Hmmm...not bad. Your voice is clear, like your improv. Your voice could actually go for a country singer, I like the way your confidence shines through even though you were trying to "find youself". You must be much better now?
And then a little action to follow. At first it didn't grab me as Heavy Metal.
I heard some kind of boat action going on, good guy chasing bad guy, maybe some 007 action.
But then that rock guitar and the back and forth kept me on the edge of my seat, wondering what was next. Nice horn section, orchestral, really good quality track! Love the excitement, just great from beginning to end!
Thank you Patricia. Thanks for listening. I guess you're right about doing things when it flows naturally. I'll try to get springtime get into the next one :-P
Thanks for the very descriptive comments, I think I am going to copyright this, and turn it into a Romance Novel, how about THE LOOPERMAN DIARIES, for a title....LOL ;)
It was a little difficult to listen to this all the way through...the bells sound like they're in a different key from the rest of the song. Or perhaps they are louder than the rest of the instruments and overpowering them.
Other than that I think there's a funky bassline in there :-)
Thank you for your comment never thought of PRINCE...lol I listened to your stuff and you have a Great voice. I have to admit tho...i dug MOVE YOUR CAR. One of my Favs
thank you very much ms. edwards! the concept of the stand alone complex is actually from the anime ghost in the shell, which is one of my favorites. the show and movies are all very heavy on psychology and philosophy. i too would like to hear some vocals on this. thanks again for the listen and the comments, much appreciated.
Lol thanks for stopping by and taken a listen to my track =D im glad you enjoyed it and as for the ending i will work on it lol but for taking the time to comment =)Have a good day and take care.
I am in complete agreement with you. I realized that right after I uploaded it. I will definitely go back and really master the mix and maybe add a few things and really work on the melody. Thanks for the critique.
on Skunwysyny by MateoCzekHH
Other than that, good vibes here :-)
Thank you and greet
on it would help if you find us by djdaddio
on it would help if you find us by djdaddio
Great work, as usual!!
on In the rain feat Benjizo by maxxkolono
Good job :-)
Did I mention, I like the beat?
on You Cant Push Me In A Corner by adamtaha
Push yourself a little harder :-)
Good work.
on Breaking it In by webguybrandyn
Cool sound effects, keeps the track interesting.
Great listen!
on Judge Me Right by sook73
Judge me right, I like that :-)
Welcome to the loop!
on BeHNaM Zandi - The Return of the Hero by XmafaX
And then a little action to follow. At first it didn't grab me as Heavy Metal.
I heard some kind of boat action going on, good guy chasing bad guy, maybe some 007 action.
But then that rock guitar and the back and forth kept me on the edge of my seat, wondering what was next. Nice horn section, orchestral, really good quality track! Love the excitement, just great from beginning to end!
Many thanks for you great comment.
I really appreciate it
on When You Are Here by musiclover38
You'll write uptempo songs when your heart says so...until then, write what comes from the heart :-)
Great work!
on Taylor Swift - I Knew You Were Trouble Remix by Cyto
I don't usually listen to Dubstep, but this is huge. Very nice and tasteful use of the vocal, good quality track!
on Cross Rhodes- Mastered Version by CreateR
That very first note took me by the hand and the rest of them gently tugged at me as they guided me through a very sensual and beautiful dance.
And then the sax swept me off to another place on the dance floor and I began to melt.
I was in heaven...and I can't even dance (lol). Thank you so much for the dance :-)
on medicine by ljshadow
Other than that I think there's a funky bassline in there :-)
on Ole Fashioned Love by Patricia Edwards by RockOn
Love the clean loving sound you gave this :-)
on Let Me Be The One feat Patricia Edwards by newyorkminute
Thanks for sharing :-)
on Instrumental rap beat 3 by xXJNBeatsXx
Very calm, not really a "typical" hip hop song (IMO) and I really love the strings. They seem to sway like trees in the wind.
And that ending, very nice!
Very much enjoyed.
on You Stressin Me feat Patricia Edwards by doudei
Love the creativity. Definetely some jazz elements here!
I love every note, second and awesome moment of it!
You rock!!!!!!!
on Alissa by mikekeyz
Good vibes on this one!
on An Angel to Keep by jerrywaitsjr
If this isn't one of the most beautiful songs I've ever heard.
Your voice Sir, strong, confident and made me wish I had an angel to keep :-)
And you have muzic by one of country's greatest, Randall822!
I JUST LOVE THIS! Great job to your both!
And, welcome to the Loop.
on where did i go wrong by djdaddio
Almost has an easy jazz feeling, even a neosoul vibe.
You know how to do it, good job :-)
on Belly Dancer by IamABP
on The Stand Alone Complex by StereoMathematics
Maybe it sounds like a panic attack, or a seizure, or a record skipping, baffled, confused, unsure...
So, very accurate description. Clever and creative muzical composition.
I'd be interested in hearing some vocals on this :-)
on Journey by AngelFox2580
I really love the range of emotions, lots of excitement, good transitions, much variety. A journey worth exploring!
And I won't mention the ending...shhhhhhhhh...lol :-)
Great job!
on Improm2 by CreateR
This feels so much like jazz to me. Love the cool vibes, sounds like a nice jam session.
Good stuff! Thanks for sharing :-)
on Blues Jazz Groove Track One by KingBallatore
Otherwise, good job.
Later,
Erick
on Apart of Nature Ft Buddahmann and PatriciaEdwards by Brent88
Buddamann's got a nice flow.
Welcome back, hope you and your ears are doing better :-)