Damage, the voice of Patricia slightly is too far back, in my opinion. Nevertheless it is a good track .... very tendance "Dance" .... Great Job my Friend, although the end is missed a little .... evidence that I have been to the end Hahaha!
Good weekend ....
Vraiment bon .... oups sorry .... really good. The tempo, to balance very well but a bit repetitive. You should find a nice soulful voice, to wrap all this, and perhaps follow the advice of Ed below.
This does not detract from the quality of the track of course ....
Hope all is well with you...Thank you for coming by and listening...this is and old idea from a few years ago...I have a very bad habit of starting projects and shelving them when i think too much about them.. i have several concepts in mind and i certainly agree with both Ed and yourself about the repetitive nature of the track...but i appreciate that the general consensus is that the track has potential.. Again thanks Dan for stopping by..your comment is very helpful
MStokes...thanks man for coming by and checking this idea out...and while it has a lot of elements left to put in i really appreciate your comment...as for the guitar...i pulled it up out my sound bank and played it on my midi controller...had a hell of a time getting it to sound somewhat like a guitar....talk to you soon
Now this is absolutely...why do I wanna say gorgeous WTHeck LOL.
The drive, the vibe, the energy...I can hear this on a Jazz CD!
I think the only thing that seemed to take away a bit was that hi hat hit throughout (not the closed one)? It happens too much for me. But that's just me! And the solo, right on!
Thanks for coming by and commenting on the track...this track has been on the shelf for a couple of years now and i was going through my files and ran across this..yeah i meant to go through drum track and level some parts but got distracted (my daughter hounding me for cash)!!lol so i forgot to fix it before i uploaded it...anyway i'm glad you liked the idea and you are certainly welcome for the download...by the way i have that last track finished and will upload with the DL...i also have an idea for one of your pellas that will be a suprise as i will not microwave this one.as your vocals for this particular track moved and inspired me to put some real work into this!! anyway...stayed tuned!!
I love where you are going with this one carlosnble...smooooth and catchy...and just invites some soulful vocal or some kind of little solo line that doesn`t overpower waht you already have...only thing I might suggest:..In spite of how much I like the 2 chord prog here...you really need to vary the prog or key somewhere along the line to kick this one up to its potential...sounds like Bm - Em all then way..maybe a move to Am-Dm for a little bridge section would do the trick....anyway...its dm good listening anyway and gotta say I enjoyed this big time....keep it going....Ed
Hey Ed...thanks for coming by and listening...i appreciate your comments and i've been thinking of several variations some complicated and some some subtle..i was also thinking about transposing this piece and add another dynamic all together with a sax solo then bringing it back around...trouble is i think too much istead of letting the song come to me...what ends up happening is, i shelve it...but i sure appreciate the suggestion...i guess i will bring it back up for more consideration then...i'm glad you liked the basic idea
hey Mahloo13...thanks for coming by and checking out the track!!! so you know about Dre's Kush? LOL actually the artist said he wrote that verse to the kush track...i just happened to have a bunch of tracks with no lyrics so i just added it this....i appreciate the comment and i will certainly be by to check you out...
Hey Carlos..way smooth and groovy man! I like the way you've given a contemporary vibrant slant to this piece,it's almost an electro jazz feel but with heavy emphasis on the funky side,there's also plenty of potential for a vocal inclusion as well...cracking tune,hot and modern! cheers Dave
Hey Dave, first off its a real pleasure to meet you as i am a fellow bass player myself and i've had the good fortune of listening to your work...thanks for stopping by and commenting...appreciate the input especially from an artist of your caliber..much respect
Hey Carlos.....Great groove man!...I have to say straight up that I'm really envious of people that can create Pop music(good Pop music that is! lol) and this number is no exception...A professional sounding track that'll attract a lot of vocalists I'm thinking....When listening to this I'm hearing the possible template for a hit single..this never occurs when I'm listening to my own music! LOL...obviously you've been travelling on the musical river for a long time and you've seen a lot of bridges,excellent work! cheers Dave
Carlos, I've actually been LOOKING for a producer who knows how to do Motown - the sound I've been looking for is Nutown: a 2013 version of Holland/Dozier/Holland with some Sawyer, Wonder and Robinson in places. Contact me straightaway:
OK Carlos you now got some melody and lyrics from me to this... I've uploaded my first attempt at this one, over on my profile! The title is
JEALOUS GIRL
I need to clip some silence off the end, not sure how it got there, lol... but from start to finish the rest of the song's intact, and the melody is kind of interesting...
Dangerous-ass lyrics though (blushes, runs away). This is NOT usually me. I'm nice. I'm a Libra.
But I got a lot of Scorpio in me, so... maybe those lyrics are me every once in a while... but not a side of me I like! Still, a lot of girls will relate to this... hope u like...
ok..so i got to listen...and i really like the idea...we now have to go for quality...im very impressed with your imagination..lol and i wont comment on the rest but i have tons of tracks and ideas as i've been doing this for a while..of course you did that really quick and i like that..you're kind of a vocal chameleon so you could probably do almost anything...so scroll through what i have posted and ill do the same.i believe we could do some cool things if you're down...it is a real pleasure sharing ideas with you...respectfully
Hey Ramey Rae... thanks for coming by and taking a listen...sometimes i do tracks just for fun..and i personally feel that i have to put something in the air for him from time to time...you feel me?.. i appreciate you taking the time to comment...talk soon
Great tune. I'm listening to this and thinking it's a shame that Will Smith hasn't posted any accapellas because that's the sort of feeling i'm getting from this.
Any rapper out there would be foolish not to jump on this one. So on the downside, i guess that means Vanilla Ice aint gonna show up. Everyone knows he's foolish anyway.
Thanks for sharing your sounds mate.
FR
Hey FR..there is one thing that i know for sure..you are a very supportive artist..and youi noticed that you are always cruising around listening to other genres...even if it may not be something you're personally into ...which means something else... you appreciate good music and you have a mind of a true artist...i'm glad to have met you here on this site...and i truly hope we get to collaborate on something...you know how you have a ton of ideas just sitting...some you just simply forget about? thats why im posting tracks with numbers...this track is about 5 years old so im posting them...never know who might get some use you know?
again thanks for dropping by to lend an ear my friend
I love the groove you have created here. Really very good indeed. Hope you find something to go over the top of it. It deserves a good vocal or an excellent spoken word (not that know anything at all about this genre - I'm well out of my comfort zone here!!). Good luck with it. I love it.
Hey Richie...thanks for stoppong by and checking the track out..I appreciate the comment man and i love the stuff you abd P.E. are putting out...i got a lot of different ideas i'm trying and a surplus of things ill probably just turn into loops and share them here....Talk to you soon
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The ending was a bit strange, haha, but it was different and that is good :) Another terrific song by two great artists.
Well done.
Bear
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on aint nobody lovin me but you ft patricia edwards by carlosnble
Damage, the voice of Patricia slightly is too far back, in my opinion. Nevertheless it is a good track .... very tendance "Dance" .... Great Job my Friend, although the end is missed a little .... evidence that I have been to the end Hahaha!
Good weekend ....
Dan
on doin the damn thing by carlosnble
Vraiment bon .... oups sorry .... really good. The tempo, to balance very well but a bit repetitive. You should find a nice soulful voice, to wrap all this, and perhaps follow the advice of Ed below.
This does not detract from the quality of the track of course ....
Dan
Hope all is well with you...Thank you for coming by and listening...this is and old idea from a few years ago...I have a very bad habit of starting projects and shelving them when i think too much about them.. i have several concepts in mind and i certainly agree with both Ed and yourself about the repetitive nature of the track...but i appreciate that the general consensus is that the track has potential.. Again thanks Dan for stopping by..your comment is very helpful
Peace
on doin the damn thing by carlosnble
Peace!
on doin the damn thing by carlosnble
The drive, the vibe, the energy...I can hear this on a Jazz CD!
I think the only thing that seemed to take away a bit was that hi hat hit throughout (not the closed one)? It happens too much for me. But that's just me! And the solo, right on!
This is awesome! Thanks for the DL :-)
Thanks for coming by and commenting on the track...this track has been on the shelf for a couple of years now and i was going through my files and ran across this..yeah i meant to go through drum track and level some parts but got distracted (my daughter hounding me for cash)!!lol so i forgot to fix it before i uploaded it...anyway i'm glad you liked the idea and you are certainly welcome for the download...by the way i have that last track finished and will upload with the DL...i also have an idea for one of your pellas that will be a suprise as i will not microwave this one.as your vocals for this particular track moved and inspired me to put some real work into this!! anyway...stayed tuned!!
Peace and hair grease!!
on doin the damn thing by carlosnble
Respect
Carlos @ Headrush
on lets ride by carlosnble
on idea 104 by carlosnble
ha! love the outro click!
on kush preview Ft RaRCharm by carlosnble
Cool sounding track though! I like how you've incorporated those synths in the background and that choir really adds a different and dark vibe.
I like the mix as well..it bounces nicely. To bad it's so short!
Very good effort!
Peace
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Peace
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on City Drive Preview by carlosnble
on I Like It Ft StephanieKey by carlosnble
Dan
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Keep it up, mah man.
Scott
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So many ideas for a new Diana Ross & The Supremes sound with new songs I can't count them all!
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JEALOUS GIRL
I need to clip some silence off the end, not sure how it got there, lol... but from start to finish the rest of the song's intact, and the melody is kind of interesting...
Dangerous-ass lyrics though (blushes, runs away). This is NOT usually me. I'm nice. I'm a Libra.
But I got a lot of Scorpio in me, so... maybe those lyrics are me every once in a while... but not a side of me I like! Still, a lot of girls will relate to this... hope u like...
Peace...and hair grease!!
on blood on the dance floor M Jackson cover by carlosnble
There is nothing to critique here. This is fabulous material from start to finish, an absolute professional job.
I guess if I had to sum it up I would say it was flawless. My only complaint was it was too short, hahaha.
I want more!!!
Outstanding effort my friend.
Bear
Peace
on Pop Logic 4 by carlosnble
Peace
on blood on the dance floor M Jackson cover by carlosnble
Love it!
Keep it up(;
Glad you stopped by I'll be stopping by more often,
-Ramey Rae
Peace
on idea 99 by carlosnble
Any rapper out there would be foolish not to jump on this one. So on the downside, i guess that means Vanilla Ice aint gonna show up. Everyone knows he's foolish anyway.
Thanks for sharing your sounds mate.
FR
again thanks for dropping by to lend an ear my friend
Peace..and mad respect!
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Richie
Peace
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