It's a track & all that, but it can use a little more personality. Like if somebody says something about eating popcorn, toss a sample of some kernels popping in the background, &/or toss a chorus effect on certain vocals to give to lyrics more pop/variation/ definition. Only other thing I can think of is maybe back off the main compression a bit so the kick & snare don't get washed out in the mix. Your track sounds good dude
Thanks I never even asked the man at the studio can he put sound effects behind certain words but I do think it's a nice idea,like if you say bee you hear a buzz in the background yeah I'm a try implementing that
Nice work dude, mix sounds a little hot, but then again mine are usually too muddy &/or not bright enough.. granted I listened to it on a phone speaker, in a bathroom
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