you should try put another track with your voice on top on what you have now so you have two of the same sound on top of eachother if it to high you should cut bass or mid or even both so you only have low right now it hard to hear what you are saying because the music is to high volume but it sound good so far.
first of all it sound as a mess
then the volume is to high
and you used under 10 loops for almost 8 min
and some places the bpm wasnt the same
and i think you should use more time on effects
if it your first track there is room for learning
but you need to have a open mind and as well think
you could do better.
days have past it now i feel i have a good time long night with out a smile everything was feeling dry even my mind i been walking far to get those good days hopefully for a longer time running few times...
hi good to see you are back on looperman i have miss your music :)
i can see you didnt made anything new. we should make a song together soon or later :)
Hey centralsdev. Long time not seen you. Good to know that you didn't stop making music at all. I did and do making stuff but last times i have not that much time to finish things and so on …. family man things :) …..
I am always open for some collabs. So if you have an idea or some cool loops or stuff - just tell/send me and we will see what happend
hi there to telling the true this song made almost cry she got a really sweet voice and the music fit her voice really great.
dont tell anyone but im in love :)
look every day i go and wonder what about the next day listen time passing cant stand my own mind poeple looking as i care i do my grime danceing jumping at shop i burn cash i walk with one step at time i remember those days i was walking with no shos now time has change flying with my head high my feet on the ground no one is close i feel alright even at night trying to get at the stars i now that long steps not as moving lips print my move because im over the driv limit not as mad as grime king.... it a cool beat but you should add some to the beat you got alot of talent you just need a bit then you be same line as the stars haha good luck and keep up the good work.
hey there im starting up on looperman again after a long break.. i could see you looking for Colab Request im post a beat in few days you can keep a eye when i opload then you could listen and if you like it we could work together. keep up the good work :)
i never make really long tracks or even complet songs, or i wasnt abele to do anything else then working on songs like a normale work day and im only doing it for fun. but to get variation you would keep working on it and add more to the track, or you could try add some vocal.
i really like the style you made
but first of all you have used to much effcet
and i dont think your tempo is right
i used to start out by listen to my own tracks for 12hours then i changed it to as well sleep while i listen to my own track
just to get the feeling of how the song really is i gave up after that as it dosnt sound normale soon as you use just one effcet.
used ableton, and lots of time making the track... writed some chords and melodies made a few drum patterns and used a lot of sound effetcs.... tried my best to mix it well.
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Mark.
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then the volume is to high
and you used under 10 loops for almost 8 min
and some places the bpm wasnt the same
and i think you should use more time on effects
if it your first track there is room for learning
but you need to have a open mind and as well think
you could do better.
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Thanks for your feedback.
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you could as well listen to my new track i made a song with looperman loops at bpm 140 maybe you could rap on that?
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i can see you didnt made anything new. we should make a song together soon or later :)
I am always open for some collabs. So if you have an idea or some cool loops or stuff - just tell/send me and we will see what happend
stay tuned
joe
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dont tell anyone but im in love :)
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some vocals might do the trick tho, but I'm not good of a singer myself lol.
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but first of all you have used to much effcet
and i dont think your tempo is right
i used to start out by listen to my own tracks for 12hours then i changed it to as well sleep while i listen to my own track
just to get the feeling of how the song really is i gave up after that as it dosnt sound normale soon as you use just one effcet.
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