this is great stuff. production is very good, love the guitars sound great. I a novice when it comes to vocals.(so take this as a grain of salt.) mabe a little reverb? not sure. it sounded great as is also, great job.
beautiful piano play. sometimes the right vocals can be a powerful thing. but your right instrumental can convey a deeper emotion. this is great.
how did the girl respond. music is a great way to a girls heart.
great job dan. weird? mabe. sounds like electronic. reminds me a little like Jean michele Jerre. there used to be in the 80's a genre called new age. this is great stuff.
Yea - I think I could start just going with electronic I agree. I remember new age but that was a little less 'weird' and more about ambience, possibly a kind of 'therapeutic' genre also. Glad you liked this buddy. Thanks.
nice!, took me to a dream world. love the beat. in the middle I felt a beat that wanted to get out.( this is a good thing, not bad) it kept me glued. started to tap a beat with music.
Glad it took you to such a place, though I feel I could have executed the concept differently. In the middle, I left a bit of breathing room for vocals. So it should sound even more complete. Glad you enjoyed it
OMG. dude you just got a new fan! this is kickin. lovee the deep low bass. hoe do you get such rich sub. for some reason I cant get that sub. thought it was my speakers but you woke them up.
I'l try and teach you as best as I can. There's a huge difference between Rap/Hip-Hip and Trap (what this song is). You want the bass to be the main lead in your situation. That's what makes true Trap music and is the difference between Rap/Hip-Hop which is outdated. It goes Bass>Melody>Percussion>FX. That premise actually spans more than just Trap. I notice you create more EDM/orchestra and that too is leaning towards bass. You want your main build up to equalize to your main lead.
love these chill out pieces. this took me deep into my inner mind. great job. has a Tangerine Dream sound. ( AN older music reference) yes I'm getting old.
great job on this. glad I was looking at you tracks, I would have missed this. I also use magix, mainly the vst, but the library also. this is a great flowing piece. love it. debated on referencing Harry Mancinni(spell) but has a faint hint of that.
great job. the music is beautiful, words deep. I disagree with those who say rhyme. this is spoken word. an offshoot of jazz. I haven't come across your work before since I've been here, but you got my interest peaked.
This is really good. music to race cars with. love the dark feel. I agree w/ danke. some vocals would enhance it nicely. some oohs or ahh voc. I hate it when there is a missing element feel and you can't put your finger on it. It is good as is but I suggest some back ground vocals.
Thanks for listening mindhiest! I'll give that a try. And yeah it's annoying to be almost finished a song. It happens though. :P I'm sure that the suggestions you guys gave me will help. Thanks again!
this does have a western feel with a pinch of dark. the deeper voice is perfect for that dark feel. when the backup choir enters at 4:07 it would sound good with mabe a slightly louder bass beat. just a flavor suggestion. Is great the way it is though. guitars are smooth. great for a guide line for me. may try anouther guitar piece. great song.
Hello Mindhiest,
Nice to read your gentle comment. I really enjoyed that.
Hopefully Burt (Phatkatz) will add some more guitar lines and or a bass line. So this one will not be the final version. But i have to wait until he has some more time for music and not spend all his time into work :)
well, you don't need me to tell you that this is great. but this is great. the more I listen to dubstep and all of it differnt sound. the more I like it. I love the dark theme especially the intro. awesome intro.
Ha! Thanks man. I checked out some of your work the other night. I was impressed. You're definitely on your way to making some really good music! I'll swing by when I have more time to concentrate, and leave some comments, suggestions, and pointers for you.
Thank you for taking the time to listen and comment. It's always appreciated!
man this good. there are alot of great songs out there today. the drums sound fine to me. I look forward to hearing the rest of this. I feel like a student on his first day in music class.
cheers man. yeah the standard is very high here, I think my production techniques are a bit below par compared topmost of the contributors, but i think its good to push past the embarrassment ceiling ad start getting things out there. Hopefully with your peers' feedback you can improve quicker.
Keep it lethal
this is great stuff. I too mainly do cinematic. this takes me to forbidden places. nice smooth dark sound. oerfect for action adventure movie. great job.
Thank you for listening! I am very pleased that you like it! Yes the track is too short. Unfortunately the vocal sample is not so long, but as "danke" has already stimulated, a solo could be played :)
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Nice to read your gentle comment. I really enjoyed that.
Hopefully Burt (Phatkatz) will add some more guitar lines and or a bass line. So this one will not be the final version. But i have to wait until he has some more time for music and not spend all his time into work :)
stay tuned
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