This it s a trip Citizen. I don't have a critique because I don't know what you where aiming for. Reminds me of the background music for a slow motion drama scene in a movie. The contrast of the soft vocal and the hard trap beat create a suspense that in and of itself has artistic value.
Hey, Format. Thank you for your comment! I don't know what I was aiming for either, frankly. It starts with getting drawn into a vocal. I was purposefully looking for female acapellas, and when I heard this one, it was so personal and endearing that I had to download it and found that I could. From there it's, ok, what trap tracks do I have on hand? Let's listen to some more - try this, try that. Mess around, fun, joy, time passes, done. That's basically what I had in mind. I like your comment about the slow motion music - great insight. thank you!
Sounds good, has a lot of elements to it. Think I hear a future bass sounding portion. Future bass is lowkey my favorite genre even though I haven't rapped over a future bass beat yet. Anyway, nice work
A friend of mine said I should add more SFX to further detail the track.
I'm very glad to hear that you classify this as a future bass track! I really am trying to make it sound future bass rather than electronic, pop, or synth pop.
Dope bro. Nice writing, My only critique would be the vocal mixing. On the hook section it seems a little over processed almost distorted. The verse sections are too under processed and dont punch through the mix. Some compression and doubling would help on the verses. More subtle technique on the hook. Monitors headphones and listening environment has a lot to do with mixing and later translation on different medium. Overall good concept and song.
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I'm very glad to hear that you classify this as a future bass track! I really am trying to make it sound future bass rather than electronic, pop, or synth pop.
Thanks man, stay safe!
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