onlyhits

Cool track! A few things to consider: I would lengthen the release on the piano in the beginning. I also might add some reverb to the bells at :32. Otherwise, I enjoyed the chill vibes.

I like the mashup, nice job!

Awesome to hear that your goal is to go professional, I hope to get there someday too! I'm liking the chill vibes here, sounds very well mixed. Look forward to hearing more music in the future from you and I hope you're able to grow as an artist. For tips on that, I'd recommend checking out Heroic Academy, I've learned a lot from their mixing and music marketing tips. https://heroic.academy/

Also, what's your SoundCloud and social media so I can follow you?

Wow, this sounds a lot different than most of your songs that I've heard. It sounds great though, and I can't wait to hear your vocals on this, great job!

Nice remix, the drop is excellent! During the beginning of the verses, the vocals are a little loud and dry. Also, the verses are compressed too much in my opinion. It's still a very nice remix though, and a wish you luck in the contest! Also, if you want to check out my remix for this song, you can find it on my profile.

...Drop top...
I was gonna say that before I even clicked on or listened to the song but tekrek beat me to it.
Anyways, about the song... I know it's a work in progress, so I'd focus on adding variety in the composition stage. Just add whatever ideas come to your mind, until you have too much material to work with. Then, carefully weed out ideas that you don't like as much until you have a few great ideas. For starters, I would recommend adding a main melody and maybe a cool arpeggio. Keep in mind that I am listening on a crappy phone so there may be more going on than I am aware of. Hope this helps.

Melodic Dreamer

Wow, this is pretty well done! All of the sounds are used well to fit the theme. I think you did a great job of capturing the idea and fleshing it out into music.

This is pretty cool! Ya the sound design isn't brilliant, but you definitely excelled at everything else! The arrangement and composition are great, keep it up!

Nevermind, listening again, the vocals are fine in the mix.

Nice track, I like the vibe. Very unique beat, in a good way! Vocals could be a little louder maybe, but there's not really any mixing problems that I could find other than at 2:24 when the beat comes back in the first hit is really loud. I also would have started the vocals a little sooner. Good rap though!

Amazing remix! I love the intro, that was sick! Vocals are a little quiet but it's not that much of a problem. Keep up the great work!

Dang, I haven't heard the original but this sounds like it's gonna be dope! Looking forward to the full remix!

Very sick beat! The flute seems to be out of key, but everything else is brilliant, well done!

Dope remix! I would add a little more to the drop to give it some more power, but otherwise this is really sick!

Very cool track! The instrumental is nice, but I would try to get some better samples; punchier kick, better snare, etc.
Vocals are nice though, keep it up!

Nice track! I really liked the vocals so I'll probably give this a sick remix.

Wow, this is pretty good! I really liked the buildup, and the drop kept the momentum going. Well done.

Ya THAT DROP THO! The clicks at the drop 35 at seconds are epic. I'll have to check out some of your other music too.

This is really dope! Nice beat and sick flow.

This is dope! Beat goes hard as heck, rapping is on point, nice job!

Really nice, smooth track. Well done!

On my goodness! I have never seen a song with this many plays, comments, likes, and downloads! You deserve it though, such a great song and easy for a singer to use. Well done.

Dang this is pretty epic! I little over-compressed maybe but nice otherwise.

Nice track! I really enjoyed this. The guitar I'm the beginning was pretty cool and the drop was nice as well.

Absolutely amazing song! Nice bars, well recorded to a nice beat. Keep it up!