I'm only use to the standard type of trance with a beat, never heard of a trance like this before. anyway... The timing of the piano at the start is slightly off compared with the beat. And something similar happens at the end section as well. The 4th piano note/key in my opinion would sound better as a higher note. Besides that it's a captivating & good song.
I think I know why the piano sounds off beat on the melody, I tried to add a appogiatura to the melody (I think that's what it's called) so I think that's what's causing the piano to feel offbeat when it actually is so I might take it out. I'll try out the piano as a higher note thing too. Thank you.
A nice solid sound tune you have here. I can't really fault it but feel there might be something missing that could make it better but I can't think of what.
I like the sound of this track a lot. I feel the first of the 2 main build ups could be dropped entirely, and the 2nd shortened by about 40% as they are quite long build ups. Just my opinion though.
It feels weird that I can't reply directly to your reply without having to make a new post, but anyway -- It was just the 1 compliment. The track as it stands reminded me of something which is a good thing. It reminded me of slowly falling asleep and dreams building up at the same time, then being woken up by an alarm clock or loud noise. On the other hand, if the bass was dropped completely, it may make for a perfect chillout track. So the bass comment was neutral.
Please do try and keep a copy of this version in its current state as I think it's perfect for what it is. The only flaws in my opinion are technical - the minor audio clipping / audio clipping sounds throughout.
Good effort. I thought the hi hat at the start was a bit too loud, and didn't fancy the fade out effect at the end of the vocal sections. The rest was pretty much perfect in my opinion.
Very interesting & well constructed. Probably experimental music as a genre overall. Reminded me of speedcore in both electronic & rock forms mixed together. And also fast indian drums like some of Ravi Shankar's music, with a touch of a classical style like Waltz or something similar (the slow parts).
I listened to the whole song so needless to say it's a captivating one. There were some minor flaws with slight out of key & vocal low points but overall I enjoyed the seamless flow of different kind of sounds & like the overall style of the track. well done
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If you really love the second part I may upload the Main melodi as loop so you will be able to include in one of your future projet!
if you want the .midi just pm me
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