JAI26

I think it is awesome that you are doing this at 16! Happy birthday!
I think adding a beat and possibly a counter melody might enhace the track.
No matter what keep creating and exploring music. It is something you can spend a lifetime doing!

So I don't know the original song so no comparisons. Two things stood out to me on my first listen. I've quit looking at wave forms when listening to songs. I've found it just distracts me from listening. So you dropped the drums for a pretty good portion and my brain didn't notice or miss them then once they came back I kind of focused on them and really appreciated the fact that they were just right not to much or to little. The outro was really cool as well. I really enjoy your stuff. I think it just fits my personal music taste well. Keep it up! I always enjoy listening to your stuff.

I did get the guitar out and jam with one of your tracks the other day. I just couldn't find a sound that fit your mix well but it was fun playing around with it.

Hi - Glenn very nice chill track! I wanted to say thanks for sharing that you use YTJams. I looked at jam tracks on YT last night and saw tons of them and think I might try doing something with some of them at some point in the future. It seems like a nice appraoch.

I like the hard guitar in this one. I'll just share my one thought I had while listening. It is around 2:50 where the word fury is used twice. My brain expected a throw on the word fury with a repeating delay on the word. Not sure if that's a good idea or not...

I don't think it seems amateurish. It sounds authentic and analog. Both great things in my opinion. I thought the drums sounded especially good!

Great job to both of you! You guys created a great track here.

I didn't even know weird was a musical category... now that I know I might end up posting some of my stuff under the category.
I like this track. It is good weird. Kind of reminds me of the 80's which were also a good kind of weird :)

You did a really good job on this. The music fits the vocal track very well.

Keep going Smiley! Be the salt and the light!

Youtube is a great place to start. Google your question's and if you aren't anti AI get one of them to write you up an intro to mixing document be specific and tell them the tracks you have and style you are going for.

It's cool that your just having fun but you did som pretty cool vocal chops in this. I actually drive a truck called a ranger (it's old too, It was my fathers) here in america. I'm guessing you are refering to range rovers? IDK other countrys seem to get some pretty cool version's of cars though. oh and I"m also a wnkr :)

It is really good. I like this one.

Like I told you I used Suno in the past. You might already be doing everything I'll mention.
So when you feed it your music. If you have lyrics I would sing them so that it would know the cadence I wanted them to have.
You could take it one step further and once you have the A.I. song run it through a stem splitter then change it back up or put your playing back on top and use it as a backing track.

I think you can do all of that within suno if you are a paid subscriber. I wasn't a paid user so that's how I took the vocals and put them onto my music. I use mvsep.com for my splitting. I know some DAW's have that built in...

Just thought I'd share what my old process with suno was.

Agreed the drums are coming through stronger now.

So most of the time when I listen to your music. It just makes me want to get out the guitar and rip some power chords at "11" jamming along with it. I think you could do a different version of this song like a rock/rap hybrid with an acoustic rock drum set and it might sound pretty cool. Don't get me wrong though it's great the way it is! I'm just telling you how it makes me feel.

Did I just get to hear Oli's voice?
I would give this a 10 out of 10 on the creativity scale! I think it's awesome you are experimenting and trying new stuff. Keep it up you two!

I think this is good. I'm enjoying what you are putting out. Keep it up man!

Hey brother - I can't tell if I offended you by your response. Please know that if I did. That was not my intention at all.

Cool track like always. I really like the sound you bring in at about 0:50.
I need to get the guitar out and just try playing along with some of your songs sometime.

Bro - first off the old track was worth sharing! Just remember you are your toughest critic! But once again. I'm blown away by this! It is epic! I'm at a loss for words again. Keep it up dude!!!

I think this is pretty cool! I listened to it twice and notice new interesting things on each listen.

Man - no idea how you guys did this so quickly. That's really impressive to me! It sounds great. I'm glad I sit around at work listening to all the LM tracks. I got to hear this song without vocals and I can say it sounds complete now. Good Job to everyone involved!

Pretty cool man! - I like your spin with it. Asociale really set things off within the LM crowd with that track! I'm sure that's happened before but this was my first time seeing that.

I would just experiment. I don't know if it's a good idea or not. I think if it was me I would bump it up by 3bpm and see what you think. I could also just be projecting on you. I just dropped the bpm on one of my songs until it felt right. So you should really take everything I'm saying with a huge grain of salt :)

Richard - It's good to see you back with a new song. I didn't know if you would be able to find the time! Did you perform the music as well?
While listening I did wonder what this song might sound like at a slight BPM increase. Not saying it should be, it's just what ran through my mind. Good job as always! Hope all is well!

I love this style! Uplifting and motivational! Excellent work!