Hi TheHumps, this is nice, really smooth; really great use of the drum loops, really good selection and variety. It actually didn't feel at all weird (genre). It's smooth, I thought of triphop as I was listening. The only element that didn't really fit (to me) was the vocals; I felt like the drums were driving the vocals rather than helping it, and vice versa. It doesn't feel it has a theme. Thanks for sharing. Hope your back isn't something too serious and you're better.
Thanks! Life long back prob that flairs up occasionally, I'll live. :)
I guess without the vocals there isn't much of a story. The effects on them were there to help set the atmosphere and overall feel of the track. Appreciate the feedback!
Hi DeluxeImpala1031, just wanted to listen to new tracks uploaded--by anyone; I think you have a nice beat going and a nice bass as well. I'm confident this would sit nicely with a vocal to complement it. Trying to put my head in yours, I think it's also a nice chiller just to listen to as well. A little more work to add some more bass notes/variations + perhaps a break loop to give it a little boost. You have the right framework and it sounds like you're on the right track. Thanks for sharing.
Hi Mykael, really great voice, very good solid sound and the instruments really complement it; only thing to me is the vocals sound a little processed in contrast to the instruments. It was likely intended so please excuse my observation. It does nothing to take away from the track at all. Good, good, good.
Hiya, Icon.... thanks for stopping by and listening to the track. The track is just a scratch. The vocals will be redone. If you noticed at the same point through the song I go a little flat. That's because I'm adding in extra notes. So, basically I'm contemplating whether to sing the song as written...note for note; or, if we should allow for those extra notes in the instrumentation. Anyways, the coals will be "cleaner" when it's finished.
Hi jesse22, this sounds like a little story. Piqued the interest; I like all the radio sounds and emergency broadcasting system voice. I wasn't too fond of delays on the voice though, the doubling feels off for what is happening in this intro. I got the sense like I was in a hangar of some kind running toward an exit while the emergency system speaks and sounds blare. Levels could be brought up a little bit.
Hi toastedavalanche, oh, I wished you could have loaded this on 9/22 which is the official "end-of-summer" day :) Timing would have been perfect. Really chilled track, great voice, nice guitar, good progression, I like the use of the tamborine, it comes in at the right moment to give the track the right boost with the vocals; and even the whistle was timed well. Only thing to me is that...due to the way pop tends to be structured, I felt I like I was listening to a version of some other pop song. This is not to be interpreted as negative.
Hi alvinproductions, this is really classic; I think trance is the one genre where you can drive it almost 9-minutes long and it won't feel that way at all. The bassline and synths keep it moving and the changes throughout makes half the track go by in a flash. The only thing is that it feels like you have 3,4-5 tracks running back to back. It doesn't have a "trance theme" if I can word it that way. There's no main melody that connects the basslines or gives the track a signature sound. At 4:21 or so I thought It was going to get there but was somewhat short-lived.
Hi phantomhim, I listened to this a few days back; It seems this is a pretty popular genre here, every other track is Trap, Hip Hop or some variety of the same--was it like that back in 09 too? Really nice drums, cool synth line and the vocals fit really good. Only thing is that the track gets monotonous pretty soon, the vocals carry the track along, however. Nothing particularly special, but a nice driver. You should upload the vocal :) Good job
Looking at your account I find it interesting that you've never liked (favourited) anyone else's track on here (not once) in the 3 years you've been here. I think you're a little competitive (if not: selfish). Maybe that's why you leave passive aggressive comments on other people's tracks?
"Nothing particularly special"
It's a bedroom demo. Will be changing in the future. You're actually right though, the instrumental is too repetitive but you should choose your words more carefully when you're giving feedback.
Before I got to that part my eyebrow raised right at the start with your comments about hiphop and trap being some prevalent here. That also came across as passive aggressive to me, although I could be wrong about that part.
Just keep it positive b. I do it for everyone else when I comment and I also take the time to favorite OTHER people's tracks to support their stuff too.
Hi SpeakUpProd, I really like the vocal sections that come-in every now and then, that adds some really nice character that really sounds good it adds air to the track. Only thing is that I want to hear more of that voice now. Drums sound really good too, pretty clear, good snare to me. I can suggest a bit more structure; the track feels lengthy despite being 3mins; my short attention span mostly; but some variety would be nice with the strings in the back and drums, give the track a theme. "Burn our Love" sounds like the right title :) good work.
Hi traz75, pretty little tune; I haven't heard any of the loops you used but everything seems to have been well selected, all sounds mesh with each other quite well. I have never heard Fusion but this is great. Nice metallic sounds, cool melody. Pretty generic at times, especially when it cycles back around after the break. I think this is ready for vocals :) good job
Hi Zootman2u, really great vocal track; pretty jazzy, trip-hoppy; and cool trumpet :) All instruments go well with each other, nothing out of the ordinary, pretty laid back. Good work.
Hi topclass, listened to this one several times, I really like the intro chords and the booming drums; it flows really nicely when the vocals come in, too. I like the minimal transitions as well, it keeps interest. Really nice 2:40s; Only thing I really wanted to change a bit was the main lead which plays almost throughout, I felt it could get a second section and the notes changed a bit to add some variation to it.
Hi MrAxel, I actually heard your track yesterday; but decided to listen a few more times again today. I really like the various sfx that occasionally transitions the track; the sounds are all pretty crisp and the track is quite chilled but also moves, I give that to the nice keys. A really good listen for my morning. Only thing for me is that it did get a bit repetitive, as the main keys and drums go for a while. A little change somewhere to divert a little while keeping the theme consistent would be good. Keep up the great work.
Wow! Thanks for taking the time my friend. Now that is a real review by you, win, lose, or draw. Just that fact alone I find awesome about your review. So often people comment on other songs just to bump their song up. I really appreciate that!
Thank you very muchioncewas. My Voice is like melancholic for that because it really happend that day. I wrote this Song in end august 21 and 2nd septmeber my relation. I wasn´s sad that day... just pure anger and frustration. I´m make honest music, hope you all can hear it.
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I guess without the vocals there isn't much of a story. The effects on them were there to help set the atmosphere and overall feel of the track. Appreciate the feedback!
Wayne
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LovePeace&Light,
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"Nothing particularly special"
It's a bedroom demo. Will be changing in the future. You're actually right though, the instrumental is too repetitive but you should choose your words more carefully when you're giving feedback.
Before I got to that part my eyebrow raised right at the start with your comments about hiphop and trap being some prevalent here. That also came across as passive aggressive to me, although I could be wrong about that part.
Just keep it positive b. I do it for everyone else when I comment and I also take the time to favorite OTHER people's tracks to support their stuff too.
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Thank you!
Everything you heard was loops. :)
Regards, traz
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