bars chorus...then its fast enough i think...i dont know if it works...maybe try it :) but for a first demo its great :)
cheers...JW...
I tried it on 240, it seemed a little too fast, but I just tried the transition between the rock song at the start, then mine, then the ambient, then your one, and it fits quite well. I'll send you the mp3 preview :)
yes...nice tune...i like it...
the track gets really interesting at around 2:00 min...
yes...its simple...but great produced...keep it up :)
cheers...JW...
hey...i like the track...nice piano...nice using of sounds...
but the kick could be a bit more boom...you know ???
and the synth that comes around 1:45 sounds a bit mono :(
but the track is great :) keep it up...
cheers...JW...
thanks a lot.... the synth around 1:45 is from my new vsti (trancer XT) - think i have to pimp it up with my next production. it is important to hear your review, peace
michael
yes...like davesmith said...the vocals dont fits well with the track...but the track is well produced...nice using of sounds...good arranged...keep it up :)
cheers...JW...
i thought i give you a little feedback on your latest track...
and man...what can i say...im not a big fan of califken's work...its not my taste...but the vocals are really unique :)
nice tune man...cheers...JW...
Thank u for stopping by.
This song is a bit of a laugh really,but Califkens loop put new life into it.I appreciate your review but I can't agree with your comment about Calif.He is a major talent and I think he is cutting edge on this site!Thank u for your review though,I do appreciate it..
hey zappo...
schicke mir mal ne mp3(320) von dem song...
und eine komplette spur mit deinem gesang...
ich mache das schon...du hast nicht schlecht gesungen :)
mir gefällt der song :)
schicke mal zappo...
UPDATED !!! NEW MASTER !!!
hi smallpaul...
i though i give you a little feedback on your latest track...
im not really a house or disco fan...but i have to say that this track sounds good to my ears...nice solid drums...nice vocal...
keep up the good work...brother :)
cheers...JW...
yeah...its always a plesure to listen to your stuff :)
great using of sounds...great melodies...well mastered...
youre great gilbert :) keep up the great work man...faved !!!
cheers...JW...
nice track...i like the minimalism of this tune...sounds great to my ears...nice drum and bassline...well mastered...keep up the good work...cheers...JW...
hey...ich hatte den heute morgen schon gehört...aber musste zur arbeit...aber jetzt muß ich dir sagen...erste klasse das ganze...und ich habe schon wieder den kemo und ne melo im kopf...ich glaube da werde ich was machen...klingt etwas nach H Blocks...und Iron Maiden...du musst wissen dass ich ein alter metaller bin...respekt für deine guitarren...super gemacht...ich habe leider nie so gut guitarre gespielt...aber nen guten metal-rhythmus habe ich schon gespielt...hatte mit lead so meine probleme...aber meine klampfe hängt schon 10 jahre an der wand :)
aber ich höre heute noch gerne alte sachen...die beste dvd für mich ever...ist Iron Maiden *Rock In Rio* vor 250.000 people...
und vor allem mit 3 guitarren live...mir sind auf ner sehr guten surround anlage echt die eier weggeflogen :) und ich war 18 jahre mit einer frau zusammen die die jungs persönlich kannte...sie hat sie in den anfängen im probenraum in london oft besucht...weil sie dort lebte...naja...alte zeiten halt :)
so...den song noch mal hören...ich werde ihn downloaden :)
gute arbeit :)
nochmal danke für die version mit vocals!!
ach ja: wir sind übrigens im selben alter, spiele also schon ne ganze weile gitarre ... tut aber immer gut, ein wenig lob zu hören ... ;-)
peace, rei
hey...really a nice one...i listen a second time to it...
and i would really like to offer this one to my new friend KeMo...
he could do some german rap...and i have a vocal melody in mind...
but there is one thing i would like to have...could you do a mix with turning down the bell melody a bit...all the rest is just perfect...then send me the new mix :)
great track...great sounds...i like the guitar much :)
ich würde mich seeeeeehr freuen :))))))
keep it up man :)
cheers...JW...
das klingt schon sehr interessant, ich denk mal drüber nach ... soweit ich mich erinnere hab ich vor kurzem einen track von dir mit KeMo gehört ... ich meld mich per mail!!
peace, rei
ok...great tune i must say...i would like to have the vacals :)
great arrangement and using of sounds...
but right now i listen to it again...and i must say that the mastering is not the best...all the great atmo sounds gets lost when the drums and bassline plays...the sound goes up and down...
its too much compressed or using too much limiter...i would like to hear this great track with the best mastering...it would give this tune an extra plus :) if you need some help...just ask me :)
cheers...JW...
Thanks for being honest man.
I know that, more you listen to it, then more you find that isn't THAT great.
I will continue my work on it.
And about the vocals. I think I found those somethere on here. Like "Trance vocals" or somethin'.
I can'remember tho. And I can't take the chance on uploading.
But if you give me your email I might send it to you.
youre great gilbert :)
i really like your final mix...i think the old people could also learn from the young people...you did a great job :)
i can feel your music...keep it up :)
cheers...JW...
hey...really nice track...i like the chilling atmo in it...very great using of sounds...well mixed and mastered...def. one for the club...faved !!! cheers...JW...
on It Is Our Future by Aereas
cheers...JW...
Back then when this track was made, I didn't have the experience I got now. But It's a good track.
I appreciate your comment ;)
*Cheers*
on Starfall by Aereas
i love the long intro...nice sounds...great build up...
keep on doing it :)
cheers...JW...
I will finish it, its a promise ;)
Peace
on This moonlit night by StephenPotter
man...i like your stuff...you do great things...and you are very jung...and we both wanna show all that you are also great like others...so i cant use your demo like it is...because we must have 120bpm for the track...its very important...i wanna play all parts together at the end...and as you can hear in my demo...it works...i played the dance demo with the hip hop-pop demo together...and man...it sounds great...
so please do something with 120bpm...do 4 bars intro...16 barst verses...16 bars chorus...and 4 bars outro...if you like to have my dance demo...i could send you my seperated dance demo...
work with the demo in the backround and create your demo...do some drums and bassline...then collab with others...but use the bassline notes as you hear in my demo...comon boy...you can do it...i know that :)
cheers...JW...
PS: fine you have the demo...the bassline is important...dont forget 4 bars intro and 4 bars outro :) but make little sounds... and check if both demos plays also well together...
I have the original dance demo, have you updated since?
Anyhow, like I said, I'll keep this up but change the title :)
Ste :)
on This moonlit night by StephenPotter
cheers...JW...
Thanks for the review! :D
on ELECKTRON by siensystem
keep up the good work :)
i never listened to the older versions...but at the end its great...cheers...JW...
on A part of me by DeejayDo
well mixed and mastered...but its a bit short for my taste...
cheers...JW...
on UNDERLINE Salkizar Dropkick Mix by Salkizar
great track...i like the bassline most...good arranged...nice sounds...the master is also pro man :) faved !!!
hey...did you notice that we both made the most reviews in trance genre fo a track ??? 42 reviews for our tracks :)
cheers...JW...
on Trance 1 by Toxic20010
the track gets really interesting at around 2:00 min...
yes...its simple...but great produced...keep it up :)
cheers...JW...
on Thunderrun by MichaelBork
but the kick could be a bit more boom...you know ???
and the synth that comes around 1:45 sounds a bit mono :(
but the track is great :) keep it up...
cheers...JW...
michael
on Sexar Rguez Ft StephanieKay - Tonight by Sexar
cheers...JW...
on Tongue in cheek-Calif influence by lofthouse
and man...what can i say...im not a big fan of califken's work...its not my taste...but the vocals are really unique :)
nice tune man...cheers...JW...
This song is a bit of a laugh really,but Califkens loop put new life into it.I appreciate your review but I can't agree with your comment about Calif.He is a major talent and I think he is cutting edge on this site!Thank u for your review though,I do appreciate it..
on I am alive feat Mhyst by Lundi
and keep on doing trance...
cheers...JW...
on Sommersonne by zappo
schicke mir mal ne mp3(320) von dem song...
und eine komplette spur mit deinem gesang...
ich mache das schon...du hast nicht schlecht gesungen :)
mir gefällt der song :)
schicke mal zappo...
UPDATED !!! NEW MASTER !!!
on THAT DISCO TRACK by smallpaul
i though i give you a little feedback on your latest track...
im not really a house or disco fan...but i have to say that this track sounds good to my ears...nice solid drums...nice vocal...
keep up the good work...brother :)
cheers...JW...
on BackStab by DigitalNerve
cheers...JW...
on Yin Yang (Original Mix) by GilbertCarrizales
great using of sounds...great melodies...well mastered...
youre great gilbert :) keep up the great work man...faved !!!
cheers...JW...
on The Earth by DeejayDo
on Reach Above by Aereas
you did a good job on the whole thing...keep it up :)
cheers...JW...
:)
on Hey Shorty by BigReeg
keep it up brother :) cheers...JW...
on rerum natura by rei4real
aber ich höre heute noch gerne alte sachen...die beste dvd für mich ever...ist Iron Maiden *Rock In Rio* vor 250.000 people...
und vor allem mit 3 guitarren live...mir sind auf ner sehr guten surround anlage echt die eier weggeflogen :) und ich war 18 jahre mit einer frau zusammen die die jungs persönlich kannte...sie hat sie in den anfängen im probenraum in london oft besucht...weil sie dort lebte...naja...alte zeiten halt :)
so...den song noch mal hören...ich werde ihn downloaden :)
gute arbeit :)
ach ja: wir sind übrigens im selben alter, spiele also schon ne ganze weile gitarre ... tut aber immer gut, ein wenig lob zu hören ... ;-)
peace, rei
on drops by rei4real
and i would really like to offer this one to my new friend KeMo...
he could do some german rap...and i have a vocal melody in mind...
but there is one thing i would like to have...could you do a mix with turning down the bell melody a bit...all the rest is just perfect...then send me the new mix :)
great track...great sounds...i like the guitar much :)
ich würde mich seeeeeehr freuen :))))))
keep it up man :)
cheers...JW...
peace, rei
on Nightshade by Aereas
great arrangement and using of sounds...
but right now i listen to it again...and i must say that the mastering is not the best...all the great atmo sounds gets lost when the drums and bassline plays...the sound goes up and down...
its too much compressed or using too much limiter...i would like to hear this great track with the best mastering...it would give this tune an extra plus :) if you need some help...just ask me :)
cheers...JW...
I know that, more you listen to it, then more you find that isn't THAT great.
I will continue my work on it.
And about the vocals. I think I found those somethere on here. Like "Trance vocals" or somethin'.
I can'remember tho. And I can't take the chance on uploading.
But if you give me your email I might send it to you.
Peace
on Sanctuary by priority
drums are also great...good mix...good job :)
cheers...JW...
on Distant Existence ft Gabe Vasquez - Original Mix by GilbertCarrizales
i really like your final mix...i think the old people could also learn from the young people...you did a great job :)
i can feel your music...keep it up :)
cheers...JW...
on Bradd - Solarity by DjBradd
PS: listen to my track *Chilling*...THX :)
Cheers. Bradd.