inklewinkle2

I don't know how you feel about people using your tracks. But I did use this track and came up with something. Please let me know what you think.

https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/172326

Agree with beerling1970. Too few comments to this great track.

Good work!

/Anders

Nice to see the work of another young artist. I'm 16 now and started using Mixcraft when I was 12 and have always wanted to make tracks like this. Amazed also at how you wrote most of your own stuff. I've never gotten such clean bass quality from the shitey virtual instruments in Mixcraft so I've been restricted to using loops to make dubstep tracks. So I was just wondering what program you use to get an understanding of how it's done, thanks. Also you should think of getting some of your tracks up on Triple J Unearthed or Soundcloud to maybe get some more publicity.

Funny track :))
The tempo is increased too fast...
However good job :)

nice! the chords progressions are crazy! that Massive drop interrupted the whole flow for me it sounds like that it`s a whole different track, but it`s cool Klass style :) and the waveform is weak sounds good but weak!
anyway keep up the good work! Cheers! :)

collab, sorry computer auto-corrected it

This is really nice. Would you like to collar? I have a really good idea for a song and it would be perfect with your style

This is cool, keep making these, practice will make you better

drop is so awesome...

nice work , pretty good

Dude seriously, this is SO sick! :D

Hy IW2 it's true there are some error in the production and mixing but i think this is a very very good song and you are only 14 years old and over time you can only improve your skills...keep it up.
I'd really like to have the separate samples and help you make a killer liquid dubstep song... ;)

You're off to a good start, Inkle. I don't see a problem with the tempo changes which can be subjective as expressed with the other comments. If you like it, do it. I would increase the volume level, though and if you used compression, back off on it some. It sounds a bit muffled on my end. All in all...Good Job!

Cheers,
Scott

This is good! Speed is pretty much, main point is, a track shouldn't be come suddenly, it would be disgusting to the listener. Keep it in the climbing speed at the beginning(0:50) . By the way nice work. :)

cool track. i think the tempo increase may be a bit TOO drastic but its got a great vibe overall.

Nice work! I like how the vocals you used led into the beat. Very nice! I could imagine being part of a documentary about NASA or something :)

Really great track you got here. You got a great future ahead! Only 14 and already making club bangers? Can only imagine what your music will sound like ten years from now.

Keep up the great work!

112 plays no comments ????
20 downloads no comments ????
2 faves no comments ????

Well I would like to say that this one Awesome track
but I felt it was more trance that Electro/house
but A great sounding track either way.

From
Steve

who has played faved and downloaded and commented on this Awesome track.

Dude! Lemme make a dirty drop for this plz! Haha. Got a great build up for a dirty drop at like 3 min in. U Did a good job on this tho. the synths r a little plain. But it all comes down to ur style. If ur happy with it then f*** every1 else. Its imposible to find a single song/artist that everyone likes.

Considering your age, You created an awesome track.
Well done. Keep it up!!!!!

I think it sounds very nice but becomes a bit repetitive after a while, I see there has been given some other advise already so needless to post it twice. Thanks for sharing this ;)

This is great, if you are willing to give me that saw-arp from the intro i might be able to do something new with it.

well...if you are 14 (which I dont believe) I`m sure you have a great future ahead of you...I am always reluctant to offer advice on a genre that I have little experience with so I tend to just consider wheather or not I enjoyed listening....found this one a bit too repetative (but I understand that is the nature of a lot of dance genres) although you certainly did keep it rolling with the instrument changes, arps and beat drops...not sure how accurate the wav. graphic is here on the Loop & while it looks like you have it limited down to everything at the same volume I thought the dynamics were fine (synths seem to be quite forgiving that way and I`m just listening pc my pc speakers) and the mix sounded nice and clean....I`m sure you will get a lot more useful feedback that I am able to provide....keep on...and all the best...Ed

Hi. My first thought after "This is really good" was "Is this guy really only 14?".

If so, I suspect you've either already been doing this for a few years and/or are a musician who's been playing for a while. I don't know what I would have been like if I'd had synthesizers and audio software aged 14 but I imagine not as good as this.

There's a lot of musicality and variety in this track. You remind me a little of myself in the way that you keep doing new things and introducing new elements. My tracks have more variety because of the different acoustic instruments, sounds and drumkits that are constantly being introduced. But you've managed to create a lot of variety with only a few synths.

Well done and I shall give a more specific, detailed review (plus some suggestions) another time - probably tomorrow.

A clean sawtooth, good vibes, nice arrangement. Needless to say, a good one!