Dope bro. Nice writing, My only critique would be the vocal mixing. On the hook section it seems a little over processed almost distorted. The verse sections are too under processed and dont punch through the mix. Some compression and doubling would help on the verses. More subtle technique on the hook. Monitors headphones and listening environment has a lot to do with mixing and later translation on different medium. Overall good concept and song.
Sounds pretty good as is to me bro. The elements match, the mix is clean. Could you have went crazier and been more creative? sure. There's always the next beat for that. Nice work.
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