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Thanks man! I will look a little deeper into these genres perhaps.

Hello l'ami,

J'ai dégoté ce vocal sur looperman en cherchant de ci de là, ca faisait un moment que je ne sortais que des instrus et j'avais envie de me faire un morceau avec voix :) ravi de lire que le résultat semble plutot matcher, jamais évident de faire ce genre d'exercice :)
A 1mn25, oui la voix est au naturel, je n'ai quasi rien fait sur cette piste hormis rajouter une petite reverb. Après je suis complètement d'accord avec ton analyse, il faut absolument que je retoque le volume à cet endroit.

Pour la batterie, je vois ce que tu veux dire, après je voulais pas qu'elle se détache de trop :)

Merci pour les critiques constructives, je prends :)

Bleep

Thanks for the great comment, YesYes!

Thank You. I checked out your profile b4 answering, I have a metal background so that might influence some things. Metal is a very drum heavy genre so it is natural to progress to it if you are a heavy hitter like me.

MANY THANKS, HOPE HE DIGS II LIKE I DO.

Hmm, yeah I didn't see your previous comment. Not sure what happened there. Thanks for listening, and I will indeed keep them coming! :)

I'm by my lonely with it, thanks a lot.

Thank you so much, monsieur!

Thank you buddy! You're two for two with the suggestions! Good on ya! :) I added some bass to fill out the lower end.

I also tried to warm up the track a little overall as well. Hopefully these were both moves in the right direction.

I uploaded the revised track to my Soundcloud page if anyone wants to hear the difference. Thanks again!!!

https://soundcloud.com/toddlove/middle-eastern-inspired-upbeat

You are right in that, my friend. When the sound is more mature I will see if I can get a drummer to re-record that drum.
Thanks for the feedback.

Julio

Thanks for listening and commenting!

Cheers dude. Your a guitarist indie, just wanted to let you know that i recorded the melody using my three year olds toy ukelle. The riff isnt complicated ed as i wanted it too be, its so flimsy i could only tune two strings at a time!

NO LOOPS BUT THANKS FOR LISTENING

THANKS MUCH APPRECIATED

Damn it, it would be nice to have a remix of yours ... please let me know if you can get another card before that.

Regards,
Julio

Thanks again.This is the super helpful type of insight I was hoping to get here, so thanks for that. Let me know if you ever need another set of ears on anything.

I think you asked if I was English. I'm 50% British, although I was born and raised in the Sates, my mother is originally from England and has since moved back. I've been many ties and really enjoy the Lake District...and all those great sweets, and Marmite too! :)

Thank you so much for the feedback. I think you were right. I tried to fix it but I may have wound up making more of a mess. I need to take a break at this point, but here is the most current version if you have time, see if this is any better. Thanks mate!

https://soundcloud.com/toddlove/phenomenal

Thanks for listening and for the feedback. I think I spent more time focused on the instrumentation than I did on the vocals. So it's highly possible you are hearing some behind the beat stuff. I'm wondering if you could specify just one point in the track so I can hear exactly what you mean though? Thanks again!