ah...youre doing rock...i like the track and the vocals...im not sure if it really fits together...maybe i need to listen a few times more...the mix is good...
i did a rock song together with pete tebar and my honey two years ago... https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/127910
Yes attempting other genre's for a bit, I still enjoy listening to this one myself, so must be okies lol, glad you enjoyed this one, and thank you for the review...will head your way when have little time, about to head off to work...Peace n Respect...Mosaic...
nice song my friend...i like the vocals...i think it works well with the track...i did not listen to the first version but the drum sounds ok...its nice to see you doing other genres...i know how that feels like...good job :)
Thank you for stopping by, only taking short break from uploading trance for a bit, have few trance piece done, but thought would be fun to do some other genre's, track sounded okies with the previous beat settings but over powered vocal a touch so lowered, now sounding better...Glad you enjoyed friend...Peace n Respect Mosaic...
hi will...nice to see you back on looperman...i really like your track...nice melodies and stuff...what i dont like is your master...look at your wave-file its a brickwall...keep in mind louder is not better ;) other than that good job :)
i like the track...good job...but for my taste the EQing is a bit overdone...some synths sounds very high pass filtered...no mid-freqs at all...and bass is a bit drowning...make sure to give the synths a bit more room...dont cut too much off with EQing...it makes your mix lifeless...
dont get me wrong...thats a very good track...it only needs a good mix :)
I look over what i have done with the Eq'ing. As far as drowning on the bass, what exactly do you mean? Too much bass or just muddy or what? The synths i don't recall have a lot of cut in the mids but i do know they have a lot of high end. The only real cutting i did was nothing except the bass and drums went below 200hz.
Thank you for the input though. I'll definitely be going back over this song and rechecking everything!
nice classic trance...i like the melodies...maybe check the mix again and make sure the kick and bassline is more in the center of the stereo field...other than that its a good job...
nice track...i like it...but there is one thing i dont like...i hear a lot bass and some high frequencies but i miss some mid frequencies...i think this is not the mastered version so maybe keep this in mind ;)
Thank you Joy for the feedback! I'm doing my best and I hope that the next track will be more smother, indeed, the bass is loud, this is the original version that was uploaded straight from fruity loops, with my original mastering.
This chapter needs more studyfrom me and I hope Iwill get better.
nice voice i must say...i could offer you a dance style version of your sweet song...if youre interested just contact me over the contact form on looperman for more information :)
WOW !!! what can we expect from the looper-elite...but good work...i know zappo is really talented...and whatever bill takes in his hand will change into gold...and i dont know a better bass player on this site...great PJB...and slap is fantastic on his sax...i had to play this a few times...it really touched me...great great great collab...bravo to all of you...you are the true and only looper-elite :) dont stop making music guys *****
cheers...JW...
Hey JW..thanks man,your way too kind!..we've all been round the musical block a few times,so things fell into place pretty easily...from all the guys a big thank you!..cheers Dave :)
hi mike...
i know you are not here...but nice to hear some new stuff...
nice Synthiziz trancer as we know your sound...typical you my friend...i hope you come back home soon my friend...we totally miss you...i hope you are ok mike...wish you a happy new 2011...
and all the best...cheers...JW...
thank you JW. Mike misses all of you so very much, but most of all, his music. He remains strong but it may be a while until he returns but wants you all to know how much he appreciates having his music listened to and reviewed by his peers. Happy 2011 and may this be one of the best years ever. :)
hi waper...
first i wanna say thank you for letting me be a part of this...i know we surprised you with me on this...but marie asked me to help her...so i did...and now i really love this track...the basic track was fantastic to work with...really fun was to find the melody and lyrics live by using skype...so i helped her directly...and you know we have great feedback on mixposure for this...so we did nothing wrong i think :)
have a great christmas time my friend...take care...
cheers...JW...
Hi Reiner!
Look my friend, when i asked Marie for lyrics I never doubt that this tune will be so good, but when she send me a lyrics I realized that this will be amazing... and she said that there will be a little surprise for me... and it is... YOU my friend.
I have to thank you for your amazing work on this collab. You did it well...
This tune is my best gift for Christmas from you and Marie.
God bless both of you
yes...and it was really a pleasure for me to work live with you on this track and find the vocal melody for this...and the wishes are really great for me...because its nothing material :)
i love this track very much and i will never forget this great collab we three did on this :)
much respect...JW...
Vielen dank Joy! You KNOW how much I enjoyed working on this with you. Never to be forgotten!
Yes, no material wishes allowed, and may yours be granted!
ok gilbert...
first i have to say that im a fan of your work...
and nice to listen to your first vocal track...
but now im honest to you man...
im not the best producer...but i have good ears man...
the vocals ruined this great track...who is sofi lopez...your little sister ??? better try to find a better singer for this great tune...it could be much better in my opinion...
i just tell you that becouse im a fan of your great stuff...
mastering is good my friend...its only the vocals that hurts my ears...please think about it :)
cheers...JW...
Everyone has their own opinion of this track. This was our(Me & Sofi Lopez) vision of what we feel the track to be. To answer your sarcastic question, Sofi Lopez happens to be one of the best singers & acoustic players in San Antonio. I'm very lucky to work with her on this grand song. You may have good ears, but it doesn't do you any good because you don't know the story & meaning behind this song, which is why "in my opinion" your review is blind.
However, thats all everything really is, is just an opinion. I deeply respect all your interest in my music lately, but try to understand that I use this site for ideas, promos & upcoming releases. I eventually had to bring out my first vocal track, if you understood my situation, you'd realize that it couldn't be a more perferct time with an amazing idea.
sounds like you had a good roll...lol
you know im not a hip hop fan...but the overall sound is great...nice bassline...and good atmo in it...good work yesh :)
cheers...JW...
yeah...really nice track...i like it...very nice melodies...good drum work also...nice arranged and mixed...but for my taste the master is a bit too loud...it ruins the sound a bit...you lost a bit of clarity...just my opinion...but the track is great...
cheers...JW...
wow man...this is a great tune...i really like your stuff...good job on this...and i used this acapella for my track *A Plague On You*...he he...lol...good title :)
keep up the good work man...
cheers...JW...
on Outer-K - One Piece In Peace by HardstyleRythm
on Sweetest Sin by Mosaic
i did a rock song together with pete tebar and my honey two years ago...
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/127910
Yes attempting other genre's for a bit, I still enjoy listening to this one myself, so must be okies lol, glad you enjoyed this one, and thank you for the review...will head your way when have little time, about to head off to work...Peace n Respect...Mosaic...
on Circles Never Open by Mosaic
Thank you for stopping by, only taking short break from uploading trance for a bit, have few trance piece done, but thought would be fun to do some other genre's, track sounded okies with the previous beat settings but over powered vocal a touch so lowered, now sounding better...Glad you enjoyed friend...Peace n Respect Mosaic...
on Rainbows End by WillPatton
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on Solar Flare by Crzynss
dont get me wrong...thats a very good track...it only needs a good mix :)
Thank you for the input though. I'll definitely be going back over this song and rechecking everything!
on if i lose miself Criss Nicksson Remix by CrissNickssonn
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on Memories by FlorinB92
This chapter needs more studyfrom me and I hope Iwill get better.
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https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/124142
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on THE DISTANCE by Planetjazzbass
cheers...JW...
on Demo by EmmaDiva
on Remember Me - Bilbozo Guitar Track by Bilbozo
what a great track...nice classic feel in it...i think you are back in business :) keep up your great work bill...
cheers...JW...
on He Is My God by SYNTHIZIZ
i know you are not here...but nice to hear some new stuff...
nice Synthiziz trancer as we know your sound...typical you my friend...i hope you come back home soon my friend...we totally miss you...i hope you are ok mike...wish you a happy new 2011...
and all the best...cheers...JW...
on Christmas Wishes by WaPer
first i wanna say thank you for letting me be a part of this...i know we surprised you with me on this...but marie asked me to help her...so i did...and now i really love this track...the basic track was fantastic to work with...really fun was to find the melody and lyrics live by using skype...so i helped her directly...and you know we have great feedback on mixposure for this...so we did nothing wrong i think :)
have a great christmas time my friend...take care...
cheers...JW...
Look my friend, when i asked Marie for lyrics I never doubt that this tune will be so good, but when she send me a lyrics I realized that this will be amazing... and she said that there will be a little surprise for me... and it is... YOU my friend.
I have to thank you for your amazing work on this collab. You did it well...
This tune is my best gift for Christmas from you and Marie.
God bless both of you
on Christmas Wishes by MarieDailly
i love this track very much and i will never forget this great collab we three did on this :)
much respect...JW...
Yes, no material wishes allowed, and may yours be granted!
on Cosmic Decade (Original Mix) by GilbertCarrizales
keep it up my friend :)
cheers...JW...
on Fallen Angel Feat Sofi Lopez played on A-B Radio by GilbertCarrizales
first i have to say that im a fan of your work...
and nice to listen to your first vocal track...
but now im honest to you man...
im not the best producer...but i have good ears man...
the vocals ruined this great track...who is sofi lopez...your little sister ??? better try to find a better singer for this great tune...it could be much better in my opinion...
i just tell you that becouse im a fan of your great stuff...
mastering is good my friend...its only the vocals that hurts my ears...please think about it :)
cheers...JW...
However, thats all everything really is, is just an opinion. I deeply respect all your interest in my music lately, but try to understand that I use this site for ideas, promos & upcoming releases. I eventually had to bring out my first vocal track, if you understood my situation, you'd realize that it couldn't be a more perferct time with an amazing idea.
Cheers
Gilbert
on Once Upon A Time by yeshintae
you know im not a hip hop fan...but the overall sound is great...nice bassline...and good atmo in it...good work yesh :)
cheers...JW...
:java:
there's some coffee on me!
just copy and paste into
the mixposure chat room!
;)
Much Respect from LA
on Live for life by Andrey
cheers...JW...
on A Plague on You by RayKoefoed
keep up the good work man...
cheers...JW...