The piano in this is very nice and i like the rising synth as well. It's very laid back and the strings are nice as well. I don't know much about trap but this is sounding cool. Shame it just stopped so abruptly.
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lol, very interesting touch to the beat. mixing the usual heavy trap 808s, hihats, and snare-rolls with a light classical style ambiance. Very peculiar and different. Nice.
Ronabo I would really like to Colab On that Trap Out Track, MY DRUMS WOULD DO YOUR MELODY AND ALL MORE THAN JUSTICE! Get at me sgproducktionz@yahoo.com let me know if we can do something on that or on something else
Thanks, I like mixing my laid back piano style with different genre. I like the hype of trap music, but I play more of a laid back and chill style. It seemed to work on this track pretty well. Now, I have to figure out how to finish it.
This moves like it's going somewhere, solid mix with lots of flavour...
You could have someone spitting some logic...Lyrically to meet the depth
and swagger of the track..Can't be no stupid stuff...
Also a guitar with style and simple lines...other then that the tracks talkin
smack.. :-)
Tight track Ronabo! I can't believe this is your first time. This is Hip-Hop for sure. I really like when track breaks in at the 1:15 point. What I would do personal is add a little more thump / bass to the kick and some crispness / reverb to the snare. Just my two cents but I also usually make old school Hip-Hop beats. I really like what you have so far. Nice work.
Hey Shatner, Yeah it is my first real attempt to a hip hop track. I normally play a lot of jazz chords and chill music. I really appreciate the feedback and glad to know that you think is a tight track. I find it difficult to mix and master tracks. I hope I can figure out how to get the thump and crispness necessary for hip hop. Thanks again bro.
I think the mix is what would make this track sound more hip-hop.The track is great, and hip-hop comes in all flavors, but if you are going for that traditional hip-hop sound..I think building the mix around the kick would be a good start for this track.
I have one advice for you. If you don't over-compress your music, then it will not be as loud as other tracks, but the dynamic range will be greater(sounds better). My latest track is not over-compressed so it has more dynamic range: http://turnmeup.org/
You made a good track there! It is different than other Hip Hop beats. Different is good, because it makes you unique. Why make music sound like anybody else. Non of us look are are the same, why should our music not reflect our uniqueness?
Man... Those synths pulled me in from the start!!! I can't overstate how much I love the synths here! Very easy to follow along with. Even the way you transitioned was very strong. I'd love to have this on my gym playlist. looking forward to see what else you do with it. Hell, this would even make a solid stand alone interlude.
WOW this is great...!!!
Flow is good as a Hip-Hop song would be.I mean you have maintained the Hip-Hop/Rap structure here...!!
Really loved those beats.Well programmed.I think you can lower the claps a bit and can add some Reverb to beats.
Those piano variations are addictive and cool.Gives a real feel of Pop/Hip-Hop.
Bass-line is really good.You can tweak it a little bit.I think its sounding more like a Dance or House bass(i think its only for me....don't change those keys,pitch and all....Just tweak it a little bit)
Song is really perfect.You can extend it by 1 Minute..!!
Awesomely produced....!!
Thanks for the feedback, Advait07. I really appreciate it. I still have work to do on it. I will add a little reverb to the drums, I think that is a good idea. I am going to add a bridge I think to compliment the track and see what happens.
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You could have someone spitting some logic...Lyrically to meet the depth
and swagger of the track..Can't be no stupid stuff...
Also a guitar with style and simple lines...other then that the tracks talkin
smack.. :-)
Outstandingly done...
Peace...TG.
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I didn't notice anything that was not working.
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Flow is good as a Hip-Hop song would be.I mean you have maintained the Hip-Hop/Rap structure here...!!
Really loved those beats.Well programmed.I think you can lower the claps a bit and can add some Reverb to beats.
Those piano variations are addictive and cool.Gives a real feel of Pop/Hip-Hop.
Bass-line is really good.You can tweak it a little bit.I think its sounding more like a Dance or House bass(i think its only for me....don't change those keys,pitch and all....Just tweak it a little bit)
Song is really perfect.You can extend it by 1 Minute..!!
Awesomely produced....!!
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