Hi Pat..thanks for dropping by for a listen,very much appreciated!....at some point when you've got a little free time Detlef and I would love to write a song for you.
cheers Dave :)
Hey hello Patricia thank you for stopping by you are a very busy woman, I feel like i have had a visit from the boss to tell me iv'e done good thank you Lee
I really love the idea of this song! You're singing out, and the intensity of the guitar really meshes well with your emotion as you're singing. Love that!
The honor to please him...used to do that.......never works :-)
Thank you as always Patricia. I could have spent forever on this and I'm not sure if It would be any better. I suck at recording. In reflection, I believe the "Her" is 'Music' and I am the faithful servant. The words just 'fell out' as well as the music, so I had to ask what it was I was trying to say...
So when you search specifically for Acoustic tracks you find little gems like this one that seem to soothe you a bit. Very nice piece of work and just what I expect and want to hear with this genre.
Hey there Patricia! Ok, I hear your critique Yes! thank you I feel the same about the mix and I feel the music parts don't seem to have enough dynamics. It could be more interesting because your voice has presense and clarity and emotion. I am glad you heard it I wasnt sure if you had or not :)
Hello sweet Patricia !
How honoured I am you such a marvellous singer as you came over here ... !
I know the feeling ... But yeah, you're right, the wheel's got to turn !
I'm sending you a bunch of kisses from France with my friendliest thoughts .
Take care,
Janis ;)
This made feel a few different ways, so I had to listen to it 3 times to try to describe it all.
I think it really describes my mood right now...somber. A little disoriented & disconnected in some ways. All over the place, yea, that's it. Neither here nor there but here just the same.
That is in no way a downer for this lovely piece that is me right now...I close my eyes and its like I can feel all these emotions trying to leave me. That ending does it!
Muzically speaking I'm sure it took a lot of work and thought to orchestrate such a piece that isn't what we consider the norm...beautiful mind :-). Great work!
First my appologize if I've been late in reply this week , & then I should tell you I'm really honoured to read a possitive comment from such a proffesional & innovative musician & singer like Patricia Edwards about my music trials. thank you about your deep insight about my subjective & virtual music Puzzle,I'm really learning here dear Patricia Edwards & really glad to see your kind & hearty comment which encourages me about my music trials . Best wishes & regards .__Behnam
Hey Patricia! Thanks for your feedback. Constructive criticism is a MUST in music! I purposely added an amplified distortion with a mid-high bass setting on it so that I don't have to deal with the gains on my mixing board. I also added a gentle compressor so that I can easily manipulate the levels on the vocals. I added dry stereo vocals in the background so that the vocals doesn't sound buzzy to the point that the lyrics aren't able to be comprehended by the listener. I chose that style as that vocal style as the chorus of the instrumental since electric guitar distortion does 2 extremes: brings high intensity in loud vocals or it brings the mellowest of mellow vocal vibes.
I, personally, didn't make the instrumental long since it was a quick idea I put together in literally 15 minutes at around 5am. But, I will definitely update it in the near future! and btw, thanks for welcoming me in the Loop! haha God bless
Wish I could rap! Nice groove. Not a lot going on, gives the vocals room to breathe. No music, so gives the artist room for that as well, although that could get tricky :-)
Um, and curious...what's bras? Is that an instrument...seriously :-)
When making music I never making for some vocals or something ... most show people I offer a summary of quality in terms of music .. and of course I would do something like that, and if someone asked .. and as for the "bras" I wrote wrong .. my bad I wanted to write a "brass" .. in any case, thank you for comments and advice....thanks a lot
on Feelin Good By PatriciaEdwards ft BLFS by kes187
Good job.
on Ducux feat Farisha - Rewind by ducux
The muzic doesn't take away from the vocals, they are very pleasant and you've created a very nice track I can see myself playing over and over!
Kudos and a great job to you both!!!!!
on Chill by DoruFreeboy
Love the intro...and the orchestral instruments, they kinda give this a sad feeling but I love em anyway.
Nice strong beat, "Chill" is a good name for this!
on Been Such A Long Day - ft Patricia Edwards by tys
on Did You Ever Love Me - Ft Patricia Edwards - Remix by dachopdocta
on Why Im Surviving by Norre
Good guitar. Lovely lyrics.
Thanks for sharing.
on The Best Feeling by Planetjazzbass
And that underlying whomp bass sound thingee (what is that) buzzing around...yes. And that ending mwahhh, it's always good to be let down gently :-)
You guys are really great together!!!!!
cheers Dave :)
on Rock In Da Shoe Feat RomyHarmony by AkAUSHTIC1
Romy's voice is indeed beautiful! You have surrounded it with a pleasant muzical blanket! Your experiment worked. Good job!
Thank you soooo much. Glad you liked it. And you have a great voice too.. look forward to collab soon... : )God Bless You...
on you are so beautiful to me by djdaddio
It's like a cool breeze blowing on a hot summer's day. So lovely and soothing and beautiful.
No more words needed :-)
Thanks for sharing.
on You only bring me back some life by loloCostes
on feat - Patricia Edwards - Juliet - ReMastered by teamrufeless
It's a sad song, but I think the muzical and vocals have done well :-)
on The Honor to Please Her by davepowell1
I really love the idea of this song! You're singing out, and the intensity of the guitar really meshes well with your emotion as you're singing. Love that!
The honor to please him...used to do that.......never works :-)
Anyway, good musical piece!
on Making up by avasuzanne
Love your voice, so sensual (don't take that the wrong way) and the harmonies are just wonderful!
I'd love to hear this without that distortion, although it may just lend that club setting sound that fits so good.
Awesome job! We must collab sometime :-)
ps. not a stalker, mutual fans :)
on Beautiful Clouds by DeepKode
Thanks for sharing.
on Shot Instrumental by conor8
A rapper with a good flow can def take this to another level. I listened to it twice while doing stuff on the computer and got lost...that's good lol.
Nice.
Thanks I really appreciate the comment :)
Peace.
on Leave Me Alone feat Patricia Edwards by MinkSoda
on Let Me Be The One featuring Patricia Edwards by CDouble34Music
I think I'd like it better if you put a little reverb or effect on the vocal and maybe set it back a little so as to let the muzic shine a bit more.
But not bad.
on Purple Rain-cover by janis71
Good job my friend...love hasn't been that good to me, but I'm still hopeful :-)
How honoured I am you such a marvellous singer as you came over here ... !
I know the feeling ... But yeah, you're right, the wheel's got to turn !
I'm sending you a bunch of kisses from France with my friendliest thoughts .
Take care,
Janis ;)
on Find Your Way Back Home by Christopherjoel135
Love the idea you created here. Your voice is very soothing, hmmm, up for a duet?
Good job.
on She Sails The Mists by brillbilly
That water brings about a peace and calm! That drum is a heartbeat that keeps things level.
Love your work: its quality and the emotion your are able to transmit through your muzic. Lovely!
I just do what i like the sound of,and im aways so blown away from the very kind comments i recieve!
Thank you so much!
life love and unity to you!
on PuZzLe of the my Never gone journeys by deciBel
I think it really describes my mood right now...somber. A little disoriented & disconnected in some ways. All over the place, yea, that's it. Neither here nor there but here just the same.
That is in no way a downer for this lovely piece that is me right now...I close my eyes and its like I can feel all these emotions trying to leave me. That ending does it!
Muzically speaking I'm sure it took a lot of work and thought to orchestrate such a piece that isn't what we consider the norm...beautiful mind :-). Great work!
on Daydreaming by BunnieRabbit
Good lyrics, inspirational. I daydream often. And what better motivation for words than life...helps others know they are not alone.
Anyway, love the emotion in your voice.
Great job all around :-). Keep your head up!
on RaRCharm Candace Sims Artiste - Monster Man by Skimble
RnB gone good lol.
Good job to all involved.
on Worship Track Idea by djdstackz
That isn't very long to get a really good idea of where you're going or what you need, but...
I just read this https://www.looperman.com/blog/detail/69 and maybe it could help.
If you can get a clearer vocal that would help as well.
Obviously I think a Hip Hop worship album is a good idea, you've got lots to work with here on the loop. Lots of music to shop with :-)
And, welcome to the Loop!
I, personally, didn't make the instrumental long since it was a quick idea I put together in literally 15 minutes at around 5am. But, I will definitely update it in the near future! and btw, thanks for welcoming me in the Loop! haha God bless
on MY TIME MY RULES by kristijann
Um, and curious...what's bras? Is that an instrument...seriously :-)