silverman

the intro is great love the effect putted here. its me or there are some trap elements in this track.

anyway nice track was a pleasure to listen it 5 times while I write this comment

Regreetings.

Sorry to hear you're tired all the time. I've also been struggling this week to do any decent music after work because of pretty much falling asleep in the studio listening back to tracks.

"my creative juices are not flowing as they were"

They certainly were on this one. I'd be proud to have come up with this track.

Also part of the problem with the sharp and piercing noises is the level of the track. It's basically all too loud, as you can see from the waveform. Try just turning it all down at the end of the mix (ie the master). I assume this one must be "going into the red" ie introducing some clipping and digital distortion. Having no clipping at all will make for a smoother listen. Hey, it's not extreme metal...

Congrats again.

Don`t know how I missed this one earlier...but I miss a lot of music time this time of year....even though its totally unlike it, the intro reminded me just a tad of an original oldie (shuffle blues) called Night Train (used to play covers of it it days long gone)....love the big breat power & complimentary train sound fx....and the way you have wrapped it all up musically with the chugging synth and bass pulse...Its been said already, but this is indeed really creative stuff mate...and it turns out to be great listening music too....bravo....definite fav...Ed

Yo.

I played a few tracks on here, looking for something to comment on, and yours really stood out to me.

0:23 you kick in with a cool groove and then a much fatter beat at 0:26. That's pretty badass, actually. This has some serious vibe.

1:03 intersting change.

Some of the high end white noise stuff is a bit too sharp and piercing for my ears.

1:25 cool transition back down into the fat verse beat.

This is really creative stuff.

More thoughts from me another time, provided you reply, which you didn't last time.

Cool track. Really loving the fading vox. The switchup around 1:38 is pretty neat as well. Cool little pan sweep with the percussion. You really pay attention to all the little details in the mix. Speaking of which, all the instruments fit well with each other. Nothing is really drowning anything else out too much.
Great work on this one

I dig this very much! Always will have a place in my heart for reggae. Nice beat and choice of instruments! I guess my only problem with this is the master, as it is quite squashed and doesn't use the headroom it has. That is just personal preference. Might work good if you were pressing a record though? Either way, enjoyable listen!

Nice track thanks for sharing.

Hey there mate...Great groove you've got going on here man,the reason this works so well is it's not trying to out think itself,there's a cool theme running through the whole piece and all the elements reflect it resulting in great continuity!...I will mention here your post in the forums about 'losing one's mojo' as it's directly relates to this track where you obviously haven't lost your mojo...........You and I are from the same generation we've had plenty of time to figure out truth from fiction and all the rest of life's bullshit,and there's one thing that is crystal clear to me,especially when it comes to the creative process,there is no future,there is only the past and the now,sure we extrapolate and project as humans do but it's in the rumination of ideas,concepts and actions that we find ourselves....it's in front of us all the time,it's that ant your about to step on,or consequently not step on,it's in that fluctuating beat that's going on behind your eyes,for instance you mentioned you had a lot of unfinished tracks you were about to bin,somewhere among all that stuff is a passage or phrase that is worth keeping,try finding it,copy and paste it into a new track slot then delete everything else.....to me making music is like milking a cow (without any machinery! lol)you have to sit down with a bucket and stool an get to it and in that process barring accidents you'll end up with something,sorry if I got a little tangential here,this is a great track with plenty of great mojo!..cheers Dave :)

Very creative stuff here!
I'm travelling along the music (in my mind - I should actually be asleep and not killing sleeping time in front of the computer) and enjoying the trip.
You are one of those musical picture painters here I gather, this is even more like a movie though.
Very talented.

Cheers/ SJ =)

Nice work ;)
Lots of stuff going on here all the way through, very dynamic and creative beats always evolving i specially enjoyed that part from 2:40 onwards very cool indeed although that sax at 2:45 is causing some distortion on my monitors.
Overall is a very creative ambient track which in my opinion only needs some adjusting on the levels here and there.
I like it very much.
Peace
WB

Really nice ambient work! I like the subtle hints and references to a train rain with the little samples you used (like the sound of steam and engine) Really cleverly done!

Hi hoe Silver,
Mate, I’ve just about to listen to your new track you moved it?
Playing hide and seek are we?

dang i was really enjoying it! but then the beat dropped and it sort of changed keys or something ( not sure )

but still - - - great intro ! ! !

Wow, how did you do those cool effects to the synths? That's SICK. Awesome, I mean. Wow. Very ambient, a little on the odd side but that's not a bad thing :P Very original work. One thing that stood out to me was the drums were a little loud and harsh on the high end for me, but thats just me :P Maybe turning them down just a hair will help allow you to raise the overall volume without making it uncomfortable for the listener.

Cheers,

ER

Mr. Silverman!

Straight through from a Tarantino soundtrack...:-)

Fabulous music right here...got that train feeling...we made a track with Ed (Tumbleweed) in same manner...just staring out the window and telling stories from the past and hoping the good ones from the future...

Respect and handshake, Danke

Hi ho Silver,
Haven’t you got a bed to go to!!!!

I like how the rhythm and the bass mimic a locamotive. Great sounds, sax equates to the horn, you even make it sound like a steam locomotive. The subtle placement of guitar is awesome as well. The bass line is right out of the seventies (Quiet Sun) . Awesome creative use of minimalism to represent a visual idea using sound, brilliant my friend.
Cru

Great sounding track, first time reviewing a Ambient track, didn't know what to expect (I gotta expand mt horizons)
The mix is knocking great job.

Really good sound and groove, not sure about Ambient
more of a chill or dance groove...
But it's nothing but some Music so call it what you like...
Why everything has to be in a box, is way below the talent
that is needed to make Music anyway...

Cool track...

Peace...TG.

I have made this track specially for you mate I hope you like it.
Jamid
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/168426

Hi hoe Silver,
Wow mate, when did you upload it?
Yes, I must say this is your best work so far.
It constructed very nicely and tastefully.
The only problem I have with it, I cannot kill it ????
Brilliant …….favs it goes
Well done
Jamid

Fabulous...incredible...you transformed the feeling of night train ride into a soundpicture so incredibly well that this is unbelievable....I hope I'm not too generous if I say this is probably your best work to date!

Compliments and respect______Orlando

that was great. It sounds so heavy.

Aswome track man

Status Quo if maybe they would have stayed together. I like this low-fi garage sound