i love the sax! saxiphone is a fabulous instrument and fits in well. i love the vocal work and this sort of beat with vocals sort of reminds me of moby, and i think you could learn some by listening to how he lines up his vocals to beats. i found that the beat in this seemed maybe rushed? i don't know just something about the vocals and beat together just made me antsy... i think its the synth, is that what you used? but i think it could be improved by not using the synth or not using the echo on it, i think thats what i'm hearing. i absolutely loved your use of sound levels though, and fading, it gave the song dynamic and i love that. i also loved the just stripped sax, sounds nice!c keep up the good work!
As for the beat. I am remastering it, it's got a more solid kick and snare pattern, maybe that will fix what your talking about, I'll see about the delay on the pluck synth too and check out the vocals.
you have a great sound! i genuinely enjoyed this song. i think my only critisism is that at the very beginning it didn't sound like the different beats and sounds were lining up, but it got into a steady pace and everything fell into place nicely which was good.also i could use more of a contrast between some of the different points in the song, i just wasn't feeling like there was much of a climax, so the song began to drag a bit. but these are pretty easily fixable and minor details, so keep up the great work! this song sounded pretty professional.
congrats! your my first review on this sight! ;)
so i think that you obviously have a lot of talent, and this track was good, but there is something that i feel is missing. i would recommend listening to some justice because i love there sound and listening to them might help you develope yours. you could be headed in that direction i feel like, but on the other hand parts of this song remind me of somethings by the postal service, but if you want to take that route, i would recommend adding vocals, because that is definetly a big part of their music. i hope my advice helps!
awesome, much appreciated. im proud haha.
thanks alot, been working hard on this stuff. glad its paying off. i see what you are sayin with the postal service, that delayed synth reminded me of some of their tunes too lol. been listening to alot of the darker stuff like noisia and spor and tryin to scratch some tricks out of them. i'll do the same with justice, thanks for the tip.
again thanks alot!
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As for the beat. I am remastering it, it's got a more solid kick and snare pattern, maybe that will fix what your talking about, I'll see about the delay on the pluck synth too and check out the vocals.
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so i think that you obviously have a lot of talent, and this track was good, but there is something that i feel is missing. i would recommend listening to some justice because i love there sound and listening to them might help you develope yours. you could be headed in that direction i feel like, but on the other hand parts of this song remind me of somethings by the postal service, but if you want to take that route, i would recommend adding vocals, because that is definetly a big part of their music. i hope my advice helps!
thanks alot, been working hard on this stuff. glad its paying off. i see what you are sayin with the postal service, that delayed synth reminded me of some of their tunes too lol. been listening to alot of the darker stuff like noisia and spor and tryin to scratch some tricks out of them. i'll do the same with justice, thanks for the tip.
again thanks alot!