hey cool track you should learn your lyric or you will loss alot of your flow. i rap as as well i was need to learn my lyric in my mind or i wasnt able to as well learn my flow and even change it.
btw if got time you wellcome to comment on my track.
Thanks for the feedback! I don't think there are any loops, its just Drakes - Blem soundtrack in the background with Bxnner singing his own lyrics over it :)
paino bass snare vocal clash that all you used in your track and they dont have the same BPM = beats per minuet. i hope you understand what i mean. im not trying to be rude. you should try listen to your own track for at least 12 hours right after you made your first wave file. trust me a beats would change more 20 times and only be better.
It's the same sample, I just played with the sound design so it wasn't so repetitive. I guess I get what you are trying to say though. Thanks for the feedback :)
As you said, story telling at the moment is the core of the music. I imagine it comes from the contrapuntal talks between melody and counter melody in accordance with knowledge of each instruments. Also, the scene and human emotion are the same. I will study them and do my best. Thanks for valuable comment.
so i gonna share dis vipe with u i just talk in that phone i feel so strangled talking about what is close to me i gonna go to the oher room smoking takeing my stress jumping in the front but my heart is hot disko but im to crunk.....
hi there you have no sound in that track.
but it eazy to start make music just go to loops and samples
and download some loops and it a good idea to look for the same tempo after that you could go to acapellas and find some vocals of the tempo as your loops and mix it together and then try opload them maybe there is some that comment on them that way you learn some more good luck :)
I am the wild warrior and i fight for a genre free world :)
Nice to hear something from you centralsdev.
I still try to do just things. I never try to do things in a way like befor.
Sometimes it works better then on others but i still try to do different things :)
Nice to know that you can enjoy my songs with a smile on your face. Cause then it looks like i have done it right.
there need something to make it sound as a full song you should try with one of those a bass or drum“, other then that you should Work on not use to many effects, or at least check bass mid and low and turn one of them off to listen how the sound is and possible it could be broken but you would easy hear soon as you turn maybe mid and low off then listen to the bass.
Hi centralsdevĀ
Thank you very much for your kind feedback.
I take your point, but if you read the discerption you will see that this track, it was a request for a friend son.
I am aware of how to dismantle a track, To see what is required or whether is work or not.
Thanks again.
Jamid
i cant tell what it is, but you have both clean and not clean sounds. you should Work on each sound with the bass mid low, you would really fast hear if any of the sounds is broken.
You know reveb with out defus isnt good but you could get better with use few effcets on master track but you can listen to my track i used few effcets but I took the wav and made effcets on top of them dumb idea:)
You should make some lyricks for this. I would have made them for you but im not used to this genre,not because it bad but i get some words, like the rain and days, that just mean it isnt my style.
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My voice is deep as it is :)
No pitching at all.
So a bit higher would mean 1 octave higher and then i think it would change the feeling much to much .....
Sure i could make the instruments just a few notes higher but that would destroy the sound of the guitars ....
So i think it is good like it is
stay tuned
joe
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but it eazy to start make music just go to loops and samples
and download some loops and it a good idea to look for the same tempo after that you could go to acapellas and find some vocals of the tempo as your loops and mix it together and then try opload them maybe there is some that comment on them that way you learn some more good luck :)
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Nice to hear something from you centralsdev.
I still try to do just things. I never try to do things in a way like befor.
Sometimes it works better then on others but i still try to do different things :)
Nice to know that you can enjoy my songs with a smile on your face. Cause then it looks like i have done it right.
thanks for the time for listen and your comment
stay tuned
joe
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Thank you very much for your kind feedback.
I take your point, but if you read the discerption you will see that this track, it was a request for a friend son.
I am aware of how to dismantle a track, To see what is required or whether is work or not.
Thanks again.
Jamid
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