I like it and agree with the others that the glitchy stuff gives it something a little different. The track is way too short though. You have a good opportunity to build it into something really good!
the main loops have an infectious quality about them and also a nursery rhyme simplicity that sounds great. mot sure about how the vocal sits in te track though. i probably would have preferred it as an instrumental piece,
Nice track TT and as someone else said probably ambient rather than chill out. Only negative comment I have is maybe over use of the wide left and right speakers. I would have preferred a more subtle use of stereo, but hey, that's just me. Good job.
Good work on the track - like the voice and vibe, Production wise tho it needs afair bit of tidying up. Got hissing all the way thru and a few clippy bits. I think with that done the track would be xcllnt.
I listened twice so I could give a more accurate critique. I like parts of the track. I think the transitions should be more gradual and that each section of the track longer. As it is, it sort of jumps abruptly (in ambient terms). I love the heavily compressed slowed down snare sound near the start. I'm not a fan of the artist guiding us as to what the journey should be like. I think with ambient works u should let the listener decide/ imagine what the journey is about. The end part sounds great but is ridiculously short. That mood can be repeated for a long time before it would become boring. Check out Brian Eno Ambient 1.
Generally I like it. The only thing is some of the snyths are very trancey sounding synths and personally i aint keen on trance. Really liked the start and i would love to strip it down and dirty it up more. Good effort.
It's sort of like 2/3 of a boc song in that u have basic structure there but not all the weird noises and vocal snippets. If I were u I would go at it full bore and weird it up a little! Nice so far tho.
I like the track - i think that it would benefit from a bit of tweaking on the levels and some sounds are'nt as clear as they could be. I think that you paced the track well though and it compliments the preach. Nice.
I think the vocals could do with pitching up yeah - the recording wasnt that great but im sure if i could figure it out i would be able to make them a bit clearer. Cheers for the review.
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I think the vocals could do with pitching up yeah - the recording wasnt that great but im sure if i could figure it out i would be able to make them a bit clearer. Cheers for the review.
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