Salkizar

As i said above it is original and great kikk bass sound!! Your levels are a bit out tho..the kik is too loud in the mix, and your clap needs to come up. With the kikk take back the mid range level a bit coz its like a hammer in the forehead on phones! That should make it more balnced all round. Nice1

Nice work man!! Like the arp sound you used..it fits really well with the rest of the track. Try throwing in a synth lead too...

Really like the kick!

I still have a dream!!!!!! Awsome!!!

I wanted to do this sort of thing with Ali!! But never got round to it!

This is bangin Pep!! Is this what you asked me about..re the vocal?? I cant remember......

Keep it up!!

Dude, I thought of my fav movie of ALL TIME when i was listening to this....this is the BOMB!! Sick as F@#!

Oh the movie was The Matrix!!!

This tune has Kung Fu Matrix style written ALL OVER IT!!

Faved!!

I think this is a good effort for the time it took. LOve that bassy synth at 2:20!! Good use of filtering too!! Needs more bounce to it tho..just to give it groove!!
But like i said...for 2 hours work, man..its good!!

I like it dude! What I would like to hear in there tho is a pad fading in to give it some atmosphere, with a nice soft melody on it! It would really get chilled out then...Think it could be a lot more than what it is right now, dont know if you're finished with it yet tho..? But if u are then it is still really good as it is..(but it could be better..! Damn! Couldn't help myself there!! LOL!!)

UPDATE!

I'ts better, a lot better, but def needs a bassline! To groove with the kick! Other than that it's sweet man!!

Love that melody man! I would have arranged it different but thats just me..Great track tho!! And that melody is SUPERB!!!!! Keep it up!

As louis walsh would say...."I like it!"

Great track with different combinationas of vocal / synth etc...great melodies too....nice deep trance feel to it! well done dude!! Keep this influence goin on....

Catchy tune. And I agree with THTRTD. That volume kick thing does stick out a little!!

But this track would slip nicely into a club set no prob! Great bassline and I like the melody you repeat pretty much all the way through! It's really well arranged coz I didn't get bored with the melody at all...which tells me its good!!!

Ok mate..I have listened to this now with the cans and I think what is missing is a pad or summmit...That deep saw bass sound needs less stereo seperation coz it Feels empty coz its so wide..actually that bass at the end with the kick is awsome!! Then bringing in the saw bass , then some higher pads over the top maybe...Like I said before the percs sound great, tho i think the kick needs more low end on it.

If you could find a female vocal a bit like ....bizarre inc "playing with knives" you know just a short line that repeats..that would kick ass!!

Aright mate..so this is what you've been up to..

I'm wonderin what you mean by, "from scratch.." I have only listened to this on laptop speakers so far as I am scotland and i dont have my headphones with me..

I was not sure about this at first..the melody was a bit too hard for me, but the percs sound awsome on the laptop. I think it is a great baseline track but it needs more layers to give it depth. Actually I will probably update this review when i have heard it on the headphones, coz the drums stand out for me right now....

Hows our track comin on by the way?

Hey dude I've just listened to this 3 times in a row!!! Guess I must like it!!! Awsome job!!

Nice track man!! A wee bit short I think but still good! Nice mix on it too!!

Whoah!!! I used to have this ringtone....LOL!!! Great idea for a trance track dudE!!

Could imagine this on a ericson tv ad or summit!! great little track and very original! Nice1

Pretty good melodies dude! Especially the main melody after the whoosh sound...but the synth sound doesn't really go great with the melody. As for the tiesto style, think to get that you need a pumpin kick introduced into the song with some bouncin hats sweepin and panning in the mix! But real good melodies man! That's the best way to build a bangin track!

This mix is awsome!!! Vocal are fantastic, right in the centre of your head!!Tickling right between my eyebrows!

And that boomin kickdrum is fab!! Great frickin groove man! Awsome song!

LOL!! I was thinking of my 4 yr olds teddy, "Bear in the blue house" listenin to this....problem is he would love bear to go mental and wreck my place!!! He'd think it was funny!!!
Very atmospheric track pep!!! And the description you gave was spot on!!! Top notch!!

really nice chilled trance feel. love the synth and melodies used here. the vocal goes great with the music too. i assume this aint the finished article, so please drop me aline when its finished!!

i'll look forward to it!!!

Really really like this tune man!! Only thing wrong is too much compression on it!! Other than that its ace!!!!

Really nice sounds in there man!!! Would love to hear a break with a lead melody tho...kept waiting for those stabs to lead to something huge, but it didn't come! Aah well...maybe it's better the way it is, but you know me..i like huge leads..

thanks for the review on jack by the way!

Wow, when that kick started I turned the vol up!!! The bass is groovin too!!! The synths are nice and big clubby soundin.....Dont know bout the fade out at the end tho..!! LOL!!

Yeah, bangin song man!!! Nice1

Hmmm....."Phantasise!!" Thats what i'd call it!! Great trak man!! Yeah you are gettin better all the time! Thought it needed a bit more lower end but thats just me!! Aah well..Nice1

Pretty good for a first track. Got really bouncy around 2:05 with that double synth thingy!!! Could do with a rolling type bassline to drive it along but a good first track. Keep at it and you'll just keep getting better and better!

Man I love this!! That kick is f@!?in awsome!! Great use of panning and filters too!! Into me favs!!

Hey mate!!! LOve the bass and the kick is bangin. Only thing I felt straight away is the seperation on the kick..I always feel you should keep the kick right in the middle of the mix then everything else sounds bigger!! Take a wee listen to my song London 0300. Thats pretty much what i tried to do...

The synth on this and the sidechaining is top notch too!!! I really think the only thing is the kick. Think if yo center it and lift the lower end it'll come together!! Hope that helps mate!! Great tune.!!

NIce remix man!! I hope they let u keep it on here!!! I had to remove a remix with an eminem vocal...Great job tho!!