nice and clean sound! but i think it to long when it keep in the same tune almost all the way. if you ask you should add some more main sounds or maybe add some breaks good luck.
hello there first of all you need to use loops/samples with same bpm or it wont sound right. then you could make some changes here and there so it wont sound the same all the way the song then it hard to hear the singer. so if you work 9 hours more on the mixing and the levels of the music singing you would have a lot better all around song. good luck
Thank you for the feedback! I did get a sense of the song energy beIng the same from the beginning verse to the chorus. Thanks for the feedback. It's my first time making this genre of hands up style.
If you have any other suggestion on specific improvements that could be made I'm open to all ideas. Sincerely, Baxuvis
you should try put another track with your voice on top on what you have now so you have two of the same sound on top of eachother if it to high you should cut bass or mid or even both so you only have low right now it hard to hear what you are saying because the music is to high volume but it sound good so far.
first of all it sound as a mess
then the volume is to high
and you used under 10 loops for almost 8 min
and some places the bpm wasnt the same
and i think you should use more time on effects
if it your first track there is room for learning
but you need to have a open mind and as well think
you could do better.
days have past it now i feel i have a good time long night with out a smile everything was feeling dry even my mind i been walking far to get those good days hopefully for a longer time running few times...
hi good to see you are back on looperman i have miss your music :)
i can see you didnt made anything new. we should make a song together soon or later :)
Hey centralsdev. Long time not seen you. Good to know that you didn't stop making music at all. I did and do making stuff but last times i have not that much time to finish things and so on …. family man things :) …..
I am always open for some collabs. So if you have an idea or some cool loops or stuff - just tell/send me and we will see what happend
hi there to telling the true this song made almost cry she got a really sweet voice and the music fit her voice really great.
dont tell anyone but im in love :)
look every day i go and wonder what about the next day listen time passing cant stand my own mind poeple looking as i care i do my grime danceing jumping at shop i burn cash i walk with one step at time i remember those days i was walking with no shos now time has change flying with my head high my feet on the ground no one is close i feel alright even at night trying to get at the stars i now that long steps not as moving lips print my move because im over the driv limit not as mad as grime king.... it a cool beat but you should add some to the beat you got alot of talent you just need a bit then you be same line as the stars haha good luck and keep up the good work.
day after day standning by my self lookning for something to bring my feelings back day after day standning by my self lookning something to bring my mood back
day after day standning by my self lookning for something to bring my days back
feelings back mood days back
i tried to prey but it doesnt help eating a life by life ohh who can i trust when my god left me uhh mom the only time i cryied was soon as your poison in my food didnt kill me im isnt really mad but close you never get maybe im fool but im not a brian dead you better stay away i have nothing more to say.
hello there great beat keep up the good work i just made those lyrick for fun if you like me to make the last two vers lmk good luck. atm joe here
hey there im starting up on looperman again after a long break.. i could see you looking for Colab Request im post a beat in few days you can keep a eye when i opload then you could listen and if you like it we could work together. keep up the good work :)
i never make really long tracks or even complet songs, or i wasnt abele to do anything else then working on songs like a normale work day and im only doing it for fun. but to get variation you would keep working on it and add more to the track, or you could try add some vocal.
i really like the style you made
but first of all you have used to much effcet
and i dont think your tempo is right
i used to start out by listen to my own tracks for 12hours then i changed it to as well sleep while i listen to my own track
just to get the feeling of how the song really is i gave up after that as it dosnt sound normale soon as you use just one effcet.
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then the volume is to high
and you used under 10 loops for almost 8 min
and some places the bpm wasnt the same
and i think you should use more time on effects
if it your first track there is room for learning
but you need to have a open mind and as well think
you could do better.
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Thanks for your feedback.
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you could as well listen to my new track i made a song with looperman loops at bpm 140 maybe you could rap on that?
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i can see you didnt made anything new. we should make a song together soon or later :)
I am always open for some collabs. So if you have an idea or some cool loops or stuff - just tell/send me and we will see what happend
stay tuned
joe
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day after day standning by my self lookning for something to bring my days back
feelings back mood days back
i tried to prey but it doesnt help eating a life by life ohh who can i trust when my god left me uhh mom the only time i cryied was soon as your poison in my food didnt kill me im isnt really mad but close you never get maybe im fool but im not a brian dead you better stay away i have nothing more to say.
hello there great beat keep up the good work i just made those lyrick for fun if you like me to make the last two vers lmk good luck. atm joe here
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some vocals might do the trick tho, but I'm not good of a singer myself lol.
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ty for feedback.
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but first of all you have used to much effcet
and i dont think your tempo is right
i used to start out by listen to my own tracks for 12hours then i changed it to as well sleep while i listen to my own track
just to get the feeling of how the song really is i gave up after that as it dosnt sound normale soon as you use just one effcet.