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Ooohhh I really like this one. Great piano loop, and the drums are also really good!! Not sure what is sample and what you played yourself but congrats on a great track. Faved!

Ooh, that's lovely, I like it has a bit more punch, and the vocal is great as alway!

It's nice! It's a good basic melody and you introduce some more interesting elements in the middle part to keep the listener hooked. I wouldn't mind some kind of countermelody or chorus or break, but I think you don't need that.
Regarding that and your YouTube vids? I always publish the vid way at the end of the process, after it's been up on looperman for at least a couple weeks, because I learn so much here and it frustrates me that YouTube doesn't allow you to change the audio (or anything, really). You never suffer from that? :)

I like that DJ Cinema has a track called Silent Movie, but I fully expected this not to have vocals ;)
Nice bouncy track, good job!

That's a very nice bouncy beat, and good lyrics too. I also like the Kate Bush reference (well, sample) :)

I love the African guitar in the background.
The groove is very tight, but it still allows you your melodic freedom to experiment. Good job! Great guitar tones too!

Absolutely lovely and extremely well produced. If that's your first effort then you're a natural!

Fantastic choir. Surovie Gody is Russian for harsh years? That's a protest against mr Putin I hope? :)

Haaa, I know that Acapella, I'd also used it. It's lovely!

Here's mine, if you're interested (or if you're not): https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/236475

I have to say, I love your track, but I feel Jenna's acapella doesn't fully fit it. Something to think about, because I think your track is strong!

Most of this works pretty well, but the one finger piano melody is way too overpowered to my ears. See if you can consider to lower the volume on that? Good luck buddy!

I like it but you drove up the compression to the point where the distortion becomes painful to me. I wouldn't mind a bit more headroom. Good luck!

Maybe not perfect but definitely fun. It brought a smile to my face on a cold Wednesday morning!

Oh yeah!! Love the intro riff.
I'm not as critical of the drums of Danke, but he has an actual drummer in the band and I'm just an amateur ;) but yes, in a song like this they could definitely be heavier.
All in all great job, totally enjoyed it!

I try to do as much as I can without plugins (my laptop isn't powerful enough), but:
- izotope for mastering
- sometimes graylon for a spot of autotune
- I recently discovered Spitfire which has fairly convincing strings.
Hope that helps!

I like it. You put quite a bit of effect on the vocal, but that fits with the track, and it's a good dance tune. Well done!

It's a very nice idea... But a tad long ;)

It's definitely fun, and you worked in an interesting way with the 5/4th, in some parts more or less working around it, sometimes high-lighting it. I like the somewhat medieval sound you achieved in parts.
Regarding the one-synth challenge, I'd not heard about that before but I suppose you use only... One... Synth? :D
I think you made full use of it, but if you let go of it, I think you can make it more interesting. I'd definitely welcome a bit of that guitar, either some power chords towards the end or a good solo!

Well,I always approve guitar solos, so that's great :)
But I'm also a strong believer in finding a balance between having unfinished stuff, and never finishing stuff, if you get what I mean. Better is the enemy of good :)

Jenna has a great voice, I've also used one of her Acapellas in the past and ever since I'm a fan.
I really like what you did here, by slowing it down you really made it fit the tone of your electro tune.
Great retro vibe on it and strong mix where each element has a clear place.
Good stuff!

In de gloooriiiiiaaaaaaa!
Haha nice! It sounds a bit like a ringtone, but definitely a fun ringtone, well done!

Your guitar playing is fine. Unfortunately your mic is a bit rusty and something is resonating too much so that it's really hard to hear your lyrics - which is a shame because from what I hear I think you have a really nice voice!
Consider recording in 2 tracks: one for the guitar, one for the vocal, then mixing it, and make sure you have sufficient distance from the mic (or your iPhone or whatever you used) so you don't overload it.
I think it's a really sweet song and in order to ensure people hear it sometimes it helps to pay some attention to those details ;)
Good luck buddy, you clearly have the musicality!

Not sure I can delete comments. Here's the track on Looperman:
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/238463

Also sent you a DM!

Well done. Great drums, which I think you played live? Really fits with the track.
The only tiniest improvement point I could think of is that the "piano" is now all notes at the same volume; it could feel slightly more dynamic if you might have a touch sensitive keyboard so you can accentuate some notes and play other softer.
But lovely tune, also liked your other tracks!

Awesome track. One thing though, I'm listening on crappy inner ear phones, but it sounds to me like it could be clipping/distorting in the louder parts. Maybe you want to check that, but otherwise really enjoyed this!!