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ronabo

Music is the harmony of life
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Joined : 11th Aug 2012 - 13 years ago
Last Online : 31st Jul 2025 - 3 months ago
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EricMilligan
EricMilligan 14th Mar 2014 21:24 - 11 years ago

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Yeah. I kind of play by ear as well. I usually do know what key I'm in, but with complex chord progressions I just do what sounds right and I have no idea of what the chords are. Unfortunately, I'm now finding it hard to play the kind of stuff that you can do. I sold my 76 key Korg and got a little 37 key Virus Polar. The Virus sounds fantastic, but the keyboard is really too small to play good fat chords and melody lines with two hands. Your Yamaha would be much more suitable. I think I took a wrong turn, at least for some types of music.
EricMilligan
EricMilligan 14th Mar 2014 20:32 - 11 years ago

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Hey, Ronabo. I'm back, taking a break from working on my latest track. Am working through all yours and liking what I'm hearing a whole lot. I agree with many of the comments posted already on this one. First of all, this one, like your other tracks is crying out for R&B vocals. I love the chord progression in the middle section. I'd cut back on the arpeggios and keep them for the middle section, but it kind of depends on how things fit with a vocal. If I could sing, I'd be working up something on this one for sure, but I can tell from your tracks that you have a better sense than I do about how to craft a soulful melody line. I expect to learn from your examples. I think the drums need tightening, both in terms of applying some quantizing and also compression. I'm not sure if you've shifted kick and snare timing, but I'd play around with that to get the groove more locked in. Might want to drop the drums levels down in the mix, particularly the snare. Bass line is great. OK. That's my 2 cents worth. I'm off to listen to your next track!
ronabo
ronabo replied 14th Mar 2014 - 11 years ago
Hey Eric,

I play by ear so I do not know really what key I am playing or what chord progression I am using. I appreciate the comments though and the constructive feedback. Thanks again.

Ronabo
EricMilligan
EricMilligan 13th Mar 2014 03:42 - 11 years ago

on Chicago Swing - after feedback edits by ronabo
Whoa! How did I miss this one? Great feel. This is the kind of music I love. Well, I like a lot of different kinds of music, but this kind of R&B/Jazz thing really hits home with me. I love it, but I must admit I don't know how to get that kind of sound and groove. Very jealous! :)
ronabo
ronabo replied 13th Mar 2014 - 11 years ago
Hey Eric,

Glad that listened and enjoyed it. I love neo soul, rnb, jazz and kindof mix them up to get different feels. On this track I delayed the kick drum and snare but kept everything else on a 1 beat. Then I added a little swing to it. Sounds like we like the same sound. I would love to hear your other tracks.
MastaMnd
MastaMnd 6th Mar 2014 13:52 - 11 years ago

on Chicago Swing - after feedback edits by ronabo
I'll listen again and maybe provide some feedback but i enjoyed it too much for that now. :)
ronabo
ronabo replied 13th Mar 2014 - 11 years ago
Thanks again MastaMnd. I am glad that you enjoyed it. I have many more in my head. :)
MastaMnd
MastaMnd 6th Mar 2014 13:51 - 11 years ago

on Chicago Swing - after feedback edits by ronabo
thanks for the comment again. Love this! Smooth as butta my friend! Me being from Philly and a 70's baby :) I can definitely appreciated some Soul.. Any kinda soul.

Glad you put another mix out there for us to enjoy! You got me vibin' for sure! Just inspired me to produce a Neo Soul type track.

Good luck!
ronabo
ronabo replied 13th Mar 2014 - 11 years ago
sorry i am just responding.. I appreciate your comment MastaMnd. Have you produced a neo soul track yet?
bartofficialmusic
bartofficialmusic 19th Jan 2014 00:51 - 11 years ago

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Nice. I sing to your track. Love it.
ronabo
ronabo replied 14th Mar 2014 - 11 years ago
You should record yourself singing to this track and share it with me. :) I am glad that you love it.

Ronabo.
Alan3w3
Alan3w3 18th Jan 2014 17:44 - 11 years ago

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I like it, good grove, would sound good with vocals and a little more low frequencies
ronabo
ronabo replied 14th Mar 2014 - 11 years ago
Thanks for you comments and I am glad that you liked it. I hear that a lot about my tracks .... that I need more low freqs. I will pay attention to that going forward. Thanks.
Polyfronetic
Polyfronetic 17th Jan 2014 22:26 - 11 years ago

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I love the tunes from Dane and i also love your work.
Just relax and listen to the vibes... good job!
ronabo
ronabo replied 18th Jan 2014 - 11 years ago
Thank you Polyfronetic... I am glad that you can vibe to it.
mrwolf14
mrwolf14 16th Jan 2014 12:33 - 11 years ago

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Very good tune!
Like the epiano: simple but builds the right carpet for the vocals (really looking forward to hearing it completed).
I like the drums, but maybe the snare could be a bit more "dry", not sure though... and since this is your song I'll let you decide :-)
I also second the idea of Ed: let the listener wait for the arpeggio 'til the first chorus. Maybe you could just serve smaller chops of it as appetizer in the intro.
The track is also well mixed.
Good job!
Ciao, Domenico
ronabo
ronabo replied 16th Jan 2014 - 11 years ago
Mrwol14, Thanks a lot for these great comments. I really like the idea of chopping up the arp and giving the listener just a taste of it in the intro. I am definitely going to try that. I am glad you think that the track is mixed well... I try but that is my weakness.

Ronabo
crucethus
crucethus 16th Jan 2014 04:49 - 11 years ago

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Very, very nice composition. I enjoyed the bass line as well as the arps. keep at this one this is a cool tune my friend
Steve
ronabo
ronabo replied 16th Jan 2014 - 11 years ago
Thanks crucethus for the comments. I will hopefully finish it soon. :)
mackit
mackit 16th Jan 2014 01:59 - 11 years ago

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Can't wait to here this when i'ts done. Smooth RnB track. Danke is a true musician. PEACE. THE MACK MAN OUT.
ronabo
ronabo replied 16th Jan 2014 - 11 years ago
Thanks Mackit.
Tumbleweed
Tumbleweed 15th Jan 2014 22:08 - 11 years ago

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Oh yeah....Danke is good musical company for sure...I can hear a nice R&B vocal on this one ronabo...but gotta say its just good listening even as it is...I think I might consider taking the arps out of the intro..and bringing them in for the chorus parts as you did...kind of gives the show away right off the start rather than letting it build a bit...just an idea...and certainly not a criticism..enjoyed it...dm good job....keep on...Ed
ronabo
ronabo replied 15th Jan 2014 - 11 years ago
Thanks Ed. I appreciate the comments. I like the build up idea. I may play with that intro and see what how it sounds.
BabyBrady
BabyBrady 15th Jan 2014 16:23 - 11 years ago

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Fresh n clear drums.... sounds good!
ronabo
ronabo replied 14th Mar 2014 - 11 years ago
Thanks. I am trying every day to get better at my drums and blending it in with music better.
husny
husny 15th Jan 2014 13:24 - 11 years ago

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amazing piano...
ronabo
ronabo replied 15th Jan 2014 - 11 years ago
Thanks. You should check out the rest of my tracks and comment. :)

I listened to your track that you posted years ago. I like it a lot even though i didnt understand the language. The vibe was cool. When are you creating more tracks?
anthonyabutler32
anthonyabutler32 31st Dec 2013 16:51 - 11 years ago

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I enjoyed this track a lot. Real nice melody.
benjizo
benjizo 30th Dec 2013 19:05 - 11 years ago

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i feel some soul in here.I LIKED IT.
ronabo
ronabo replied 14th Mar 2014 - 11 years ago
Soul indeeed Benjizo. I am glad you liked it. Hope to hear from you soon.
Ronabo
ScottFranco
ScottFranco 30th Dec 2013 17:45 - 11 years ago

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I really like it, Ronabo. You've got a good start and am looking forward to the completed product. Very arpeggio work. That's something I need to look into more.

Cheers,
Scott
sashmaster
sashmaster 30th Dec 2013 05:43 - 11 years ago

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new lead and a good rnb singer/writter the rest is ready to b something
evilarmy83
evilarmy83 30th Dec 2013 04:35 - 11 years ago

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very nice, danke is the sheeeiiiittt.
ronabo
ronabo replied 30th Dec 2013 - 11 years ago
Yes... Danke create some good music too
pepestar
pepestar 30th Dec 2013 04:35 - 11 years ago

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with this track i could fly between stars, alone or not... :) thanks
ronabo
ronabo replied 30th Dec 2013 - 11 years ago
I am glad you enjoyed it. Keep your head up, aim for the moon, and if you happen to fall at least you will be amongst the stars. :)
Danke
Danke 29th Dec 2013 19:50 - 11 years ago

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Hahh...brilliant track...so special, made for vocs and that's cool...really have space for it, I imagined a good RnB voice for it...May I suggest stg? Thank you! :-) That sharp synth tone is a bit strange in this song...If this is want to be a vocal theme, that's ok, but if not, would you please find another tone for it? Just an idea...

Best for 2014, Danke
ronabo
ronabo replied 29th Dec 2013 - 11 years ago
Yes.. I do not like the lead either :) ... just thought I would try it and see what happens. I'll come up with a much better lead and post it. Thanks.
ScottFranco
ScottFranco 30th Aug 2013 22:53 - 12 years ago

on Chicago Swing - after feedback edits by ronabo
There ya go...It's happnin' now! Thanks for keeping the bass at a reasonable level. Whoever started the styles of music where the bass is so damn loud you can't hear anything else, should be shot! I want EVERYTHING to be heard in my mixes.

Anyway, good job!

Cheers,
Scott
ronabo
ronabo replied 18th Jan 2014 - 11 years ago
Yes indeed... I know what you mean. I think the music sounds much better with the bass volume low. Thanks for the feedback ScottFranco.
KIESERSAUCER
KIESERSAUCER 19th Aug 2013 04:01 - 12 years ago

on Chicago Swing - after feedback edits by ronabo
I'm really digging this..This is really up my alley. I'm big on Neo-Soul. Would really like to collab with you soon! I think we can do some great stuff. I'm gonna fav this one!
ronabo
ronabo replied 20th Aug 2013 - 12 years ago
Glad that you are digging this track! I love Neo Soul too. Let me know when you are ready for the collab.

Ronabo
Tumbleweed
Tumbleweed 19th Aug 2013 02:09 - 12 years ago

on Chicago Swing - after feedback edits by ronabo
I like this one ronabo...has a nice jazzy vibe...the bass is right on and you`ve got some great keyboard skills going on here...that little part where you drop the backing & tinkle the keys around 1;25 is really effective...smoooooth listening...like it the way it is...if I were to try & think of anything to change it would just be something along the lines of maybe adding a tad more variation....maybe throwing in a little bridge part way through to step it into some different/complimentary chprd progs......enjoyed the listen....well done.....Ed
ronabo
ronabo replied 19th Aug 2013 - 12 years ago
Thanks Tumbleweed.. Glad that you liked it and I appreciate your feedback. This is a work in progress track so i just might add another part to enhance the track. Good idea about the bridge part.
smallpaul
smallpaul 18th Aug 2013 10:41 - 12 years ago

on Chicago Swing - after feedback edits by ronabo
Still smooth and still flowing, an improvment on the last mix. Maybe the lead is a little overpowering from 0.22?? thats my only thought?? Otherwise so smooooth and laid back. The keys from around 1.26 are amazing!!
ronabo
ronabo replied 18th Aug 2013 - 12 years ago
Thanks smallpaul. I am trying to get better at mixing. It is harder than it seems.
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