centralsdev

it sound as one long line, for a 2 hour track it not really good, and you should had used more time.

if we didnt had Friday i think our music would be useless :)

yeh you should be on first place, at least you have listen before you force us to listen.

sorry to say but your bpm isnt right.

if you made it, could you tell how you made it?

rebeat rebeat... i know i made some mistake as i rap on when someone bass shoot me so i cant flow as im made for the beats goes in brek as my words comes out i could have made a mil of words even after the dead but the beat goes off im talking as none sense but i have been stock in that shit so my ear says stop. oh shit but you still see cut.

hahaha owned by a bass!!!

stay a while and listen.

so you dont know what a effect is?

there could be a sound effect on each loops/samples as well on the vocal. even your sound could be made with effects.

really nice track just a shame you have used that much effect.

hey cool track you should learn your lyric or you will loss alot of your flow. i rap as as well i was need to learn my lyric in my mind or i wasnt able to as well learn my flow and even change it.

btw if got time you wellcome to comment on my track.

your song does not sound normal but it seems you have some broken samples of to many effcets. most of the time it isnt vocals but loops.

nice track.

paino bass snare vocal clash that all you used in your track and they dont have the same BPM = beats per minuet. i hope you understand what i mean. im not trying to be rude. you should try listen to your own track for at least 12 hours right after you made your first wave file. trust me a beats would change more 20 times and only be better.

hey nice track you got there. and some cool drums. you only need some vocal. keep up the good work.

hey not bad. but one thing is sure if you want two drums work as one the tempo should be the same. you could try it and let me know.

samples should be same tempo or the wouldt work relly well. or you should change the tempo so they would fit together.

hi there u need to make it more a story teling at the moment it seems as it the same all the way :)

hi there nice track but your voice need to be more clear.

hey there if u still got the samples u should change on bass mid and low

so i gonna share dis vipe with u i just talk in that phone i feel so strangled talking about what is close to me i gonna go to the oher room smoking takeing my stress jumping in the front but my heart is hot disko but im to crunk.....

keep up the good work :D

hi there nice song and music but i feel like your voice could be a bit higher.

hi there you have no sound in that track.
but it eazy to start make music just go to loops and samples
and download some loops and it a good idea to look for the same tempo after that you could go to acapellas and find some vocals of the tempo as your loops and mix it together and then try opload them maybe there is some that comment on them that way you learn some more good luck :)

good work man.