juankar

Great track! I love the breakdown that starts around 1:13. Really got me grooving!

Good work here. The vocals fit in the mix nicely. The instrumental is very catchy. Good luck on your continue music education; you're doing really good!!!

Great job on track. I really enjoyed in listening.
I love it! Cheers!

very good

Hello juankar, I thoroughly enjoyed this deep house track you've put together....Odarka's vocals are excellent as usual but the music you put together is a perfect fit for those vocals and really powers this effort....its really good.

Wow. I love this. Is really great.

This is great again. Again i tell you that i think you will learn the mastering fast. This is your second track and see how good it sounds.
I wish i could let my beats sound like proffesional but after 6 years i still cant.

Oh yeah, this is spot on!! Takes me straight back to the 90's! Yeah, vocals can be a real pain to deal with at times. I still struggle with the same issues you do while trying to master the DAW I use, Abelton Live 11 Lite. You're on the right path here, keep plugging along, even when you get so frustrated and on the verge of exploding. Might take a while, but working knowledge doesn't come in one day. Work at your pace, and you'll get there! The track is excellent, strong work! PS: +1 for Analog Lab V, so much stuff to work with!

Love your track, keep up the good work :) Several oldies here, me included, hope to hit 70 in a few months ;)

Wow, great beat that fits the vocals perfectly, you've done fantastic work again :) Keep it up...
I've been using Reaper since 2024 and have never felt the need to switch DAW.

incredible first work

Im also 61 and in 2020 i start to learn how to make beats on Fl studio.It took a long time to remember where all the plugins are and what i can do with them.(and all the time i forget lol ) I diddnt do any mastering because i diddnt know how.Never in my life i didd something with music before .
Im not that good in making beats but i can make them without using loops. If i listen to your beat im sure you will be much faster then me. Learn how your daw is working and watch youtube videos to learn more.

Your first?? Well you didd a great job.Odarka's beautiful voice fits perfect.
The mastering sounds also realy good.

It Gave me chills. Good sound quality. Nice vocals too. Nice and smooth house track!

V professional and a lovely, gentle House tune set off by O'Darkas beautiful tones

Juankar! You get a A grade. Your mix and arrangement skills are fire. This is 1 smoothed out composition. Really great work here. Keep it up!

Mark

if this is ur first track then you might be a prodigy haha. most peoples first tracks are god awful. well done and hope your music journey is enjoyable!

Hello juankar, this is really good my friend, Odarka 's vocal are superb as always and your music is a great fit for this first effort?.....hard to believe, its a great first effort.

Amazing track !

Beautiful vocals + beautiful beats = beautiful track.
Amazing job for your first song.
Congrats!

MY FIRST TRACK WAS RECORDED IN A RADIO TAPE PLAYER ! and it was ruff '' great job, song and vocals. Don't rush your self you will learn more than you think, just keep making music and that will open more doors and ideas.

Holy crap, if that's your first track... That's amazing! Who did the vocal?