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Agree with previous comment, could be a little louder. However, this is is nice, I like the intensity! Also, the snare is pretty sick, nice job!

I know this is my third time commenting on this song but I seriously can't stop listening to this! This is truly professional level and deserves to be popular! Honestly you could probably get signed to a label and produce an amazing album. I could imagine you doing something like Lukas Graham.

Wow, this is sick! How'd you get all these acoustic instruments, did you use loops or something? Either way, I love this!

Wow, that kick is loud! Pretty dope beat! The bell that comes in around 50 seconds could use some improvement, maybe just reverb, maybe use a different sound. All around this is pretty cool though!

Really cool, interesting track again! I absolutely love the arpeggio around 23 seconds, and the sound design is great all around. Really unique track, cool vocals, not much to critique :)

This is really sick! The whole flow of the song and the vocals are so well put together, and the production is superb! Really look forward to hearing the whole song :)

This is awesome! The vocal chops and other melodies are so smooth. I can't judge the kick because I'm listening on crappy phone speakers, but if the kick is solid then I don't think there's anything to critique.

Sick beat, awesome vibes! For​ some reason I feel like I heard this somewhere before. Did you use a loop or sample of some sort?

Sick instrumental to a sick acapella! You did a nice job fitting the beat with the vocal, keep it up!

Not bad, your music is certainly improving! I would have loved the drop even more if you had added a big detuned saw chord playing with some attack. It was still cool without that tho. Your mixing is one point for sure though, very well done!

I like the guitar, it's nice and chill! But the vocals and the instrumental are out of key. Sick drop!

Sick beat, especially for your second track ever! The kick and 808 seem to be in stereo, which could cause some phasing problems. Otherwise, nice job!

Wow, this is sick! It could use one or two more more elements, probably to play some chords. But the kick and sub are brilliant! This makes me wish I could rap, lol :) Very well done!

Nice, short and sweet! I like it a lot, although I'd love for it to be longer :)

Wow, this is pretty good for your first EDM song ever. I know my first song was certainly not this good. I think the composition of the song is a little generic tho. Keep going tho, and never stop experimenting with new ideas. Look forward to hearing more from you.

Wow, this is awesome! I really like the vocal chops in the beginning. Nice groove too, well done.

I love simple descriptions. They are easy to read.
lol, dope production though, I'm really digging this! I absolutely love the piano sound and the simple elements around it compliment it well. Fave'd!

Nice piece here. The vocals and guitar are superb, and the mix brings that out. My favorite part was the guitar section around 2:10, that was so smooth​. All around good job!

Nice beat, I really liked the piano! I would rap on this if I could lol, but I'm just a producer too.

Wow, this is so well done! The beat is absolutely fire and the vocals and scratching go with the beat perfectly. Although my style of music is very different then yours, I'm always inspired by your music because I can tell how much you care about the quality of your music and as a result, it's always top notch. Keep it up!

Really loving this song! I actually thought the voice effect (is it a vocoder?) fit pretty well, and all of the changes sound great. I'll be looking for new songs you come out it.

Coming back to listen to this again, I realized that I hadn't given a suggestion for the name. I'm not brilliant when it comes to naming songs but I might go with Takeoff, or something along those lines because the song feels like it's a journey through space. Sounds cheesy I know, but oh well ;p

Awesome track, this is really impressive! A few things to consider: For the intro, you could add a simple arpeggio to make things interesting from the start. The hi hat that comes in at 41 seconds doesn't sound like a very high quality sample, I would remove it. I might add a little something more during the breakdown at 1:37, maybe the arpeggio that I suggested for the intro? The clap that comes in at 1:52 is a little dry, I would add some reverb. At 3:17 when the lead melody comes back in it caught me off guard and was a little confusing. I thought that the outro at 3:00 was good, and instead of bring the lead melody back in, I would have taken everything out except some minimal drums. Finally, something that I like to do to make my drops more impactful is to automate the master volume about 3% - 10% lower during the majority of the song and then raising it the instant the drop begins. This can make the drop sound significantly louder. Hopefully these ideas help you. Also, don't think that I disliked the song in any way. I absolutely loved it, I just want to give you some things to perfect, and help you get into that Music Production school.
Good luck!

Sounds like some Porter Robinson here, nice job! If you're making this in Caustic then I can't wait to see what you can create once you get something better! I know for me it made the world of a difference when I upgraded.

Awesome song, I was intrigued from the start! Nice guitars, vocals, drums, and everything in between. I was waiting for a melodic dubstep drop, but it was okay without a drop, nice job!