Pretty good melodies dude! Especially the main melody after the whoosh sound...but the synth sound doesn't really go great with the melody. As for the tiesto style, think to get that you need a pumpin kick introduced into the song with some bouncin hats sweepin and panning in the mix! But real good melodies man! That's the best way to build a bangin track!
LOL!! I was thinking of my 4 yr olds teddy, "Bear in the blue house" listenin to this....problem is he would love bear to go mental and wreck my place!!! He'd think it was funny!!!
Very atmospheric track pep!!! And the description you gave was spot on!!! Top notch!!
really nice chilled trance feel. love the synth and melodies used here. the vocal goes great with the music too. i assume this aint the finished article, so please drop me aline when its finished!!
Really nice sounds in there man!!! Would love to hear a break with a lead melody tho...kept waiting for those stabs to lead to something huge, but it didn't come! Aah well...maybe it's better the way it is, but you know me..i like huge leads..
I'm glad you liked it salkizar. Hehe i know that you like huge melodies :P i wanna make one sometime soon too. Also it's no problem about Jack i gotta thank you too. i heard the original too it was pretty good also i read the lyrics carefully i guess it wasn't just funny i liked em ^^
Wow, when that kick started I turned the vol up!!! The bass is groovin too!!! The synths are nice and big clubby soundin.....Dont know bout the fade out at the end tho..!! LOL!!
Hey thx a lot Salkizar i'm glad you like it about the fadeout i just didnt what to do then, well who knows i already updated it twice yesterday if you have some ideas feel free to tell :D
Hmmm....."Phantasise!!" Thats what i'd call it!! Great trak man!! Yeah you are gettin better all the time! Thought it needed a bit more lower end but thats just me!! Aah well..Nice1
Hey mate!!! LOve the bass and the kick is bangin. Only thing I felt straight away is the seperation on the kick..I always feel you should keep the kick right in the middle of the mix then everything else sounds bigger!! Take a wee listen to my song London 0300. Thats pretty much what i tried to do...
The synth on this and the sidechaining is top notch too!!! I really think the only thing is the kick. Think if yo center it and lift the lower end it'll come together!! Hope that helps mate!! Great tune.!!
thanks for your thoughts mate. I thought that about the seperation myself but i just seemed to make it beefier on my system but i listened to it with heaphones and it sounded pretty bizarre. so thanks for the tip. I have just been having a look at our track there and i don't really know what else to do with it. i can finish the arrangement but apart from that its got all the relevent parts. what do u think? any ideas. i am suffereing a little from block i think!
I would bring that lead synth up a good bit in the mix. Think it needs to stand out a lot more..and it does need some more stuff thrown in there too I feel. I dont know what your plan for this track is though, so I'll just say keep adding stuff. The mix however is really great. Nice and crisp!!!
I made this with the hopes of finding someone near me to put a rap over it, so I kept the synth low on purpose, kind of as background to some lyrics. Thanks for the listen!
Not bad production on this....sounds like the kick is pushed to the limit...I assume its coz you had problems makin it cut through...Think you need to use filters on your cymbals and eq your bass and kickdrum together before you do anythin else, that way they will cut through the mix better! Good tune too!!
This is a good track, but from 2:46, it rocks!! I reckon you should start it from there and build it from that point, then expand on it. Dont get me wrong, before that point its really good! But I am of the opinion that you should take the best and make it better! Trance nowadays is such a high competition music genre, and I think you should take the best of your work and expand on it..Hope you take that as a compliment! You got loads of talent man, just use the BEST of what you create even if its all GOOD...! Know what I mean?
Yes I know exactly what you mean and it's all true i apreciate your thoughts too cus you rock too ;) but i don't like to touch the original so maybe some other project with same/similar sounds
Glad you liked it and took your time for reviewing this thx
P.S. I upload the remastered/fixed edition of chicago clockworks now would be delighted if you took your time to check it
This is an great track!!! And the piano loop is great by the way! Really fits with the song...Love that synth sound too..really big and clubby!!!!
Too short though man, was really enjoyin that and now its finished....Get a break in there and some big melodies coz this tune could be AWSOME!!!! Its really really good now, but it could be , as i said,.....Awsome!!!!!!!!!! Well done man!!! Just build on what u have so far!!
Thank U djsalkizar! Glad you liked it!! Too bad i only have the demo, so i could save it, well well.
Its really great that it was better than i thought, that you liked it i mean! See you soon !
Great tune!!!! Very distinctive too....love the synth...didn't at first tho..thought it a bit cheesy but it grew on me by the end!!! Good production on here too!!!
I like it!! Good work, and catchy too! Like the strings in there. Think about a shorter intro though...I almost turned it off waiting for something new to come in then it did..!! Keep the listener hangin on...coz theres some really cool stuff comes in!!
Thanks for the review. It was the goa loop that caught my attention. I really liked the sound so i tried to work around that. maybe i will make my intro's a bit shorter next time. I appreciate your comments. Thanks again. I will check out some of your tracks. Thanks again. Respect.
To be honest this type of dance aint really my thing, BUT i know a good dance track when I hear it, and THIS is a good dance track!!!
Great little melodies all the way through and your use of filters is pretty good too!! Do you know how to use automation clips in fl?? Just wonderin..coz when I figured it out EVERYTHIN changed!!
I love when people mix stuff like this with music!!! Nice track...just watch your levels their a wee bit loud! Check my "tranquility" track!! Think you light like it coz It has Neil armstrong / nasa mission control and Richard Nixon mixed in with it!!!
So I guess this was created in FS Studio going by the title!! LOL!!
NICE production on it man!! Think it needs more melody though. A bit repetitive for me...Try to get a nice lead on it with a break somewhere too..will make all the difference.
This is classic trance dude!! Get this one to anjuna beats!!! The production on it is perfect! And the flowing synths just get my hairs on my neck fizzin!!! Nice1
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And that boomin kickdrum is fab!! Great frickin groove man! Awsome song!
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Very atmospheric track pep!!! And the description you gave was spot on!!! Top notch!!
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i'll look forward to it!!!
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Yeah, bangin song man!!! Nice1
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The synth on this and the sidechaining is top notch too!!! I really think the only thing is the kick. Think if yo center it and lift the lower end it'll come together!! Hope that helps mate!! Great tune.!!
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Thanks a lot!
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Glad you liked it and took your time for reviewing this thx
P.S. I upload the remastered/fixed edition of chicago clockworks now would be delighted if you took your time to check it
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Too short though man, was really enjoyin that and now its finished....Get a break in there and some big melodies coz this tune could be AWSOME!!!! Its really really good now, but it could be , as i said,.....Awsome!!!!!!!!!! Well done man!!! Just build on what u have so far!!
Its really great that it was better than i thought, that you liked it i mean! See you soon !
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Great little melodies all the way through and your use of filters is pretty good too!! Do you know how to use automation clips in fl?? Just wonderin..coz when I figured it out EVERYTHIN changed!!
HAHA yes I know how to use automation clips in FL :P
I figured out that some days after I got the program :D
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NICE production on it man!! Think it needs more melody though. A bit repetitive for me...Try to get a nice lead on it with a break somewhere too..will make all the difference.
Thx for the review i find it a bit repetitive too but i have some other ideas so we will see if there'll be a new melody or not ;)
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