This is very lovely. But I do think it's like a stock that needs another hour of cooking, to bring out the beauty of the vocals more. I think the vocals could come up a touch - just a touch - in volume relative to the music. (This is all totally subjective.) And I think there's room for some thicker vocals and harmonies here and there. As a thought. Sometimes I've written songs in 15 minutes but then spent 2 months revising them. I think you're onto something here and can revv up its savoriness even more.
Thanks! I appreciate the feedback and encouragement. Working on getting those vocals to pop a bit more for sure. All the comments have really helped me make this a better track already. Thank you again!
A lot of cool stuff here. The panning of the pad from 1:00 - 1:15 is awesome. At 0:37 I feel like some lower tones could add punch to the chorus. Great track.
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