Byleth

Hello BlancFroid, I love your track its very spacious and somewhat mysterious !

I also like the duration of this music its not too short or too long just the perfect length.

Peace From Byleth

p.s your are from Canada like me :P

Even its a basic production I love it, Nice work dear friend and Stephanie
I love the fact the fist part have no vocals its make the second part more epic.

Peace

Very punchy track, The bassline is loud and its what I love about this track

Merci d'avoir partagé cette musique

c'est la première fois que j'écoute du Dub c'est quoi ce genre ? je trouve que cela sonne reggae

Peace from Byleth

Hello phat, I use a headphone who add bass too so idk if the mix need to tweaking but its sound great. I love your outro its pretty wet muahaha

Im sorry for the bad joke XD

Peace from Master Byleth

Nice sunny house track dear mudhoen, some sounds from the intro look likes a Woodpeckers. I found that funny :p

I really like your synths choice for that one makes its pretty atmospheric and pleasant to hear through a headphone.

btw what the voice say ; i heard "kiss" or "this is" anyway I found that a good add-on for your track.

Peace from master Byleth.

Very nice sinister ambience you made people like phat and me.

I like your drums and the piano you made.

I also like the very slow tempo of this track.

I will fav it !

Peace.

Hello, first I wish you the best of success. im not good with 8bit chiptune but I could maybe help you a bit :

first, based on all the chiptune I have heard the tempo is usually fast.

Second, they play alot with the pinch, don't be afraid to be wide with your main melody

Third, some of the work seems to use slides notes.

Fourth, this is more a advice than a technique but I remember when I was trying to make my first industrial metal track. I simply listen a colossal amount of industrial metal. So if that could help you I recommend you to watch this video and maybe try to watch some of Chipmusic Weekly video here one

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7YWI8cTHozs there are a lot of chiptune track from this guy.

Finally, since i try to train my mastering skills its could be awesome to allow me to master your track just for training, I will not distribute the track useless you want. I will also give you a copie. pm me if you are interested.

Peace.

p.s your test isn't a complete waste you could convert it into a intro.

Will fit well for a retro video game. there are a way to find your complete work since this track is just the main synth. I would like to heard the full track.

I also like the ReonN remix of your track :p

Peace

Usually I don't live vocal music but I could say your voice fits pretty well with your work. Nice job

Also I have maybe 2 thing to ask you,

First, could you put the lyric ? For a non English person, like me, who would like to understand the real meaning of your work lyrics is the best friend.

Second, could you make an instrumental version of this track. this would be cool.

Anyway nice track.

Peace from master Byleth.

Great work, I like what you did with the sfx.

I also love the guitars did your friend or you records it or its computed generated ?

Anyway that "weird" track gave me a good experience.

Peace from Master Byleth.

Nice reply dear Xyilent, and you are right about the fact in some areas need minor work on it.I still thinks the idea is awesome to have multiple transitions and change the melody each times so try to keep it.

Also the voice thing is my personal opinion.In fact, I generally hate voices except for choirs in epic music. Maybe that ruin my objective judgment.I just wanted to let you know that.

I could recommend you to wait others feedback about the voice before work on it.

Peace from Master Byleth

Good track dear Xyilent, I like how you add new melody with the transitions.

Also, I love your simple main melody and how its ends with 2 long notes

The only negative this I can tells is with the voice there are something I dislike but I can't tell you what maybe the positioning in the track "at start and ends of some parts"

try to mute the voice to check the difference.

Peace from Master byleth.

Hello, this track have some good potential I like the voice with its effect, I also like the pure trance parts.

I just found few transitions (voice and pure Trance parts) a bit rude. Once the "waveform in looperman" is fixed I will wrote you down a constructive feedback.

Meanwhile, you just have to wait :P

Peace

nice track;

I like the voice effect you used at 0.55 min who returns at 2.08 min.

Also the msg is good too. Maybe you could write down the lyrics this will help us to follow.

In addition, you should make minor variations for your drum this will reduce the repetition

Finally I love your outro.

Overall ; even hip hop isn't my favorite genre I passed 3:08 min with pleasure!

the melody is awesome nice work!

The main instrument remember me old Pokemon music (GBA.)

This track is short but i think its a good thing.

well done.

peace

Awesome, this Cinematic track is pretty dark, I love you work with the Music box melody. the Strings stab is great too.

For the first track I play from you im impressed I may check your other works.

The only negative part I could say its the track is maybe too long or too repetitive you have choice shorter this or adding new element through the track like choirs (vocals) or Brass.

if you want I have a good choirs vst if I have few info like the BPM and maybe the .midi of your main melody I could create some choirs just for you free of charges. Pm me if you are interested.

Peace and Handshakes from Byleth

Rap is not my favorite genre but the dark tone to it with the piano and strings loops gives me a good moment.In fact, very good moment!

this is a great thing for a songwriter to know how to produce/compose music.

This make you very "polyvalent"!

The effect on voice is great too I found its sounds like the devil :P

The only thing I do dislike is at 0:48 min I found there are missing the same fx for the voice as for 0:45 min

I can't believe I will fav my first rap track :P

Great work from a great artist is always welcome into my favorite playlist.

Peace and Handshakes from Byleth or ant4505(if you remember me) !

have its potential. I like the cutoff effect you putted at 0:13 min.

will you include that beat in a future work ?

anyway thanks to let me discover you.

Awesome progressive Cinematic track, your piano effect is beautiful.

I also love the ambient sounds.

@Danke thats hurts my heart "best Cinematic guy" I thought I was your friend how you can stabbing me like that ? HOW????

Good but there are a instrumental version of it im just the kind of person who love that kind vocals. I found like the music do not have the same "tempo" as for the vocals or there are missing some keys to root the vocals with the music at some moment.

Just Incredible, all the SFX fit perfectly. Love also the laugh at end. if I could vote for that contest I will for you.

Btw the accent for me makes its betters.

Nice one reminds be the Horrorcore genre. ( a pretty unknow one). This is pretty nice. I love it, even its simple its somehwhat makes a signature from you. Keep going.

I love the pinch play on the main melody this also reminds me Legends of Zelda Ocarina of time!

I will fav it for sure.

pretty nice cinematic track with some electro elements. I love the guitar panning effects.

I also like your drum beats its pretty groovy and fit in perfection with the track.

For your intro its simple,clear and work in perfection. Just for that I fav your track !

Well, I can maybe see that track in a very old video game like "Asteroid".

I like how this pass from slow to fast.

and yeah this could be also a alarm sounds...

Somewhat I like annoying stuff so well done. hope you did have fun to make it.

(im curious about how many time you put to create this masterpiece)

Peace and Handshakes from Byleth to FrozenStick and maybe jamid, Nniorin0Ney, Riest, GoldenOokami, mud,Darklighter, Midispark and looper!

I just saw I wrote "hip op" and not hip hop XD

I will wait for the instrumental for sure :)

Peace and Handshake from Byleth.

p.s the track sounds more epic with my studio monitors. I used a public computer when I wrote the last comment. I somewhat regret since I missed some important thing like the sub bass who made the track more rich. Also the voice is more deep.